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[bigBerd]

Rough draft. Back rapping again for the first time in a while. Looking for feedback on where I can my improve. Beat's not mine, only the flow.



Going to include this in an LP called "Put It Down". Keep ya eyez peel'd

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[Ion Metatron]

Rough draft. Back rapping again for the first time in a while. Looking for feedback on where I can my improve. Beat's not mine, only the flow.



Going to include this in an LP called "Put It Down". Keep ya eyez peel'd

interesting beat... your delivery needs work.. dont read off the paper when you recording.. take time to memorize it...nice ryhme scheme... make sure you lower your second back up track to 50% or less volume(I usually do 30% or so) or it messess with the clearity of the main lead track causing bars to be lost int he fuzz.... energy started low but you finished the track strong. try to keep your energy high when delivering the first few bars if possible, it keeps people listening to the track.. Good luck on the LP!