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    write to this picture (III)

    here is something i dig up...when i first saw this ...it really caught my eye and thought this was really interesting...

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    she
    it is only she who can maintain the power,
    she who holds the pain of the world on her shoulders,
    if man were to attain this pain our world would devour,
    see its the fragileness and softness that she displays,
    only she may be empowered with the strength,
    for man doesnt care for goodness, only praise,
    and she has a shoulder for man to lean on within arms reach,
    for the phase of time where man admits he needs his woman,
    still she is the bullet placed within his preech,
    and she is the love in the heart of every true man,
    she is the ultimate teacher of everything true on earth,
    underestimated at times she roars to prove she is superior,
    for only she can create a man only she can give birth,
    but only man can mistreat her, he is the only one who can make her inferior
    so as lesson to man, dont manipulate your goddess for she truly is heavenly divine,
    for she is in every man, she is mans spine

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    thoughts of my own taking over my body
    like a blanket they are consuming me
    forcing me to sweat and everyone thought begins to get contagious
    influencing the next
    i honestly cant explain this natural phenomenom
    to some of you
    a few will understand directly where im coming from, literally
    its like karma from the third eye looking behind you
    your vision becomes totally clear
    and you lose all real grips of reality
    and the world you can longer hear
    most of you will read this and fear me for speaking of this
    but us elite few can form an unspoken bond between us
    if your not feeling this
    than your not getting near your full potential, your not even close
    this place im speaking of is full of undescriptive details that go unseen and go forever forgotten
    i really hope i can get through to just a few of you
    cause this place is deep down inside in all of us
    it took me 20 years just to begin to realize this
    im not talking about rapping, im talking about an extended reality among us
    where you can categorize and question everything around us
    be able to develop your own thoughts about whats going on around us
    the great thinkers have been dead for a very long while now
    but i feel you are really reading a passage by one of the next great ones, present among us
    im not being deluisional
    and i have no thoughts of becoming wealthy or famous
    fame lays with in your heart
    and when your real people can really sense that
    some of you will take this the wrong way
    and say "man can you believe this?", this dudes crazy
    but for real, just think about what im trying to reveal to you
    i just realized that we need to reach a point where we grow up and never llok back; i know its a cliche but im trying to take you deeper into that
    ive reached my point and i have acepted that
    we talk about change and what we cant stand to deal with
    but unlike the great men that have died before us
    to many of us are afraid to go explore and stand up for what we believe in
    i wsh i could take all of you to this place
    and leave you
    Last edited by Dadi Kewl; July 3rd, 2003 at 09:24 AM

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    A New Born, Protected From The Evil..
    There She Is, Waiting On His Presence..
    Will He Be Good?, I Think He Will..
    After All, He Has No Bad Influence..

    Who Are You, Why Are You Here..
    Who Is She, Can You Trust Her..
    Yes, There Is No Need For Fear..
    Take Her Hand, She Will Guide You Near..

    Her Marvellous Creation, Children Watch..
    Astounded By Her Powers, Children Smile..
    Eager To Meet The Man, Children Scratch..
    When Is He Coming Woman, Chidren Cry..

    What Will He Do, Why Is He Born..
    Where Will He Stay, Is He Safe..
    He Is Coming, His Egg Is Torn..
    Am I Witnessing This, Is It Fake..

    The Fragile Woman Has Produced Once Again..
    A Strong Presence She Has, Look For Yourself..
    Weak In Posture, Strong In Mind And No Pretend..
    But Man From An Egg, How Can This Make Sense..
    Phrase One.

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    She Looks Like Fiona Apple On Crack In Hell.....Okay.....

    Emotionally In A Million Pieces Unsure
    Of Whats Upon The Horizion Do You
    Wish Death For Me For The Fact I Love
    You But Its Not Providin For A Distance
    You Cant See It Love Takes Time To Hatch
    And Then Remix Even If Paths Cross And
    You Click All In Sequence A Wrinkle In Time
    Can Bring Forth A Monkey Wrench Into It All
    Forreal Dizziness Like Lauren Hills My Perspective
    On The Issue Drug Free The Heart Cares More
    Than Youll Ever Know Its Often Misused My
    Minds The Prison And Ive Grown Tired Of
    Playin Cell Games Scratchin Marks On The Walls
    But Is It Pearly Gates Or Hells Flames The Roofs
    On Fire And The Skys Underwater Miss W Im Still
    Writing Songs For Your Daughter Loves All I Offer
    Im Only Geting Older And Id Enjoy Helping Her
    Support The Worlds Weight On Her Shoulders Let
    Her Work Her Magic And Handle Things To The Best
    Of Her Abilities The Seperations Killin Me Forever
    Pains Instilled In Me Real As Can Be

