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    Write to this Picture (II)

    Well here's the new one. Interesting to say the least...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    an interesting picture indeed, reminds me of mans needs, so i repeat the plee and ask is this the right world for me. If only there was a way to decypher if i'm a rap major, this was a quick keystyle, so i bid you farewell and a better tommorow, later!

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    Silence's deep and must be heard
    Knowledge floats on air of mind
    At first inventions sound absurd
    But time progresses, we are set to find
    That man's wise thoughts are so divine
    To change the world through new ideas
    Is the one goal of mine.

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    Is There A God? If There Is Why Are People Still Kept As Slaves/
    Building A Perfect World And Yet...Nobody Is Perfectly Behaved/
    There Have Been Many A Creation But Yet There Is Nothin But Space/
    Occupied By All Things Of Your Own And Yet What We Dont Do Is A Disgrace/
    People Have Many Ways Of Interrpreting Time But Where Does It Go?/
    Time Is Never-Ending...But For Some...Where Does It Flow?/
    Wrapped Up In Self Indulgence...Time Flys As We Spiral Into A Black Hole/
    We Have So Much Time In This World...How Many Of Us Have Set Life Goals?/
    Leaving Us Thoughtless Of What Lies Ahead And What We Shall Encounter Next/
    Pray To God And Hope That When You Pray For Help He Gives You His Best/
    Music...What A Great Thing...Many Use It To Free Their Minds And Escape Reality/
    Can You Blame Us? Look What Goes On..Murder, Rape, All So Much Brutality/
    So If There Is A God Up In Heaven...How Come There Is Suffering And Not Much Relief?/
    Well Why Dont We Help Out...Its Our Time...Do What You Want...Just Believe/
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    the untold simplicity, to unfold these mysteries,
    of misery and joy, birthed ajoined now apart/
    ironic education, designed for mind levitation,
    equating decimation, equating the desicration/
    and ever paitient is death awaiting to progress,
    ever patient, death awaiting, taking your breath/
    never slaves to a chain, never slaves to a man,
    only slaves to ambitions of surpassing GOD's hands/
    grasping GOD's hands, asking for GOD's presence,
    as...we proceed to speak blasphemy in hell/
    attached to possessions, questioning the stars,
    destination, when made to admire, inspire faith/
    but dire is day that scorns the moon for competition,
    death was man challenging nature for GOD's wisdom/
    for the idea is further than man can even fathom,
    while devil sits back as we bite the apple laughing...
    "It is not the person who looks at you with sparkling eyes when you speak who understands your words; but the one who bends his head down, he is the one who really understands"

    George Herzog

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    Here I sit naked and alone/
    In this seemingly endless unknown/
    What is my purpose why do I roam/
    In search of a reason in search of a home/

    Agravated by the abstract concept of time/
    As technology and atrocity so willingly intertwine/
    Carbon protiens left handed amino acids and biotic enzymes/
    The very essense of his grand design/
    Are we anomalies of random chaos or creations of the devine/
    Is our very existance benign/
    A creature of habit and undifined/
    An ancient plague upon the third of the orbiting nine/
    These answers all locked away from the errosion of tyme/
    Hidden within the mitoichondria of our mothers blood line/

    Binary instructions encoding our thoughts and fueling our mind/
    Generating the instinctual urge to reproduce our own kind/
    Infecting the third of the orbiting nine in a world redefined/
    By it's secular lines and spritual decline combined/
    I look to the heavens for insperation and peace of mind/
    Only in the form of a greater purpose do we find/
    The harmonization of our soul and the misconception of tyme...

    Bounce dog is out, let me know what you think...
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    Gotta say. I'm taken aback by the way each person who's written so far has gotten what they've got out of it. And written in such a deep lying way...

    ...Stark, yours stood out for being short, yet having a fair amount in it.

    Mystik, liked the way you explored it without relenting.

    Prolyfic, yours had a real depth to it. Some of the 'imagery' used was real nice, how you linked certain things together in slighly obscure ways..

    and the cheerfully named bouncydoggdog - quite simple, yet also quite complex. A personal depth that surpassed my comprehension once or twice.]

