WK01: (0-0) $pitacular vs (0-0) Lenox (Spit Wins 5-3)

[Soule]

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

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10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@The Real Spit
@Lenox

[$pitacular]

check

[Lenox]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ould-Know-That

Salute @The Real Spit

Bro, ur dome is shiny as fuck.. looks like it was dipped up in ball sweat,
Last time spit proper with girls was 2003.. just happened this faggot wasn’t bald yet,
Heard you switched to guys.. 60 years old and girls think he a bozo,
Ripping men’s Aspinall that, what you tryna be, heavyweight champ of being a homo?
But yo bro I peeped those songs you dropped, ngl they were sounding sick,
Until I woke up from a bad dream, it was about being stuck in the year 2006,
Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl,
My crew do dirt, my only goals to see you pass away,
So if I Siakam a bury his body right near where the raptors play,
You’re old and washed, nobody listen when this queer spittin,
Begging for a key style like a faggot, so go ahead and spit those year old prewrittens

[$pitacular]

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ighlight=Lenox

You shoulda asked for more than 2 hours bro.

Lenox, just smack yourself. lose the ego or ask for help
always trying to 1-up me. I gave you a deadline & you came back with 12
constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental
as for music, can't compare. you coming up short when dicks are swingin
fuck your London Transport, I guarantee you're still losing to chicks in England
& your girl's a hooker slut, who cares the cost to partake. I smashed her
fuck the per diem, it's night rates you'll need for the intense heartache after
I'm bringing RB back. your death's automatic when I'm gunnin they like my shit
my trigger pull bump stock prices & I'll leave you insolvent to wipe my prints
bro you skip out on battles often cuz you're constantly ducking your fears
you suck, & you're only good at no showing cuz you been tucking for years

'night

[Art.]

yo bro I peeped those songs you dropped, ngl they were sounding sick,
Until I woke up from a bad dream, it was about being stuck in the year 2006,
Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl,

Vs

Lenox, just smack yourself. lose the ego or ask for help
always trying to 1-up me. I gave you a deadline & you came back with 12
constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental
as for music, can't compare. you coming up short when dicks are swingin
fuck your London Transport, I guarantee you're still losing to chicks in England

Cool battle , quick keyed .. len had some missed opener was choppy , ripping absinal that was a bit of a reach the woke up in 2006 I think was my favorite bar of yours very statementish but I liked it . The siakam raptors bar went over my head , and the closer was cool since he came in hot asking for a quick battle but the lunch wasn’t there .

Spit first 3 bars were dope .. I thought the medical and dental line was fire . London transport was a cool personal and then I felt you got a little statementish as well .

Cool battle love that ya both dropped quick

I’m going to give it to Spit for having the harder hits and the line of the battle

[miracle]

Lenox… I wasn’t feeling much from this.. this was more on the weaker shit of what I seen from u lately
Let’s start with the opener.. I might be missing something cuz this went right over my head.. no clue what this means..then u got the Aspinall line which doesn’t work cuz it’s pronounced as-pin-all.. bad dream line just seemed like filler but ok… watching movies with ya girl line was cool, I was digging the wordplay just thought u could of flipped it harder… again with the Siakam line it doesn’t work nor do I even know where u were going with it bc it’s pronounced see-ahh-cum… then the closer felt like filler again… idk man I wasn’t feeling it…

Spit had deadlines was cool… full time fag was funny but didn’t hit hard.. London was cool


Overall cool little battle for a quick write.. gotta give it to spit tho

Vote spit

[Wuxia]

Bro, ur dome is shiny as fuck.. looks like it was dipped up in ball sweat,
Last time spit proper with girls was 2003.. just happened this faggot wasn’t bald yet,
Comedy. Simple nameflip but effective.

Heard you switched to guys.. 60 years old and girls think he a bozo,
Ripping men’s Aspinall that, what you tryna be, heavyweight champ of being a homo?

