10lines
Due whenever
I’ll probably post late tonight
miracle
Midwest
10lines
Due whenever
I’ll probably post late tonight
Yep sounds good.
Check
Good luck brother
You a bitch bruh, start the witch hunt He’s thrown in Cages.
Get Stoned, large rocks broke his face in.
No miracles, all hope is vanquished..
Your new god is here, this dude couldn’t punch to the top, on Rocky’s stairs .
Hold glocks In pairs, get another loss smacked on Mags
Miracle to be alive wit your dads faggot past.
First kid born from ass. Thats why this bastards gassed.
……Your legacy is cocks and shit,My legacy is monstrous….
I exert muslcle and turn all of Philly into pure rubble
While you barely Do a damn Thing like Kurt Russell,sorry to burst yer bubble..
When it comes to doing homo shit.. there’s no stopping you
Fuck robbing pet stores, I’m sure you’ve taken a cockatoo
In high school I got mad pussy. The bitches were stunning dude
Heard you were a freak to, wearing trench coats while people made fun of you
Fuck weapons! to beat this bitch I don’t need a damn gun
My punches leave a knot on his head bigger than arts man bun
I’ll murder this fag quick, u don’t want me at your house fam
play games, I’ll show up to midway n put the nail in his coffin like nba jam
I’ll whip your ass spontaneously. He won’t be able to stand it
Everyone will watch the terraforming his eyes n I won’t even planet
Good shit bro . Let’s get some votes
Ok battle here. Mid verse was worded well if this was an audio battle. Seemed like more audio battle verse. Didn’t really have anything witty or even attacking his opponent.
Mir had a light verse here. Your opener made me want to punch my phone. Trench coat was aight. Arts man bun was nice and I liked MidWay could have been worded smoother I think
Mir did enough to take this. Mid on the right track but just needs to bring some more witty/harsher punches. Find some personals and use them against your opponent
V/Mir
Midwest
You a bitch bruh, start the witch hunt He’s thrown in Cages.
Get Stoned, large rocks broke his face in.
No miracles, all hope is vanquished..
concept was here punch was very light
Your new god is here, this dude couldn’t punch to the top, on Rocky’s stairs .
Hold glocks In pairs, get another loss smacked on Mags
why does the rhyme scheme suddenly end?
Miracle to be alive wit your dads faggot past.
First kid born from ass. Thats why this bastards gassed.
this was ok
……Your legacy is cocks and shit,My legacy is monstrous….
I exert muslcle and turn all of Philly into pure rubble
While you barely Do a damn Thing like Kurt Russell,sorry to burst yer bubble..
there are 4 bars here. and 2 lines that are extra on the first and last bar that you used in extended set up. this last punch fell short. you had some rhyme schemes in there that were nice but the overall punch didnt hit.
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miracle
When it comes to doing homo shit.. there’s no stopping you
Fuck robbing pet stores, I’m sure you’ve taken a cockatoo
ok. nothing dazzling tho
In high school I got mad pussy. The bitches were stunning dude
Heard you were a freak to, wearing trench coats while people made fun of you
light jab pretty funny
Fuck weapons! to beat this bitch I don’t need a damn gun
My punches leave a knot on his head bigger than arts man bun
lol
I’ll murder this fag quick, u don’t want me at your house fam
play games, I’ll show up to midway n put the nail in his coffin like nba jam
wording was a bit off but ok decent concept
I’ll whip your ass spontaneously. He won’t be able to stand it
Everyone will watch the terraforming his eyes n I won’t even planet
this was dope. the punch was a good job but the wp and pay off were excellent.
i saw some cool stuff from midwest but overall Miracle was just more consistent with the LOTB and he connected more. midwest work on finishing your punching with some gumption.
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Nba jam
Vs
N/A… why you’re putting out isn’t necessarily my cup of tea as far as a battle verse goes.
V/Mir
Mir verse was entertaining funny
Personals tight
Mid- verse Start off good fell off the edge a lil bit at the end
vote-Mir
trench coat
nba jam
both good
mid aint really had nothing
easy to decide who wins
winner miracle
No miracles, all hope is vanquished..
Your new god is here, this dude couldn’t punch to the top, on Rocky’s stairs .
Hold glocks In pairs, get another loss smacked on Mags
Miracle to be alive wit your dads faggot past.
vs.
When it comes to doing homo shit.. there’s no stopping you
Fuck robbing pet stores, I’m sure you’ve taken a cockatoo
Fuck weapons! to beat this bitch I don’t need a damn gun
My punches leave a knot on his head bigger than arts man bun
I’ll murder this fag quick, u don’t want me at your house fam
play games, I’ll show up to midway n put the nail in his coffin like nba jam
Overall, this was an okay battle. Both had great flow and maintained it throw all 10 lines. I posted what I felt were the best bars of the battle. In my opinion, Miracle had a stronger verse that hit harder and was more creative.
Vote - Miracle
Mir wins
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