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    Write To This Picture (IV)

    I came across this picture and thought it would be interesting for Week IV of this forum. Let's see what you all can do with it...

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    A Scarlet Eye watchs the Stage
    Grins at the performer with sinistar intent
    Yet she is Unafraid , committed to her gift
    Mocking the Fiery Sky with her art
    Perfection for her is attainble , it is No Myth
    It is One with her , her movement , her soul
    Thus she begins the Flight into the unknown
    THe sacrifice of Perfection into Fear
    The Pilgrimage she has prepared for , lived for
    and Possibly dies for , The Verdict is soon
    The Answers to the forbidden questions near
    The unsighted masses wait in unheard anticipation
    1000 years of anguish , whisped away in the blink of an eye
    Overcome by Beauty and Truth
    Washed away by Fascination and Faith
    Cleansed , Cleared away , The Ferocious Fire
    Now a Sparkling Rose Petal , feeding the dancers frenzy
    Opening the Door , the Void , The Portal
    Unlocking the Gate , It has begun , It has Started
    The Transformation , The Journey , The Voyage
    Destination Unknown yet teetering on the ledge of insanity
    But not falling ............... Never Falling , ........... Never Fall.


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    Nice Pic...This Is What I See...

    The Dark Skies Of Her Fulfilled Mind Can Only Portray A Certain Discomfort..
    Entertaing Thousands Can Hold A Personal Anger, On The Preying Eyes Of A Bliss Hunter..
    She Dances Looking To The Skies But Mind Is Red With Rage...She Dances To Escape Her Worries..
    No-one Can Pass Judgement, No-one Can Harm Her, She Is One With The Earth And Sky As She Flurries..
    A World Of Trouble Surrounds Her But Yet She Is Looking So Peaceful And Calm..
    Blocking Out Mental Images Of Failure, She Dances To The Music As Sweetly As Balm..
    Looking So Natural, The Skies Open Up...Its Is Not The Anger And Rage Of The World...But Her Own..
    Dancing To Escape Her Own Troubles...This Is The Only Thing She Knows...This Is Her Home..
    Regretful Feeling As The Body Moves, Glides Along The Red Mist Of Portraying Silence..
    There She Goes...Flying Without A Care In The World...Past Trouble's Been Displaying Violence..
    How Can She Be Angry? She Is Doing What She Loves...She Dances With Elegance..
    In A Society Of Hate, She Gets Her Message Across With A Certain Amount Of Mellowness..
    Proving The World Wrong...Not Everyone Can Hate, No Need To Hear Just Watch And Believe..
    Amazingly Incredible The Movement Is Uncapturable As She Decends From The Skies..
    Can It Be A Blessing In Disguise...Just Take I Deep, Long Stare And Take A Look Inside..
    With All Your Anger There's A Peaceful Person Inside Waiting To Calm The Mood..
    Dont Get Involved With Hate Knowing This Is Inside...Feast On It Like It Was Food..
    Let Her Actions Do The Talking...Coz After All Words Only Mean Something Up To A Certain Extent..
    Actions Speak Louder Than Words...Act Out On This And Then Perhaps A Dancing Angel Will Decend..

    I Just Let It Flow As It Came Out...No Editing...No Nothing...This Was A Deep Picture To Write To
    Phrase One.

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    She dances among her beauty, her aura, her being surounds her
    The pains shed by all things irrelevant, are unable to surmount her

    She moves within the music, its as if it plays to her step
    As she begins to move in grace she is all that is left

    Shes masked behind her splender, to those unknown it is her being
    The reddened eyes of fury though, is all shes capable of seeing

    She dances for the love, the pain, the strife, all of her consistency
    She moves to the bass of her beating heart, the music, simply adds vibrancy

    Each toed step is a step away from past pain and still moves her closer to more
    The earthy pose her body forms reveals her bodies aching core

    The dress flowing from her body, covers past wounds well, it adds to the mask
    Her eyes played up in colored hughes more advently complete the task

    When asked, the color of her eyes she simply is able to state
    My dance my movements, my bleating heart is the color my eyes shall take

    Blood shot they peruse the theater, her pain apparent but its depths remain unknown
    As the emotionful music plays her face loses grace, the pain is finally shown

    The tears fall from her hurting eyes as she dances the theater grows blurry
    The steps still are performed theyre part of her nature, they depict each feeling of fury

    The music ceases, as pain increases, the final bow is taken
    She walks from the stage, still full of rage, the origin of her pain stands unshaken

    Her shoes slipped from her feet, her dress from her body she stands in bare truth
    As clothes are slipped on, her eyes become grey, she covers every evident piece of proof

    jus what i got from it....kinda took off but uh oh well lol
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    *nice pic tho, evoked alot of emotion*

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    Lost In her Moment, Lost in Love
    Lost In Memories, Lost up above
    Lost All Feeling, Lost all Touch
    Lost all Greed, Lost all Fuss