I love the attempt on this wordplay. It was risky. Ripping men's ass and all that. But that "p" is what messed you up. The risk didn't pay off this time, but don't let it discourage you from using wordplays, keep at it because the beauty of wordplays is that they allow you to tap into your creativity without being cliche.

But yo bro I peeped those songs you dropped, ngl they were sounding sick,
Until I woke up from a bad dream, it was about being stuck in the year 2006,

This was dope because anybody that listened to that particular audio and doesn't admit that it sounded like old mainstream early to mid 2000s is being dishonest with themselves. That's why I myself stated in that thread that I wasn't feeling the track.

Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl,

A great wordplay, but Terrifier has been done before. This was a variant but I don't care about variants because no idea is original unless it's original. I also used a Terrifer concept, not the wordplay, but the concept, and it didn't receive a lot of love, lol. I liked this bar the only problem I see is tearing a fire rapper apart has nothing to do with watching horror movies with his girl. It was just the wordplay itself. It wasn't supported enough in the setup and this hurt the bar conceptually.

My crew do dirt, my only goals to see you pass away,
So if I Siakam a bury his body right near where the raptors play,

THIS. I definitely thought this was your LOTB. When I see ock Im'a bury his body. This was nice. You had a subtle basketball reference in the setup that conceptually moved the bar along into your Siakam wordplay and landed with the Raptors finish.

You’re old and washed, nobody listen when this queer spittin,
Begging for a key style like a faggot, so go ahead and spit those year old prewrittens

I see what you were saying here. You were expecting old material from him that he had written at a time when he wasn't active. It was a gamble because if he had even one personal against you in his verse it would discredit this bar.




Lenox, just smack yourself. lose the ego or ask for help
always trying to 1-up me. I gave you a deadline & you came back with 12

A deadline wp is similar to a hotline wp in that there's a high probability it has been overused to the point variants don't matter much. This was an okay flip. I'm assuming by the always trying to 1-Up me part you have a long-standing association with him to make that kind of statement. If not it was a reach and fake personal.

constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental

Again. Another personal that I don't see as being legitimate. I haven't seen him bitching or moaning since he's been back. I did think the punchline was okay but feel you're reaching here with fake personals for content, and the full-time thing was pretty simple.

as for music, can't compare. you coming up short when dicks are swingin
fuck your London Transport, I guarantee you're still losing to chicks in England

This was a dope personal and your LOTB.

& your girl's a hooker slut, who cares the cost to partake. I smashed her
fuck the per diem, it's night rates you'll need for the intense heartache after

It's night rates you'll need was bad wording. It felt rather unnatural reading that aloud. That really spoiled the bar for me because it's at the center of your punchline leading into what should be the payoff.

I'm bringing RB back. your death's automatic when I'm gunnin they like my shit
my trigger pull bump stock prices & I'll leave you insolvent to wipe my prints

My trigger pull bump stock prices sounded terrible lmao. I mean for a gun bar, picture you standing in the middle of a crowd, staring down your opponent, and telling him yo my trigger pull bump stock prices. That just doesn't work for me. And then I'll leave you insolvent to. Again. I didn't like the wording here.

bro you skip out on battles often cuz you're constantly ducking your fears
you suck, & you're only good at no showing cuz you been tucking for years

This was another fake personal. That's 3. 3 fake personals in one verse. You were reaching for content here because dude hasn't been around RB for a long time but you want us to believe he's no showing left and right. Anybody who has been active should know this isn't true. And coming from somebody who has been inactive, that's a bold statement to make. The bar was comical, and it would of been dope if used against somebody like Zunto or Allen Knight



Okay so this came down to 1 bar a piece that were both LOTB. I have Spit's winning over Lenox because it was a great personal and was nicely written. But Lenox had a few bars that landed for me as evidenced by my breakdown.

v-Lenox

[MV]

