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Thread: "I dont know" by Shiznit

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    damn this shit was good
    i enjoyed it through the whole thing
    never seen anybody write that much though
    couldnt belive it

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    You're The Dopest Of Dope In Dopeland...

    This Peice Was Dope..

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    thats alot of wrting goin on......daaaaaaaamn.....but even though it took 3 years to read it was still nice as fuck. nice piece
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    WoW !!! That was pretty intense. Great imagery that provoked powerful feeling at least for me. Sounds like you'll move on though , as life and love always do. Glad I took the time to read your peice.

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    great

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    Originally posted by Hyper Shadow
    great
    ^ You are one of the dumbest people to stumble upon RB.com. All you did was say 'great' as Masta D and I banned you for it. Thinking you'd learn your lesson, I didn't IP ban you so you could have another chance. What do you do? Make another name and do the same shit. You are a moron and are now IP Banned.

    Great.

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    ^^ lol... this was a real nice piece gurl... you show a lot of talent... good thing im workin with ya then huh lol... everybody already broke it down soo theres nada left for me to do hehe... stay up gurlie...

    -lady

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    that shit was good u did pretty good

    i enjoyed it from start to finish i hope keep doin this

    cause u got talent

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    YAY!.......more replies...*clapping hands* "hercules! HErcules!"

    *is retarded*

    hmmm...more ppl to thank again....*excited*

    here you go...

    Enoch a.k.a. Legendary..i really appreciate that good feedback...

    The End...*glares* stop freeposting on my thread...LOL..jp

    Understatement...very well thank you Pat...wow one of the best writers ive seen on here liked my long ass poem...LOL..glad u liked it

    J.K.O....i think u really really liked my poem..its obvious cuz u replied to it twice.....hehe...and thanks a lot man!

    Sureal..whats with u dope that aint no dope would really doper the dopest dope ever?? ahhhhhh.....hehehe im not dope...U IS!...but anyways...thanks for that 'dope' reply!

    Hyper Shadow..."great." "nice shit yo!" *shakes head*...Thanks The End!!!

    Lady Sexstacy...hey ShA!....thanks gurl...oh and yeah...im gonna email bout all the poems u sent me..ill see what i can do...thanks once again!

    ......my poetry successfully shared... <---dope!

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    yo how u write wot i woz thinkin? jus bout every line rite der reach me in sum way, u a good writter! but only one bit confused me tha bit bout "11 cds" eggsplain?? keep up ur writtin ur good at it. peace
    ~roX~

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    Originally posted by The End


    ^ Hmm.. thats a lie considering I did an IP check and your other alias is Legendary and you respond to lots of poems on here..
    What's that all about? Legendary's usually okay here. Nothing to be ashamed of. Gives good replies n all that.

    *scratches head*...

    Oh well, i can see the reasons...but maybe someone would highlight which one of them it is...(!)...
    Last edited by Varentao; July 4th, 2003 at 07:17 PM
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    I could've swore i replied to this before.

    I guess i must've read it but was in too much of a rush to reply to it or something.



    So here it is, Shizzy...


    Written damn well. You seemed to cruise through the piece word by word...it kept me reading all the way through. You really got into the 'situation' and gave us a brief but important exploration into it. Imagery was subtle yet well done.

    Though i felt the rhyme scene and how it was built up too was at times rigid. And made the flow slightly akward. that didn't matter much at all.

    Also the lenght of the lines struck me as being too long at first sight. But the way it was written, as i read through it...it not only ceased to bother me..but i saw it becoming part of the piece. Part of how the piece was meant to be. You know, the 'art' of the piece in a way. Done like that on purpose for artistic reasons...

    ..anyway, that's enough said from me. I enjoyed this, you seem comfortable with a 'pen' (or keyboard) judging from this piece alone...

    ...resp...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    Originally posted by shiznit

    The End...*glares* stop freeposting on my thread...LOL..jp
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    Hyper Shadow..."great." "nice shit yo!" *shakes head*...Thanks The End!!!

    Make up your mind. If I didn't freepost than that fool wouldn't have been banned. *sigh* Women.


    Varentao.. I do an IP check with almost ever newbie I see to check and see if they are someone else under a different alias. I did a check on Enoch and that's how I saw that it was Legendary. Standard protocol my friend.

    - The End -

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    Originally posted by The End



    feepost


    i don't know what that means brandon...lol......anywayz.....hows
    it going Jen...ha ha ha......but seriously.....i really don't read alot
    of poems and shit....but someone told me to peep this....and i'm
    glad i did.....ur vocab was on point......ur feelings were deep....i
    can tell u kinda poured ur heart into this.....ur probably layed in
    bed.....tears coming down your eyes....while writing this piece....i
    wouldn't doubt if u did.....cuz like i said....it was deep.....good job
    Jen.....and i'm glad to see your poems are better than your jokes..
    lol......i'll holla...........peace

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    Originally posted by lil_roxy
    but only one bit confused me tha bit bout "11 cds" eggsplain??

    alright in 718 miles there would be 11 hours and something something...

    here goes the breakdown...

    mylife (9:46:22 PM): hmm... 11 hrs = 660 minutes
    mylife (9:46:30 PM): an average song is 3 minutes about
    mylife (9:46:38 PM): 100 songs = 300 minutes
    mylife (9:46:45 PM): 200 songs = 600 minutes
    mylife (9:46:47 PM): so..
    mylife (9:46:52 PM): 220 songs later
    mylife (9:47:03 PM): therefore
    mylife (9:47:09 PM): 20 songs per cd
    mylife (9:47:15 PM): 11 cd's
    mylife (9:47:17 PM): and
    mylife (9:47:20 PM): we are together

    ^^^^hope that makes sense... ....so basically when i drive from here to there....i would just gotta have to listen to 11 cds...ahhhhh..*is a dork*...

    hope that answers ur question tho..

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