    The Redness of Morning Is Here
    The Redness of Love brings her Near
    The Redness Of Hate Fades Away
    The Redness in her Heart, Will always Stay

    Dancing in the Morning, Dancing in The Night
    Dancing With No Fear, Shes Blind at Sight
    Dancing With Flowers, Dancing With Tears
    Dancing With Danger, Only Makes Things Clear

    Free With Passion, Free With Emotion
    Free With Laughter, Free With Devotion
    Free With Smiles, Free With Needs
    And Just To think, It was all a Dream



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    A fortress of reassurence and our seclusion from gloom/
    A 266 day gestation an embryonic state of elation in total isolation/
    A human creation secure from wordly frustration and wicked temptations/
    A sanctuary where our soul is free to dance and embrace a spiritual romance/
    A whimsicle ballet of innocense without any trace of self relevance/
    Completly in tune with the rhythmic beat of a Mother's heart/
    Surrounded by the knowledge that GOD never ment to impart/
    Alive and aware... can you remember this life with no despair?/
    Such a devine affair, to which nothing outside can ever compare/
    We're free in her womb, yet when born we're confined to a tomb/
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    Die For This Year Hindsight Claims
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    Feeling From Me Each Step Closer
    Is Another Step Away Im Only Trying
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    my first rhetorical insight
    i just let it flow no editing

    freedom in a land full of dread
    with clouds that cry tears of red
    searchin for your fears
    while they constantly near
    sneaking up behind you
    and you don't know what to do
    here they come, its to late
    its time for you to meet your fate
    you stop to turn and face your villian
    but can't take your eyes off all the killin'
    slowly your life flashes before your eyes
    then you wake from your dream as your idol dies
    you look down to see the blood soaked knife
    and can't believe you've taken a life
    you turn the knife around, handle out
    and stab yourself with a shout
    you couldn't live with the sin you comited
    as you bleed into the seater that your mother knitted

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    Her evil spirit is rising above
    As she is dancing for the one she loves
    Her body is moving, swift as a feather
    She's got many people regretting, wishing they had met her
    Red is a sign of power, love, and hate
    This woman has god on her side, deciding her fate
    She can hear soft whispers in the background, calling her name
    Souls tellin her that shes gonna rise to fame
    Hidden behind the heavy mist, she stumbles
    Caused by her overwhelming amount of hopes and troubles
    She knows exactly what she wants, shes got it in her thoughts
    Shes 100% natural, and she can't be bought
    She's so committed to this form of art
    She's gonna go far, because her passion is straight from her heart

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    Love..You see it in stories or on the movie screen/
    It's funny how people act you would think thats not the only place it'd be seen/
    People talk about where's the love then support the war/
    Maybe not that drastic..They go see a gore movie then go back for more/
    Hate..It comes up too often why can't love be like this/
    Arguments get people killed for there families to miss/
    But it's ok as long as people ask where is the love/
    So for a shining moment we look like were sent with love from god above/
    When i look at this picture I think of the world to date/
    The woman being the love..Everything else being the hate/

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    a dance in hell to escape pain and demise
    to out step and out twirl her incredible lies
    a ballerina with a gown of a trillion fears
    and a face that rains a million tears
    one girl alone in a terrible dream
    haunting desires that make the clouds scream
    scream and scream and the dye red with the blood
    the blood of the cursed, the cut and the loved
    while growing intense the blood starts to pour
    drowning the dancer, the dreams, and much more-*-

    First poem in a lil over 3 weeks. sorry if a lil rusty.

    Last edited by fastforwords; July 14th, 2003 at 01:42 PM
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    Re: Write To This Picture (IV)

    She dances along graceful and free
    But when she looks at herself she just cant see
    Always a failure in her own mind
    Deep down inside she just cant find
    Always looking for how to be best
    Always wanting to be just like the rest
    Never wanting to be number two
    If she doesnt do perfect then wat does she do
    Always worried about wat others think
    Always worrying she's now on the brink
    Ready to crack all she sees is red
    She looks back again and it was all in her head
    No bad things are coming she is now freaking out
    That lake of blood around is now just a drought
    A dried up dull world now because of her thoughts
    Inside her twisted mind her self consience now rots
    Ripping and tearing at her lifes twisted soul
    She feels torn and ditches it down that dark hole
    She could be the best, everyone can see
    But the person that should see it most doesnt believe
    Only her self can believe that she is graceful and sweet
    She just needs to jump away and fly on her feet

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    Originally posted by Mis.Tique
    umm sorry this is such a freepost but when are last weeks things getting voted on or whatever?theyre from like 2 weeks ago...
    sorry for freepostin
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    we're really in fact busy dealing with our cycles of life right now and our scheds couldnt really meet and me myself have been busy with stuff...the chosen works from Week III wil be up prolly within this week...i think this one have been open for about 2 weeks now so im gonna close it and have a new picture ready...
    the works to be chosen on week IV...is gonna be soon too...

    SOrry for the inconvenience.

    HIt me up a pm if u need something or just questions.

    my apologies.

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