    This Pick Off the Hook Shhiznit Your The
    Shiznit Back To Work Now Peace

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    Seclusion comes to end once more
    Revolution breeds
    Thus is knowledge born
    The newborn being will plant life's seeds
    Then will the man have Earth explored
    And travel from the Earth's blue sky
    To the planet's melting core
    And then the man will rise
    And hope to never fall
    But man forgot without her
    Life woudn't be at all

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    Mankind from the start of our time has tried to redifine the gracious devine/
    Seeking to place ourself high in his eye, by reverse engineering his own design/
    From human stem-cell re-search to decimation of-his glorious-church/
    Spiritualy desolete and engulfed by a wasteland or pure regret/
    We focus and redirect instead of basking in heavens silhouette/
    We issue technologies instead of appologies too caught up in our own ideologies/
    Biotechnology's and new methodologies conflicting with biblical anthologies/
    We're playing creator for the world-to-see, cloning and straddling the line along blasphmy/
    We claim our intent is purley real, but what about the innocense that we kill/
    Some answers he neva meant to reveal, embeded in DNA and concealed/
    This image is so surreal, an altered state of birth opened the pages of a new age ordeal/
    Science exhonerted by the delusion and mental confusion that life has no spiritual conclusion/
    An idea as powerful as nuclear fussion, unleashing a demonic army's intrusion/
    The act of un-natural birth, is a deterioration to a womans God given-worth/
    The 'MOTHER' is an Icon, not only for symbolence, but the key to our very own existance/
    The beholder of the never changing mitochondria DNA, from this grand design humans should never stray/
    Unlocking evils in endless ways, growing in labratory trays, injecting seed into synthetic eggs/
    For our childrens innocense I bend to my knee's and pray...

    AS "DARKNESS" OBSCURES "THE ETERNAL SON RAY"S".../


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    cracked the shell of the heart...
    the outter healing is scabbed...
    we stepped out of the dark...
    and saw a man torn in half...
    we unlatched the skies ground...
    and took off the curtains clouds...
    to let the raindrops fall down...
    and make the sunset real loud...
    the zombie sagged his pants...
    made utters barely coherent...
    and then god had to ask...

    when the the blood will take the
    purity to a ghoulish dissapearance...
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    Intriguing look at the picture *scrolls down* babygurl. I liked what you got out of it. Something different indeed. And quite truthful in many senses too.

    addlibb - my back is aching. But i'll carry on reading...

    Most intriguing libbeh. I can vaguely feel where you got what you wrote this picture. But can't put my finger on it. There is another theory that the picture inspired you to write about what you wrote about, rather than writing to the picture, which is good.

    Nicely done libb.

    mystik mind - *applauds*. Heh. It was kind of amusing, yet also serious. You took a slightly more straightforward look at this picture, and 'dug' from there. And came up with some real niceness. Enjoyed reading that. A lot. Really grabbed the reader and didn't let got for a second. Structured well, which usually takes an edge when writing to a picture..but nope, this one had no edge taken off it at all...you bought it together very well.


    I'll respond to the rest later. But my back is aching, and i think i should take these in moderation (no pun...)..
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    as the clouds come closer the pains evidence is shown
    this birth,this existence is misunderstood but known
    the conceptions unclear, the contemplations aplenty
    never acurately described,it needs detail,to say bluntly
    entangled in the web of lust--attraction evident but is there more
    is physicality all thats apparent,is physical connection all in store
    can they connect mentaly as well or is the relationship short-lived
    can he provide spiritual stabilty or is his body all he can give
    can she let go of all her qualms n learn to appreciate him wholistically
    does he realize she takes control are their intentions thought out realistically
    as their love bursts from the evil perils of the precommitment deliberations
    they consider once again their feelings,the storm breaks n they begin their collaboration

    blah...hmm wutever this was quick jus what i got from this i suppose whatever....

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    Good job to everyone who wrote to this. We will be judging them all later and post up our top 3. Hopefully, this upcoming week will have a better show out though.

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