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@Mac
@Wuxia
Check.
How many?
Breakin half site to make ur name bold shows ur obsession
What imma bring will vBulletin heads that will teach ya a lesson
Bitch came back to run stuff. Fuckin idiot this site’s done
Wuxs trying so hard to make a statement all his verses read like one
So let’s start a new chapter bro & take this beating for the better
cuz u either die by a thousand cuts or I’ll run ur body thru a shredder
Broke makes bitches drool? I prefer being brutally cruel
Sure you swim in pussy Wux, your girls the community pool
Ya love handling pole sticks tho as far I’m aware..
Fuckin idiot brought spears to a gunfight like this is the Apache Wars
Super mod right here. Set up the site while others would bail
Except the only plug-ins u know how to install come wit furry tails
Trust power doesn’t come without controversy & sabotage
These guys Laid and Spit on u like preparing for a Thai massage
Ya won’t tell my hooks left from right. They sound mono but truly fine
I turned em all into compact discs like I compressed ur fuckin spine
GG
Last edited by Mac; November 11th, 2023 at 04:44 PM
Wuxia = Admin but don't worry. My role is technically small.
I give medals to ppl who champ shit. Trust me. It won't effect you at all.
Come get this spear. All of it. It's hard to laugh when it hurt.
My range with a shovels 3-5 feet too. I'll bury your tarded ass in the dirt.
You weird af but it's w/e yo. I even talk trash to the cripples.
Can’t hold a candle to me. You prefer to drip the hot wax on your nipples.
And Lenox slumped you bro. His punch was the best thing.
Mac stiffened up and got coldcocked. You're a necrophiliacs wet dream.
Terrible verse. You wrote that? Quit. You got BROKE ass lit.
A 2nd-rate drop w/o inequality bars. You be posting some low-class shit.
now Mac all beat tf down. He needs first aid and some ice.
this clown LAID OUT FOR REAL THO it'll be Spit's WORST day of his LIFE.
Peep my usertitle to the left. But miss me with the gay talk.
Like my BLACKPINK color scheme? No? Your dead when I let the K-Pop.
Mac's at the bathhouse. Toweled up. Ready to bust a move.
Dudes girl showers me with love cuz he love to shower with other dudes.
Bitch came back to run stuff. Fuckin idiot this site’s done
Wuxs trying so hard to make a statement all his verses read like one
So let’s start a new chapter bro & take this beating for the better
cuz u either die by a thousand cuts or I’ll run ur body thru a shredder
Vs
You weird af but it's w/e yo. I even talk trash to the cripples.
Can’t hold a candle to me. You prefer to drip the hot wax on your nipples.
And Lenox slumped you bro. His punch was the best thing.
Mac stiffened up and got coldcocked. You're a necrophiliacs wet dream.
Peep my usertitle to the left. But miss me with the gay talk.
Like my BLACKPINK color scheme? No? Your dead when I let the K-Pop.
Mac I thought the Thai massage line had potential , just didn’t hit as hard as I would have liked it .. broke the laid out forreal bar went over my head I think it was about spit rage quitting but I wasn’t 100 percent lol .. opener was funny , the closer was choppy liked the idea though , I think broke had cooler ideas , but it wasn’t your best , thought execution fell flat a bit seemed rush .. Mac on the other hand just didn’t feel as creative , can’t came off statementish and one bar didn’t rhyme lol , unless it’s read wrong on my phone .
Overall Il give it to broke little better CLEAN IT UP FELLAS!
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Mac had statement, community pool was ok… Apache line doesn’t rhyme..
I liked the concept of the Thai massage but the punch fell flat n didn’t hit hard enough
Wuxia opener was ok but def didn’t hit hard at all… candle was cool.. cold cocked was ok
Rest was a miss or mild… overall this was pretty close.. imma go with wuxia tho for the better misses
VOTE->WUXIA
Breakin half site to make ur name bold shows ur obsession
What imma bring will vBulletin heads that will teach ya a lesson
it was soule that did that. Vbulletin wp didnt make sense either
Bitch came back to run stuff. Fuckin idiot this site’s done
Wuxs trying so hard to make a statement all his verses read like one
this was good
So let’s start a new chapter bro & take this beating for the better
cuz u either die by a thousand cuts or I’ll run ur body thru a shredder
not a fan
Broke makes bitches drool? I prefer being brutally cruel
Sure you swim in pussy Wux, your girls the community pool
could have been worded so much harsher. Half pts
Ya love handling pole sticks tho as far I’m aware..
