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Thread: B.R.E. Presents: "Watching my Back"

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    B.R.E. Presents: "Watching my Back"

    Who'd have known that drug lords feelings are so sensitive?//
    All I did was tell him that a small order of weed wasn't so imperative//
    His face got red and his kunckles began to turn white//
    I saw the danger just in time and in fright I ran into the night//
    Hours later there were already rumors i was dead//
    The lord was so engraged he put a price on my head//
    Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally//
    I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me//
    Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways//
    Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze//
    I can almost feel the cross hair as they graze acorss my spine//
    The silk of my coffin glance my face as I come near my time//
    The shadow becomes my friend, but it becomes my enemy//
    A place to reconcile but a place where a bullet waits for me//
    A red hot bitch that can rip through my soul and my heart//
    The kind of thing that can split a scalp and give new meaning to "hair part"//
    Streetlights are a sign saying "stay Away" as I creep along//
    Every listening for that gun shot, aka the Sniper's Song//
    Was that movement, no, now im getting paranoid//
    In everything lurks my death, something else to avoid//
    My friends and family are nonexistent, I am fending for myself//
    Fuck fame and wealth...im stuck fending for me, pride up on the shelf//
    A jungle of pavement, dumpsters and buildings my place to hide//
    The only place where I can have some safety as I cry inside//
    I creep up the street, breathing with baited breath//
    There the lord was, muzzle glinting, in his eyes were my death


    feedback pleez ill return the favor
    ps: this was SS verse
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    Gangsta One
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    Man, this shi' is pretty good...definitely realistic...pure gangsta shi'...I give it a 8/10. Stayed on topic, and flowed. Could ya check out mine, dawg?

    "Real Life" -Gangsta One
    And if ya really want to, this one...it's not that great I persenollay think...
    "Go Gangsta on the Bitch" -Gangsta One

    Thx, feedback is great...

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    nice shyt, i agree its pure gangsta shyt, keep it up..
    "got a warning lable tattooed on my back, says'' who ever talk shit will be glued to my gat"


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    Usually not into the gangsta scheme ..but A2Z you brought it to the table and dealt...blazin track here man...nice setup

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    i neva checked out this opem mic shit, but that was prti dope, seemed realistik.... jus' all flowed nice...
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