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    jus a written piece i thought id put on here

    I relate-words then take-verbs//
    smokin so hard its like i rape-herb//
    i sell tha substance that creates-pervs//
    as fate-occurs my date-swirvs//
    off tha pavement//
    fucked up so much cant even cough a statement//
    sign reads in need of replacement//
    fuck this situation im faced-wit//
    wish i could escape-it//
    ya speech is well but ya tones to little//
    break away like ya bones to brittle//
    these songs i scribble//
    only to try and make a profit//
    one hit rhyme so i can try and top-it//
    i wanna personaly engraved mic so i can rock-it//
    im in need of weed to relieve my-stress//
    my time-pressed//
    wit rhymes-stretched//
    and minds caressed//
    i feel abandoned//
    no place to go so im stranded//
    every time i take off i return crash landed//
    watch tha master-mind as i capture-rhymes//
    while i ask-her-time and time again//
    snortin lines at 9's a sin//
    split from the head-down//
    spit wit tha lead-rounds//
    now your quick to just shed-pounds//
    no need to paint your red-town//
    the stench of decay//
    how to we relate//
    gutwrenched from tha use-of-bait//
    thats tha loosers-fate//
    eventually boozers-break//
    impossible to determine how much u can take//
    its the drugs that make me shake//
    its those thugs that're fake i hate//
    spreadin rhymes global//
    goin postal on someone that raped-my-date//
    dont invade my hate.

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    uppin^^^^


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    hot shit..felt that

    check mine out dawg

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