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@Ryno
@miracle
Last edited by Wuxia; November 2nd, 2023 at 07:16 PM
Yoo
Hey babe
Ayooooo…
Who’s fearin this dweeb, even ur hoe is really diggin my steez
I mean if u leave ur bitch w/ me, she’ll rarely check in like it’s the lyricist league
We don’t follow em no, then flimsy lines r hollow fasho
Last time this kid had a nice rap, is when his whore of a mother swaddled em close
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
See ur rhymes have major flaws, we never thought this haters raw
Only way this battle goes to the wire, is if the docs r tryna save his jaw
Dude is lost, i stepped in last minute w/ the blicky to prove ur soft
If u get another replacement after this match, it’ll be ur legs after I shoot em off
Thought u lucked up guy? Nah, against me homie u suck, no lie
Cuz the only thing ur ‘flow charts’, is a sequence of terribly fucked up lines
.
.
Bash aka ryno
Your 0-2 vs me.. so come creative or remain a lame
Before I cock back n aim… putting 3 in the front of you like Dia’s new name
U really think you Ken beat me? Ur no streetfighter when facing the best
This Guile get wrecked, so Ryu better run b4 I send a haduken to the chest
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
Fags like you dont handle guns. Never causing anyone to hurt
If this queer is holding up arms, theres probably some dude taking off his shirt
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
Last edited by miracle; November 2nd, 2023 at 11:03 PM
Who’s fearin this dweeb, even ur hoe is really diggin my steez
I mean if u leave ur bitch w/ me, she’ll rarely check in like it’s the lyricist league
lol
We don’t follow em no, then flimsy lines r hollow fasho
Last time this kid had a nice rap, is when his whore of a mother swaddled em close
she's a very nice lady!
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
solid
See ur rhymes have major flaws, we never thought this haters raw
Only way this battle goes to the wire, is if the docs r tryna save his jaw
you just did a EMT joke but solid
Dude is lost, i stepped in last minute w/ the blicky to prove ur soft
If u get another replacement after this match, it’ll be ur legs after I shoot em off
meh
Thought u lucked up guy? Nah, against me homie u suck, no lie
Cuz the only thing ur ‘flow charts’, is a sequence of terribly fucked up lines
okay
Ryno pretty good verse. Definitely started strong then kinda fumbled towards the end and picked yourself back up with the closer. I'd say if you're going to use similar concepts, i.e EMT/doctor bars back to back, make it a theme through the verse. Other than that, I got you at 5/6.
Vs
Your 0-2 vs me.. so come creative or remain a lame
Before I cock back n aim… putting 3 in the front of you like Dia’s new name
cool concept but feel like it could've been harder.
U really think you Ken beat me? Ur no streetfighter when facing the best
This Guile get wrecked, so Ryu better run b4 I send a haduken to the chest
I liked this.
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
okay
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
lmao
Fags like you dont handle guns. Never causing anyone to hurt
If this queer is holding up arms, theres probably some dude taking off his shirt
lol
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
meh
Pretty solid verse from Mir. A couple I lol'd at. A couple misses. I got you at 4/6.
So when you look at quotables, it leans one way, but I feel like the less consistent battler had the harder hits. So it's one of those situations where ones landing more jabs but the other dropped homie one more time. I got miracle taking this by one round.
Vote mir
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
Who’s fearin this dweeb, even ur hoe is really diggin my steez
I mean if u leave ur bitch w/ me, she’ll rarely check in like it’s the lyricist league
OK, this made me laugh a little
We don’t follow em no, then flimsy lines r hollow fasho
Last time this kid had a nice rap, is when his whore of a mother swaddled em close
Decent swag, insulting
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
your plays are somewhat basic but well worded and it makes it hit
See ur rhymes have major flaws, we never thought this haters raw
Only way this battle goes to the wire, is if the docs r tryna save his jaw
you're consistent but overly simple
Dude is lost, i stepped in last minute w/ the blicky to prove ur soft
If u get another replacement after this match, it’ll be ur legs after I shoot em off
fell short here
Thought u lucked up guy? Nah, against me homie u suck, no lie
Cuz the only thing ur ‘flow charts’, is a sequence of terribly fucked up lines
you seemed to really taper off, ran out of material?
vs
Your 0-2 vs me.. so come creative or remain a lame
Before I cock back n aim… putting 3 in the front of you like Dia’s new name
weak for an opener
U really think you Ken beat me? Ur no streetfighter when facing the best
This Guile get wrecked, so Ryu better run b4 I send a haduken to the chest
just.. no
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
could have been executed much better, but at least the wordplay is there
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
mildly funny but worded weak
Fags like you dont handle guns. Never causing anyone to hurt
If this queer is holding up arms, theres probably some dude taking off his shirt
lol
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
not feeling this
I feel like this was pretty one-sided, gotta go with Ryno on consistency. Room for improvement for both, focus on expanding your concepts beyond simple word plays that have been done to death. Still, thanks for showing up and giving us something to read.
Voting from my phone so excuse the shitty break down l
Ryno
Rarely check in
Hauling him out
Swaddle him close
Vs
Suture body
Coupe chicken or something
Taking off guys shifts
I kind of liked the ryu punch , just thought ya saw it coming from too far away , the goes to the wire from ry was pretty cool , clean but didn’t think there was too much to it .
Ry started nicely and fell off , mir came in iffy and then got going .. i thought it was fairly close Il give it to Mira , could make the argument for both .
