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Thread: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (Miracle Wins)

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    WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (Miracle Wins)

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit

    10 sent to wuxia

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit

    10 for the little bitch.

    ur jealous I get it. you want recognition but nobody cheer you hear a lull
    dog I'm a God'send to your career cuz now everyone loving this Mira Cull
    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over beats
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you
    I've never liked you. I can respect your integrity but would never call you friend
    at least I knew you'd show, attendees nuts like the dick rider you always been
    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a writer

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit

    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting
    This faggot better try hard. before I beat’em till he can’t walk
    Told’em his ass is on the line, he thought lay doubt called to talk
    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious
    I’ll murder both you bitches.. hollow point bullets will come ripping thru
    The mag’ll leave ya leaking more then your tears shedded over the interview
    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    ur jealous I get it. you want recognition but nobody cheer you hear a lull
    dog I'm a God'send to your career cuz now everyone loving this Mira Cull
    im not sure I get this one
    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over beats
    nah weak
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you
    lol decent
    I've never liked you. I can respect your integrity but would never call you friend
    at least I knew you'd show, attendees nuts like the dick rider you always been
    nah
    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a writer
    decent closer


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    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting
    nice
    This faggot better try hard. before I beat’em till he can’t walk
    Told’em his ass is on the line, he thought lay doubt called to talk
    had potential but fell flat
    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious
    fire lmao damn
    I’ll murder both you bitches.. hollow point bullets will come ripping thru
    The mag’ll leave ya leaking more then your tears shedded over the interview
    another one with potential but I’m not feelin how you finished
    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth
    decent


    Spit had a couple decent bars but after the quick lil beef these guys were having, I expected him to come sharper. The concepts were just a bit basic and nothing really stood out to me, I’m sorry. Miracle had 2 pretty nice lines and it took me by surprise because I don’t remember ever reading too much from miracle. A few bars fell short and didn’t hit, but overall miracle had a better verse than spitacular. Good shit.


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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    ur jealous I get it. you want recognition but nobody cheer you hear a lull
    dog I'm a God'send to your career cuz now everyone loving this Mira Cull
    not feeling it
    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over beats
    seems a bit dated
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you
    solid
    I've never liked you. I can respect your integrity but would never call you friend
    at least I knew you'd show, attendees nuts like the dick rider you always been
    had potential
    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a writer
    solid closer

    I feel like you either let the drama from earlier this week get to you or you had a busy week and rushed this a bit but it was lesser than your Lenox drop which hurts you because Miracle is a harder opponent. Some of your concepts felt a bit outdated here and your wording wasn't as harsh as we expect from a Spit verse. I know you can do much better than this, brother.

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    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting
    lmao, fresh
    This faggot better try hard. before I beat’em till he can’t walk
    Told’em his ass is on the line, he thought lay doubt called to talk
    solid concept but needs reworded
    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious
    this was cool
    I’ll murder both you bitches.. hollow point bullets will come ripping thru
    The mag’ll leave ya leaking more then your tears shedded over the interview
    also a good concept but needs revised
    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth
    solid concept if a bit dated

    Miracle, definitely a solid verse. Really liked the spear hunting bar and the self conscious bar. Good work.

    Overall I feel like one wanted this more than the other. I know Spitacular can drop MUCH heavier than this and maybe taking a loss will drive him to show the new generation what he is really capable of. Vote Miracle for the better verse.

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you


    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a writer

    Thought this could have been better

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    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting

    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious

    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth

    Thought this was close.. my take away is that spit came off a bit statemish , the subscribe l feel like I’ve seen a few times but it read funny to me .. the cool edit I thought was a dope personal . And the wash you was cool . Miracle had cooler concepts , worse wording but he had the bar of the battle in that doubt follows absolute fire. I thought he had a bit
    More creativity and hits in his verse . Close battle

    Vote miracle

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    ur jealous I get it. you want recognition but nobody cheer you hear a lull
    dog I'm a God'send to your career cuz now everyone loving this Mira Cull
    iffy name play. i like he concept but execution lacking. half pts
    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over beats
    lol good personal
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you
    light
    I've never liked you. I can respect your integrity but would never call you friend
    at least I knew you'd show, attendees nuts like the dick rider you always been
    not a fan
    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a write
    cool

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    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting
    light
    This faggot better try hard. before I beat’em till he can’t walk
    Told’em his ass is on the line, he thought lay doubt called to talk
    not a fan
    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious
    dope
    I’ll murder both you bitches.. hollow point bullets will come ripping thru
    The mag’ll leave ya leaking more then your tears shedded over the interview
    cool with the personal angle
    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth
    decent

    This shit was close as hell. only 1 bar from each i just didn't like. i enjoyed mirs just a little more. I was hoping to keep my vote streak of not voting for miracle rolling, but...

    v/mir

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    $pit

    ur jealous I get it. you want recognition but nobody cheer you hear a lull
    dog I'm a God'send to your career cuz now everyone loving this Mira Cull
    didnt like this one
    dudes a joke. no audio equipment, talking bout bringing supernova heat
    pick up a mic then cool edit, your garbage verse before you put it over beats
    okay personal
    you dropped quick af, sent Wux your verse early, acting just like a boss do
    you got me wringing my hands, squeezing out every last drop after I wash you
    no new twist to this dated concept.no pun intended
    I've never liked you. I can respect your integrity but would never call you friend
    at least I knew you'd show, attendees nuts like the dick rider you always been
    lol shit was funny. idc if dated or not.
    you hate me cuz I'm tighter, and nobody follow you though maybe I'll inspire
    cuz subscribe, is the perfect description of your rating as a writer
    this was ok. its missing something because i think this punch could have been exceptional.

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    miracle

    Your rhymes? We don’t wanna hear nothing.. I’m sick of this queer frontin
    So when I raise the 9, I’m putting metal in your chest like wuxia spear hunting
    I'm on the fences with this one. ok bar and name drop but it doesn't like i would like
    This faggot better try hard. before I beat’em till he can’t walk
    Told’em his ass is on the line, he thought lay doubt called to talk
    loll nice
    Y’all two dickride so much.. it’s kinda gay, I’m just being honest
    You post & doubt follows you everywhere like being self conscious
    i liked this shit right here
    I’ll murder both you bitches.. hollow point bullets will come ripping thru
    The mag’ll leave ya leaking more then your tears shedded over the interview
    ok lol
    I’ll kill ya whole family bitch..everyone’s getting smoked like keef
    & after I go for spit’s blood, he’ll do the same when I bust out his teeth
    i feel like the concept is played but the wording is good.


    I have miracle taking this one with consistency and IMO the LOTB with the doubt follows you.

    v/miracle

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    Re: WK02: (1-1) Miracle vs. (1-0) The Real Spit (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Miracles wins 5-0

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