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format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
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@Art.
@MV
My guy ! Sup MV
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sup bro. GL HF
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its none of my business, but ya wifes not a manicurist or a beautician
but you preach her precision, let him tell it, when she does finger Art its exquisite
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Games over for your big goals, Fuck the net for thinkin this shits close,
if we kick it & Crossbars, urs are guaranteed to miss as soon as you hit post
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its none of my business, but ya wifes not a manicurist or a beautician
but you preach her precision, let him tell it, when she does finger Art its exquisite
vs
Games over for your big goals, Fuck the net for thinkin this shits close,
if we kick it & Crossbars, urs are guaranteed to miss as soon as you hit post
I got art here with a harsher bar.. loved it. wasnt feeling mv bar on this one, a bit mild
Vote: ART
Harder punch.. smoother to… mv read a little choppy to me… I think it’s the 3 commons and the double ‘but’ .. I liked the idea of where u were going but just came off a little choppy n the over hit wasn’t to hard.. cool attempt it just didn’t land
I feel like with a little re-wording, MV could've had this one. It was a cool concept. Art also had a cool concept and it hit harder. Okay battle overall, vote art.
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
MV, liked the build up but idk thought the finger art could've been tied in w something more. Solid concept
Art had the wording and hit post was a nice way to finish from crossbars.
V art
Good battle
I'm voting art
When I saw mv I thought I'd be voting for him with that finger art punch.
But art was super well worded with the crossbars/hit post punch
Super close but I'm edging it to art.. good shit to both
MV's bar was a bit too cluttered this time around, could have benefited from condensing the bar by eliminating unnecessary word usage, like the 2 "buts", and perhaps re-wording it, the "let him tell it" was essential to the punch hitting but it probably could of helped to put it like "if we let him tell it" or "according to him" and it would of led into the end of the punch better. Art's had great build leading to an effective punch that was highlighted by the creativity of packaging the concept into a topic we're all familiar and intimate with. It was really clever, imo.
v-Art
This was actually a good battle. Art had more tie ins with the executed wordplay within the set up, so he gets it for complexity.
v/Art
7-0 Art wins
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