But yo bro I peeped those songs you dropped, ngl they were sounding sick,
Until I woke up from a bad dream, it was about being stuck in the year 2006,
Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl,


vs


Lenox, just smack yourself. lose the ego or ask for help
always trying to 1-up me. I gave you a deadline & you came back with 12
constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental
I'm bringing RB back. your death's automatic when I'm gunnin they like my shit
my trigger pull bump stock prices & I'll leave you insolvent to wipe my prints


Lenox had some good concepts but i dont feel that they were translated into punches as
precisely as they could have been. i believe this match was on short notice so that is understandable. $pit definitely had the more polished verse. His opening was my favorite bar this battle.
v/$pit

[Mac]

constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental
as for music, can't compare. you coming up short when dicks are swingin
fuck your London Transport, I guarantee you're still losing to chicks in England

vs

Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl

fun read given its all keystyles and probably some prewritten here and there. I got spit with more consistency across his verse, most of lenox was misses for me but I definitely like the style, probably needs to be a bit harsher nowadays for something to hit correctly. good showing guys

v spitacular

[Plot]

Vote Lenox
Len had some good wps n nice personals.
It was a good verse. Read well and bars hit.
Spit had some ok hits. But some of the bars like
Deadline werent fresh. Also lacked a personal angle.
Loved the medical dental line though.

[Smog]

Lenox


Opener cool
Aspinal was a reach
Bad dream was fire
Terifier was cool.
Siakam was a slight reach see ock um a burry is how I say it but fast works. I like it
Closer was ehhh

Spit


Opener was alright
Full time fag was funny
London transport was fire
Per diem was cool
Didn’t really like bump stock
Closer was funny but ion know if Lennox ducks


Ion know this close af I think Lennox misses a couple with reaches but overall dope verse pretty harsh too. I think spit landed one more but Lennox hit harder. It seemed Lennox was going after him on a personal note. Ion know, close but overall I gotta go Lennox here. Good read fellas


Lenox

[Fresh]

Bro, ur dome is shiny as fuck.. looks like it was dipped up in ball sweat,
Last time spit proper with girls was 2003.. just happened this faggot wasn’t bald yet,
I get what you're going for, but it just didnt hit for me as is
Heard you switched to guys.. 60 years old and girls think he a bozo,
Ripping men’s Aspinall that, what you tryna be, heavyweight champ of being a homo?
this didnt make sense to me
But yo bro I peeped those songs you dropped, ngl they were sounding sick,
Until I woke up from a bad dream, it was about being stuck in the year 2006,
decent but light
Ima gut this wack pussy.. you’re the biggest goof in the world.
Last time spit terrifier rapper apart… he was scared watching horror movies with his girl,
diggin this
My crew do dirt, my only goals to see you pass away,
So if I Siakam a bury his body right near where the raptors play,
not a fan
You’re old and washed, nobody listen when this queer spittin,
Begging for a key style like a faggot, so go ahead and spit those year old prewrittens
statementish

vs

Lenox, just smack yourself. lose the ego or ask for help
always trying to 1-up me. I gave you a deadline & you came back with 12
diggin this
constantly bitching & moaning, honestly it's pathetic bro you're mental
you're such a full-time fag, you prolly got medical & dental
lmao nice
as for music, can't compare. you coming up short when dicks are swingin
fuck your London Transport, I guarantee you're still losing to chicks in England
lmao this is good
& your girl's a hooker slut, who cares the cost to partake. I smashed her
fuck the per diem, it's night rates you'll need for the intense heartache after
thought you could have done more with the crypto currency angle it felt flat as is
I'm bringing RB back. your death's automatic when I'm gunnin they like my shit
my trigger pull bump stock prices & I'll leave you insolvent to wipe my prints
not a fan
bro you skip out on battles often cuz you're constantly ducking your fears
you suck, & you're only good at no showing cuz you been tucking for years
nah

Lenox youre a lot better than you were but still need better wording. terrifier was cool. spit proper needed a different angle or wording. spit got this with a solid first half verse

v/spit

[Soule]

5-3 Spit