Whats with all the bull shit we call life today

[THE-EGG-MAN]

(THE-EGG-MAN)

ever notice'd that shit allways happens and the worst time/
faggots go round saying that it wont happen to them there'll be doing just fine/
spend your whole life trying for one thing/
just to stop, think, realise that you cant sing/
spend you whole life working for one gole/
have it snatched, taken, then left feeling that you have no sole/
when it comes around and they alow you to be admitted/
get locked up for some shit you never comitted/
what the hells the deal with the world today/
have faggot ass pussy's doing things the wrong way.

['PercepTion']

an improvement from the last one, (spell GOAL right!), you had some concept and meaning to this one, your vocab certainly improved...for a newbie piece i'd give dis about 5/10,

keep droppin them, the more shit you do, the better you'll get!