Heavyweight Title:[Champ] Evolve (6-0) vs. Sand (4-1)

[MadMan]

Check in's by Monday
Verses by Tuesday
Voting ends Thursday

No D.R. or hata votes
10-30 lines max
No bolding or quoting of lines to make them stick out

[Sand]

I am in....G'Luck
Evolve....You Herb
You....

[Evolve]

Uh-OH... Im In... This Should Be A Doozy!!!

[Sand]

hi evolve...


We wonder where you got your new name from...
A big bang, college male orgy in the fraternity, thats gay son..
Like ... damn well nevermind i got sidetracked, shit son.
umm madman. you are who you assosciate with right..
add to rules 'dejure will not be voting on this one'...
now on with the battle, determinated no need to hold back...
i admit it. evolve is the truth. and you ain't even gotta
watch baseball, to see sandy KO facts...stupid hoe fag
make it a slow gag, spitting rich, you really shouldn't
your syles so plain, people are skydiving from it...
plummet to your fall, flail, end by landing on some trees,
you think your hot? you MUST be napping through reality...
ending up a casualty battling me, heard sage, inheriting scars
felt determined to keep the title, so you bought a fuckin' car
your stupid, riding coatails, you can't stand up to god...
nor me for the matter, consider this serving belated foo'
and always remember, a fucking failure created you....

DaMn....

If you ain't get the personals...
don't vote...pz

[x-signals]

im sorry but i just wanna know one thing before i vote is this suppose to rhyme or is it one of those things that dont cause if it is i cant find the rhyme scheme can ya show me ?

[Sand]

the scheme is there...
read it...

[Evolve]

good luck sand


man, this sucks!! i have to battle Sand... Damn!!!
i feel bad, I didnt want to have destroy my biggest fan!!//
listen Stan.. this is just for fun, i consider it to be a game
but your taking it too far when i look at your Title and see my Name//
i know im your idol, but thats just a shame.. its not right
the voters are Blind to his Writes, so he uses Evolve as a Spot Light//
dawg, this is not an Open Mic... you know you cant battle as well
cant Walk in my Shoes.. im too Big for Defeat, so i hand Sand L's//
*shhh.. in the backround Eva yells: "Leave My Man Alone!!!"*
High as hell, I Sling this Shot and Kill both these Birds with One Stone//
you should have never shown, didnt want to beat you.. they pushed me
now i have to Gay Bash.. why else would Eva be in love w/ a Pussy??//
i did a search and seen the pic you posted.. Sand.. why'd you do it??
im battling that Geek from "Cant Hardly Wait" w/ Jennifer Love Hewitt!!//
ahhh, screw it... who cares, skills dont depend on the look of your mug
cause God Loves Ugly.. so he must Adore you, looking as ugly as Slug//
your old record gets swept under the rug & your new one arises
everyone knew you would lose but you... Sand must Love Surprises!?!?//

when its all said and done, i really have to admire this kid on his persistance
its just to bad i had to send you back where you came From: Non-Existence
& from now on when it comes to battling me, keep your distance... loser
im always gonna be 3 Times better then you.. [1]Past, [2]Present & [3]Phuture//

***HIS TITLE USE TO SAY "AVE EVOL I" BUT HE CHANGED IT BECAUSE OF MY 2ND BAR** cough cough.. bitch.. cough cough lol

[Sand]

lol..WordZ..Votes?

[TrIfLiN]

I dont know, Evolve Gets my Vote on This shit...
From Start to Finish, All lInes Was Dope..KInda of
Reminded me of me..lol
Nice Battle Yall..



Vote E..

[Evolve]

lol... good look Trife... 1-0

& Sand no beef dawg... just for fun

[Chrit.]

Evolve took this one...
LMFAO at x-signals not seeing sand's ryhme scheme

but evolve took this with better punches and personals....


vote- evolve

[x-signals]

lol yeah i see it now but its long as fuck lmao look


add to rules 'dejure will not be voting on this one'...
now on with the battle, determinated no need to hold back...
i admit it. evolve is the truth. and you ain't even gotta
watch baseball, to see sandy KO facts...stupid hoe fag


i see it now i just think that those are just hella stretched lines and it made the flow horriable

but his punchs were actually doper than evole's i'll hit this up later gotta break it down

[Sand]

DaMniT nO!
0-2...VoTeZ?!

Ohh X. Thanks
For Seeing It.
Those Lines Are
Not Hella' Streched.
It Is The Next Line...
That Is The Scheme...


^ThaTz WoRdZ^

[x-signals]

well okay i think i spent an hour tryna find out ya scheme lol but after i did i thought it made ya verse more complex and intresteding to read plus ya punchs were on the top anyways i dunno everyone has there own opinion but i think sand got this comparin the 2 best lines of each verse

[b]ending up a casualty battling me, heard sage, inheriting scars
felt determined to keep the title, so you bought a fuckin' car[/b


lmao damn that was heat ^^^

i gave ya verse a 7.6/10


and evole

you came regular with the same basic structre but nothin bad but just plain

like here

dawg, this is not an Open Mic... you know you cant battle as well
cant Walk in my Shoes.. im too Big for Defeat, so i hand Sand L's//

big nono we all know defeat and L lines are played

i gave ya verse a 6.9/10

vote sand

[Evolve]

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