Fuckin idiot brought spears to a gunfight like this is the Apache Wars
not a fan
Super mod right here. Set up the site while others would bail
Except the only plug-ins u know how to install come wit furry tails
not a fan + hes admin not supermod
Trust power doesn’t come without controversy & sabotage
These guys Laid and Spit on u like preparing for a Thai massage
Nah..
Ya won’t tell my hooks left from right. They sound mono but truly fine
I turned em all into compact discs like I compressed ur fuckin spine
digging this one
Vs
Wuxia = Admin but don't worry. My role is technically small.
I give medals to ppl who champ shit. Trust me. It won't effect you at all.
lmao good stuff
Come get this spear. All of it. It's hard to laugh when it hurt.
My range with a shovels 3-5 feet too. I'll bury your tarded ass in the dirt.
thought this could be worded better. Half pts
You weird af but it's w/e yo. I even talk trash to the cripples.
Can’t hold a candle to me. You prefer to drip the hot wax on your nipples.
not a fan
And Lenox slumped you bro. His punch was the best thing.
Mac stiffened up and got coldcocked. You're a necrophiliacs wet dream.
lol aight
Terrible verse. You wrote that? Quit. You got BROKE ass lit.
A 2nd-rate drop w/o inequality bars. You be posting some low-class shit.
dope lotb
now Mac all beat tf down. He needs first aid and some ice.
this clown LAID OUT FOR REAL THO it'll be Spit's WORST day of his LIFE.
didnt like this
Peep my usertitle to the left. But miss me with the gay talk.
Like my BLACKPINK color scheme? No? Your dead when I let the K-Pop.
dont get it
Mac's at the bathhouse. Toweled up. Ready to bust a move.
Dudes girl showers me with love cuz he love to shower with other dudes.
nah
Thought this was one sided. Wuxia gets the dub
v/wuxia
Breakin half site to make ur name bold shows ur obsession
What imma bring will vBulletin heads that will teach ya a lesson
No bro
Bitch came back to run stuff. Fuckin idiot this site’s done
Wuxs trying so hard to make a statement all his verses read like one
This would have been a good personal if wuxia’s verses were statement heavy
So let’s start a new chapter bro & take this beating for the better
cuz u either die by a thousand cuts or I’ll run ur body thru a shredder
Good working, bad execution
Broke makes bitches drool? I prefer being brutally cruel
Sure you swim in pussy Wux, your girls the community pool
Not creative. Again your wording was there but the executions lacking
Ya love handling pole sticks tho as far I’m aware..
Fuckin idiot brought spears to a gunfight like this is the Apache Wars
Doesn’t rhyme
Super mod right here. Set up the site while others would bail
Except the only plug-ins u know how to install come wit furry tails
I don’t get this cuz I don’t watch furry porn like you
Trust power doesn’t come without controversy & sabotage
These guys Laid and Spit on u like preparing for a Thai massage
Again could have been decent if the execution was worded harsher
Ya won’t tell my hooks left from right. They sound mono but truly fine
I turned em all into compact discs like I compressed ur fuckin spine
Same as above
vs
Wuxia = Admin but don't worry. My role is technically small.
I give medals to ppl who champ shit. Trust me. It won't effect you at all.
This is slick and funny
Come get this spear. All of it. It's hard to laugh when it hurt.
My range with a shovels 3-5 feet too. I'll bury your tarded ass in the dirt.
Fire
You weird af but it's w/e yo. I even talk trash to the cripples.
Can’t hold a candle to me. You prefer to drip the hot wax on your nipples.
Lmfao wtf. LOTB
And Lenox slumped you bro. His punch was the best thing.
Mac stiffened up and got coldcocked. You're a necrophiliacs wet dream.
