WK 14 HM4: (3-3) Preston and Ivy vs. (2-3) Soule (Preston Wins)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Preston and Ivy
@Soule

[Soule]

I'll ruin your life, this the only time I'll be in the same room as you n your wife,
when I swing on Ivy, I don't mean the vine, I got her cheeks drumming in the air tonight.

[B Dot LESNAR]

soule give me playboy vibes, the way he act seem legit
i told my wife you were lay d.'s man, she said nah, you're just a fat piece of shit

[Lenox]

Soule, you’re getting a lot better. I think last weeks bar was better overall specifically the wording but this week you had a funny bar. Only problem is wuxias ‘cousin’ had a much funnier bar than yours thanks to the wording. The wp was slick as well

Don’t get discouraged about this at all cuz you are getting better without a doubt

v/ wuxia… I meant Preston

EDIT: upon re-reading the biggest thing I didn’t like was the setup to punch rhyme.”you n your wife” & “in the air tonight” doesn’t land as hard.

[Baron Mynd]

This was a pretty fun battle actually, two more lighthearted and comedic lines conceptually and I enjoyed both here but Prest gets the nod for his wording and execution. It’s just that bit more crisp and harsh right on the nose at the end for the payoff of the punchline. LOL @ Lay D’s man also

Vote - Preston

[Art.]

thought the lay ds man was great lol

soule thats a real cool concept, i just didnt love the last part. where as broke dropped a solid punch start to finish. Good battle fellas

vote Ivy Preston and Wu

[Smog]

I know Lay D is played. I had one plus I think barcoyic did plus I seen one more. But I feel the lady’s man part was fresh with a dope flip to where soule was about to drop hard the fell off in the end. Good read y’all but I hit


P&I

[miracle]

I got wuxia taking this

I would of gave it to soule but that ending ruined it for me.. took away from the impact

VOTE: Preston and Wuxia

[Fresh]

soule had a good concept although overworded for my taste

PReston had a slick wordplay and was nicely worded

v/ preston

[Zunto]

This was a good battle

Vote soule

[Soule]

6-1, Preston advances.