Good battle fellas
Vote Mira
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Ryno:
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
vs
Miracle:
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
Thought this battle should have been better. Rynos wording was dope as always but I thought his concepts were pretty mild and soft hitting. I know he was just acting as a fill in but I know for a fact if he took a little bit more time on the concepts he coulda prolly took this.
Miracles opener coulda been really hard hitting. Didn’t love how he worded it. I liked bashlyk. Coulda been worded to sting harder but dope word play. Other 2 were fine.
Decent battle
v/ miracle
Who’s fearin this dweeb, even ur hoe is really diggin my steez
I mean if u leave ur bitch w/ me, she’ll rarely check in like it’s the lyricist league
This was okay. I don't really see an apparent trend in battlers not checking in, but it could have worked if it was more specific and referenced an example.
We don’t follow em no, then flimsy lines r hollow fasho
Last time this kid had a nice rap, is when his whore of a mother swaddled em close
Nice rap, rap/wrap was way too simplistic for you. You write at a higher standard so I have to hold you accountable when you drop something like this. Lol. Wasn't feeling this bar.
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
This was fire.
See ur rhymes have major flaws, we never thought this haters raw
Only way this battle goes to the wire, is if the docs r tryna save his jaw
Nice.
Dude is lost, i stepped in last minute w/ the blicky to prove ur soft
If u get another replacement after this match, it’ll be ur legs after I shoot em off
Not big on the shooting legs off ending. Everything up to that point was good.
Thought u lucked up guy? Nah, against me homie u suck, no lie
Cuz the only thing ur ‘flow charts’, is a sequence of terribly fucked up lines
This was okay.
Your 0-2 vs me.. so come creative or remain a lame
Before I cock back n aim… putting 3 in the front of you like Dia’s new name
Not a fan of how you flipped 3viction. Putting 3 in front of him doesn't really come across as inspired writing to me.
U really think you Ken beat me? Ur no streetfighter when facing the best
This Guile get wrecked, so Ryu better run b4 I send a haduken to the chest
I know SF concepts are old, but this was a variant I actually enjoyed. Even though Ken is a reach for can, Guile has been done so many times throughout the years, and I pronounce Ryu as Roo. There were 3 things I didn't particularly like about it standalone, but when put together for the overall concept I thought it was pretty cool. 3 wordplays, 1 being a nameflip. I loved the attempt.
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
This is another variant of a wordplay that has been done before. I don't mind variants at all, so it was straight. What I didn't like was how it paid off. Tell family to was somewhat bad wording on the execution
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
Fire. Hilarious, too.
Fags like you dont handle guns. Never causing anyone to hurt
If this queer is holding up arms, theres probably some dude taking off his shirt
Again. Fire. Nice back to back punches.
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
Dope. You finished strong, bro. Wasn't into most of your verse then you went hard af down the stretch.
Miracle had 3 bars that were excellent to cap his verse off. This gave him the win.
v-Miracle
Ryno
Who’s fearin this dweeb, even ur hoe is really diggin my steez
I mean if u leave ur bitch w/ me, she’ll rarely check in like it’s the lyricist league
Coolish.. like the energy
We don’t follow em no, then flimsy lines r hollow fasho
Last time this kid had a nice rap, is when his whore of a mother swaddled em close
His mother's a whore bc she cared for him? LOL this was light
Fk ur typical flare, this fake ain’t gettin physical, swear
Homie if u mask up with the straps, it’s cuz the EMT’s r hauling u to critical care
I like this.. multis on point too
See ur rhymes have major flaws, we never thought this haters raw
Only way this battle goes to the wire, is if the docs r tryna save his jaw
Nice, nice
Dude is lost, i stepped in last minute w/ the blicky to prove ur soft
If u get another replacement after this match, it’ll be ur legs after I shoot em off
I liked the setup. Punch was kinda light because shooting legs off is incredibly hard to do especially with a blicky lol
Thought u lucked up guy? Nah, against me homie u suck, no lie
Cuz the only thing ur ‘flow charts’, is a sequence of terribly fucked up lines
This was nice
Good verse Ry... you're in form. Light work.
Miracle
Your 0-2 vs me.. so come creative or remain a lame
Before I cock back n aim… putting 3 in the front of you like Dia’s new name
Alright.. I pretty much get it without having to know Dia's new name I'm guessing it's ...U something
U really think you Ken beat me? Ur no streetfighter when facing the best
This Guile get wrecked, so Ryu better run b4 I send a haduken to the chest
Thought it was going to get really corny with the Ken setup and it did but it's not so bad
So many wounds you won’t survive. I’ll take ur throat n slash it
Doctors will give up trying to suture body & tell family to do that for your casket
lol... liked it
This creep don’t drive nice whips. I’m in the 2 door straight stuntin
If you find this pervert ina coupe he’s probably fucking a chicken or something
hahaha.. I liked the delivery here. Didn't need to rhyme on point and I think it had a more comedic effect here.
Fags like you dont handle guns. Never causing anyone to hurt
If this queer is holding up arms, theres probably some dude taking off his shirt
LMAO... hahaha.. sheesh why didn't I think of this
Line a bunch of guys up.. bet Ry will slurp’em good
Pull out dicks n watch bashlyk more dudes than a assassins hood
Alright
Came with comedy here. Good verse
So I liked Miracle's two bars the most but we're judging on an entire verse and who had the better verse. This is incredibly close so I will have to do a point system. I did the point system and it was too close to call..
My vote is a TIE but if forced to vote one way or the other.... Nahhh it's a tie for me...
Mira gets it
Last edited by Aero; November 4th, 2023 at 12:01 PM
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Originally Posted by Aero
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5-1
5-1 Miracle wins
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