TALK THAT SHIT!!! BLAT BLAT
Terrible verse. You wrote that? Quit. You got BROKE ass lit.
A 2nd-rate drop w/o inequality bars. You be posting some low-class shit.
This was clever
now Mac all beat tf down. He needs first aid and some ice.
this clown LAID OUT FOR REAL THO it'll be Spit's WORST day of his LIFE.
I liked this concept a lot but the not execution
Peep my usertitle to the left. But miss me with the gay talk.
Like my BLACKPINK color scheme? No? Your dead when I let the K-Pop.
Nice, I don’t listen to k-pop but understood this
Mac's at the bathhouse. Toweled up. Ready to bust a move.
Dudes girl showers me with love cuz he love to shower with other dudes.
Not a fan
Thought this was a body bag. Wuxia had a really fire verse. Only 1 or 2 misses rest I really enjoyed. I thought Mac a lot of good wording and a couple decent concepts but the way he executes them makes his lines so soft. Eh
PSA: LOTB to me = LAUGH OF THE BATTLE… smdh
v/ wuxia
Last edited by Lenox; November 15th, 2023 at 12:56 PM
Breakin half site to make ur name bold shows ur obsession
What imma bring will vBulletin heads that will teach ya a lesson
False personal because I broke the site, also wording was way soft
Bitch came back to run stuff. Fuckin idiot this site’s done
Wuxs trying so hard to make a statement all his verses read like one
The site ain't done. We still got life. Also the bar is ironic because it reads like a statement
So let’s start a new chapter bro & take this beating for the better
cuz u either die by a thousand cuts or I’ll run ur body thru a shredder
this was better
Broke makes bitches drool? I prefer being brutally cruel
Sure you swim in pussy Wux, your girls the community pool
Lol cool
Ya love handling pole sticks tho as far I’m aware..
Fuckin idiot brought spears to a gunfight like this is the Apache Wars
Missed with this one
Super mod right here. Set up the site while others would bail
Except the only plug-ins u know how to install come wit furry tails
Gay bar
Trust power doesn’t come without controversy & sabotage
These guys Laid and Spit on u like preparing for a Thai massage
Nice
Ya won’t tell my hooks left from right. They sound mono but truly fine
I turned em all into compact discs like I compressed ur fuckin spine
Solid closer
Mac, you started off rough but started to pick up momentum. I'd recommend maybe working on your wording a bit. I'm not gonna tell you how to build a bar because you seem to understand how and that's obvious as some of these punches were pretty decent but I'd definitely recommend trying to not read like a statement. First line is the setup, second line leads to the punch. It's too easy for the two lines to just read like one ongoing sentence. Look at the difference between you're statement bar and shredder or community pool bars. You got this. Just a little polishing.
Vs
Wuxia = Admin but don't worry. My role is technically small.
I give medals to ppl who champ shit. Trust me. It won't effect you at all.
Lmao
Come get this spear. All of it. It's hard to laugh when it hurt.
My range with a shovels 3-5 feet too. I'll bury your tarded ass in the dirt.
Nice
You weird af but it's w/e yo. I even talk trash to the cripples.
Can’t hold a candle to me. You prefer to drip the hot wax on your nipples.
Gay bar
And Lenox slumped you bro. His punch was the best thing.
Mac stiffened up and got coldcocked. You're a necrophiliacs wet dream.
Yucky
Terrible verse. You wrote that? Quit. You got BROKE ass lit.
A 2nd-rate drop w/o inequality bars. You be posting some low-class shit.
Smooth
now Mac all beat tf down. He needs first aid and some ice.
this clown LAID OUT FOR REAL THO it'll be Spit's WORST day of his LIFE.
Meh I thought his Spit/Lay bar was better tbh
Peep my usertitle to the left. But miss me with the gay talk.
Like my BLACKPINK color scheme? No? Your dead when I let the K-Pop.
Cool concept
Mac's at the bathhouse. Toweled up. Ready to bust a move.
Dudes girl showers me with love cuz he love to shower with other dudes.
Lol
Wuxia, I won't say much as it'd probably be pretty redundant. Good verse that remained consistent. Vote Wuxia for the better overall verse.
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