    And concepts - a nice quick keystyle. I liked that. Not afraid to just write.

    ...resp...
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    This is mind clutter,
    In time, further my sights order.
    Crime borders both the truth and the lies
    I shine over.
    Rights noble
    Never drink while I drive
    I'll die sober.
    Climb over
    The very top of the grime I rhyme over.
    Pried opens
    Silver doors in my life and heart's focus.
    While my heart's broken
    Dig and I try to buy open trust.
    Peace of mind
    Steady climbs pride in my chorus never cry
    Until the day that I die of mind boredness.
    I find ordnance
    Bombing the streets.
    Poor and the weak, nothing to eat.
    Hungry they weep
    Bony physiques.
    The force in fatigues.
    The wars never cease looking at me.
    Look at the trees, the willow weeps
    See the destiny of these things messing with me.
    Only after defeat
    The testing complete.
    My stress is festering.
    Learning to flee
    Taking the heat.
    The same speech
    That was given to me
    In '83.
    I say these things
    From the wind of the pen
    Dictating me.
    Frustrating me,
    The lust and the sin
    Regaining greed.
    Imitating the streets
    Was never favored to me
    Never catered to me.
    Favorite to me or tailored to me.
    Sacred to me
    The art of love;
    Their war is claiming the streets.
    Ridiculous.....
    Entertaining with beats and rhythms
    Gotta sing
    Through this silent bliss;
    A Marine
    Who's mind's a cluttered fist.
    Touching this
    Cycled flow without the studder in
    Something hits.
    Bumping writs from a cluttered mind diced
    After it's sliced open.

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    time passes and time goes
    i sit here unclothed
    my mind is sweeping
    my whole heart is weeping
    cant need things ordered in my head
    praying for a gun with one piece of lead
    darkness fills all around
    matter and garbage spoils all ground
    time flys not enough swift
    the wind changes direction in shift
    i gaze hopelessly lost in my own mess
    wondering if god thinks of me less
    i relize im living in my own little bubble
    trying to block ppl out and away from all my trouble....
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    look at my bum , i am on my knees.
    look at my beard, i created trees.

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    .. It' Still Perfect..

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    endorsement of products make slaves out of men
    the seven deadly sins lead us straight to our death
    the worst one be greed which we witness every day
    point the finger at people..shun the blame my way
    bound up infront of the creator himself
    no where you run, not much time left
    still we plod onwards thru the universe
    and still more products we endorse

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    hmmm...mine is pretty retarded cuz its like 305 am here and i couldnt really think of anythin...but i came up with this...ahhhhh..i hope its good enough....


    doubtful portraits of time's portal
    It evolves around
    tied like an uncivilicized global
    it spins around
    circular patterns of disoriented illusions
    it digs around
    life-like colorblinded memories
    it moves around
    scattered pieces of empty faded strokes
    it blends around
    limited boundaries collapsed of endless disaster
    it forces to fall around
    turning back from reality to fantasy
    it trades around
    Humanity
    It lives around

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    My mind lost amongst the chaos.
    Intertwined, yet he still does not face us.
    Is it art before me or an illusion from my mind.
    He can show the real from what its intertwined.

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    as time passes knowledge is gained while
    wisdom lingers where can I picture my
    frame when its over will it be a suit and
    tie typin or a pen and the tips of my fingers
    thats word so screw your chicks drinks and
    laughs im past the past you dont care for this
    mans health therefore do bad by your damn self
    everyones mind contains a prison prejudice
    and visions loves miles away but those werent
    my intentions to be like this all on my knees like this
    while my minds painting pictures thatll never see its
    work end when im dead and gone over me people
    may begin conversin probaly not though the past is
    passed theres only hope for the future as a husband
    a loser semi thuggin like no smoke no drink no shots
    ill shoot ya if pipe dreams didnt keep building up for
    this music money motivates and separates breeds
    envy an hatred adversaries tossin bullets gotta dodge
    like the matrix fantasy to reality remains a revolving
    door of karma ive had enough and if your plans
    are ucked theres no more drama is there?

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    Reading these, i'm in slight awe. Really letting rip into this picture.
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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