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Thread: B.R.E. Presents: "Memory Lane"

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    B.R.E. Presents: "Memory Lane"

    Picture this: A young white boy wet behind ears//
    Couldnt face his fears of public rapping, couldnt fight the tears//
    A nervous young man with the fear humiliation//
    Lost all concentration when he felt the stare's penetration//
    Lost all will and all hope of fame//
    All will to write rhymes, will to play the game//
    Heard of a sanctum for rappers from a friend down the street//
    Made a beat back for home and reclaimed his feet//
    He thought he could massacre any fool who dared to go//
    But his first two battles his opponents no showed...now hes 2-0//
    He would smile whenevr he looked at his score, he little teeth would gleam//
    But his record began plummeting, soon he was 2-15//
    He quit from there too, he couldn't the fact//
    That he needed to buckle down if he wanted his rep back//
    So he studied how the best did it, learned of metaphors//
    Learned of word play, multis, shit he'd never heard before//
    Upped his vocab to the point where he could distinguish himself//
    Practiced hours a day and he gained intelectual wealth//
    But now the moment came to have his day//
    So what people would say when he beat Hootie2k//
    A nervous heart beat was in his chest as he tuped those words//
    Using every tool he had ever seen or ever heard//
    Three days of waiting finally told him the outcome//
    The final score was 5-2...the little boy had won//
    The boy decided that he needed a crew, whether they dominate or bust//
    No one wanted him becuz of his record, so he created InFumUz//
    3-15, not a happy or a bragging record but he proud nonetheless//
    Now he knew for a fact he could be the best//
    He started calling out vets, occasionally new-b for some repetiton//
    4-15 now, he was rising into the elite competition//
    1-N-Gone called him out, it was hit latest challenge//
    A respected vet with his punches, flows and metas all in balance//
    He poured his soul into that verse, he thought of vicous things to type//
    1-N-Gone posted his verse that same night and his verse was just as tight//
    Four days of waiting, the boy almost never left the screen//
    He had tried so hard, if he lost he would have to scream//
    The votes trickled from vets with input, both good and bad//
    Soon it was 4-4, and a vet voted and the match was had//
    5-4, the final score it took a second to realize//
    That he won and beat the vet, a tear leaked from his eye//
    InFumUz had flopped, but he found that saw how good he could be//
    The Productions wanted him, but he said fuck, I roll with B.R.E.//
    He battled some other people, soon he had won five straight//
    Yet he kept elevating, his formats looking great//
    So thats where he stands, rolling eith BRE//
    The story you have just heard was of me, A2Z//

    That was in honor of my 1000th post, and was a look back on my rap battles.com history...thank you for reading it
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    Rock you in the Face Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic's Avatar
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    this was the most coolest, personal, and hottest verse i have read from you. It was to me, one of ya best drops. shit now i can't wait for post 1000. this was a good drop. this was very heartfelt.
    B.R.E 4 ever

    ps:check my piece called The Lonesome(need a friend)
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    come on pleez dont sleep on this...this a memorable occasion
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    Bad flow. Bad rhyming. Good story. Sometimes its the story that counts though. I guess the other things dont matter unless its audio anyway. Good song.

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    actually the flow is perfect if ya find he beat i was working on...kinda like "Suicide Letters" by Tech N9ne..i read through it 3 times to make shure it flowed
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    Could I aquire the beat somewhere on the internet? Anything is better with a beat.

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    man its a shame this was never eplied to...ups
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    yo i like this dawg
    7/10
    the story won it

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    nice song, story it was tight

    could you rat mine
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