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    ~Tru My Eyez~(perfection of Music)

    Some shit i did quick...............peep and critisize....


    Tru My eyes i c, the window to the source of so many diverse churning emotions
    like an ocean, an in and out tide typa motion
    shudderin at the notion of truth to, success after no sin
    yeah, I shrug off the "way out" peeps be proposing
    cuz the only freedom that leaves my soul open,
    with the ability to keep hoping
    is the melodious style of wordplay shot out
    through my pen, my old friend
    Me and ink, in sync creating a complete link to each and every thought I think
    even when I'm down and sick, cloudin my mind, the
    truth is still seen
    and I fiend for the dream to be a free being
    music brings the closest feeling to these things-
    A nirvanic state, boom chic boom chic chic……at
    any rate, music..my soul mate
    My 1st cd is self titled THE ARRIVAL
    based on truth about survival up to date
    there's always that perfect song or beat that
    relates the the happiness or hate
    whatever life places on my plate, music provides
    the outlet to escape
    my mind is strong but seems lately I cant hold
    the weight
    I pace, write and retrace as I wait
    handin sh1t over to fate because I've had all the
    sh1t I can take
    Like humpty dumpty, I've broken into too many
    damn pieces
    my intinctive words—the only way to release this
    to ease this, rhymin is my adhesive
    repairin my broken mind, as it silently soothes
    and teaches
    I laid in my bed today and stepped outside my body
    for the first time I REALLY saw ME
    I didn't feel pain and I didn't feel sorry
    the peace I felt was ironically alarming
    Through all the distraught feelings, I feel
    strength in multitudes
    pain weather old or new, its made and molded YOU
    life definitely takes a hold of you, mentally
    blue coding you
    pain infinitely is pursuin you, lettin you get comfy then uprootin you
    guess all you can do is be true to you-


    RuthLeSs Aka Intinct poet...

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    LaDy TrInItY
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    Out of the 2..i like this one a lot better..don't know why..just hit me better....keep ya head up kid..God bless..1..

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    ^^^Well thanks..........ma....maybe u can teach me poetry on different level..lol who knows


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