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@Fresh
@miracle
Check, ready when u are
Originally Posted by miracle
Ya wife was right u fat retarded fuck, so what’d you task her for
I’d make you eat your own words, but then you’d just ask for more
Your whack, I’ll win! that’s the outcome of this bout
Saying that is my forthright, n the one that’s knocking you out
IMO Fresh was clearly better here. I quite liked the idiomatic wordplay. I’ve not heard that one before, and it was reasonably effective in context. I get that calling Miracle fat was the setup for saying he’d ask for more, but there’s also the implication that his words are too light and meagre to satisfy an appetite. Good stuff.
I’ve seen too many ‘right’ wordplays for it to impress me as the basis for a 1-2 punch bar. It’s fine as part of a larger piece, but kind of basic. Also saying something ‘is my forthright’ doesn’t really make sense, ‘forthright’ is an adjective not a noun. I think maybe he was thinking of ‘birthright’ or something, I dunno.
I really enjoyed both bars here freshs was funny yeah another fat joke on miracle but they won’t stop until he loses weight so I’ll allow it. I really enjoyed the fourth right flip for miracle however something about the way it’s worded got me. I’ve always known forthright to come before something and not just being a thing on its own “this is my forthright” tripped me a little so just based on that imma give it fresh which is a shame coz miracles flip was better for me
V/fresh
tossing a coin here I got miracle. It was less predictable imo. but both were cool. never seen forthright used before myself
both were good punches
this fat joke was good but always done against him
mir was fresher 2 me, forth right was nice
winner miracle
i have miracle here. i liked both but something about that "task her for" felt off. that was my only criticism in this battle .
v/Miracle
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3-2 mir
this was a cool battle.. fresh made me laugh, with the personal tie in. miracle had a flip ive never seen before too, comes down to preference and i usually lean on the side of personals but i think miracle just ahd the harsher punch where fresh had the humor. im going with mira.
cool battle
vote miracle.
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Vote : Fresh
I almost went the other way here but after examining both bars carefully they both did well. Sometimes using the quotes can get redundant but Fresh came right out the gate with a fat Joke set up and closed with a punch that tied the fat joke to saying the guy is wrong for what he said which ended up dodope....and while the Forthright wordplay was an I'll visual, I just thought it coulda been set up better. Maybe with a boxing reference or a set involving asking for directions you coulda almost made it a Triple entendre that way which woulda won this easily conceptually. I'm nit picking here because it was still good but Fresh had a more solid set up and punch while Miracle had a solid end but average build up to the haymaker (no pun intended via 4th right). When both punches are pretty good it Sometimes comes down to the smallest details. But props to both guys
Decent battle.. fresh had a generic fat joke where miracle was a bit more creative here with the wordplay.
V/Miracle
5-3 Mir wins
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