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Thread: "CLOGGED THOUGHTS"...short, but i think i got my point across,needs critism

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    "CLOGGED THOUGHTS"...short, but i think i got my point across,needs critism

    internal dismissal of thoughts, stuck in a claught,my own prisoner/
    can't escape,minds cleared like a crystal,insisten myself ta clench the pistol/
    a fist-full of anger aimed in my angle,danglen off the rope like the jaws of an outraged pitbull/
    stuck in a mystical reality thats got my mind crippled like christopher/
    i twist-and-turn and still can't brake away from this shit-that-burns my insides maken me crouch till i miss-my-turn/
    my stomaches churned ta the point that i aint even concerned with the pain that travels from head-ta-stern/
    i pretend-ta-learn my lesson but continue ta mess-with drugs that sting when i ingest-them and burn my intestistines when i digest-and/
    iv tried resten, waken up and seein if my chest dont sting after i rested,but its still there,i feel like theres no way ta correct it/

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    GrYm StYlE
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    Dude if ya keep free postin the
    Mods WIll Bitch Like Assholes
    But rulez are Rulez
    Jus so ya know

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    oh..i didnt know that..whats u mean free posten???..i dont get it..im a newb?

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