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Thread: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (Plot Wins)

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    WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (Plot Wins)

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    We'll go 5 Mac?
    Plottin your demise.

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    I can easily go 16 but that would be overkill so lets go 10

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    Mac's good to go. He sent 10 in.

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    Will have a verse soon
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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
    Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
    Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
    This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.
    Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
    His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.
    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
    Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
    & seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.
    Last edited by Plot; November 6th, 2023 at 03:14 AM
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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    Jeeeezzz

    Why tear
    Down ur verse
    Like this?

    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
    Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
    The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
    Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
    Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
    & Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
    Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line
    Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
    Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    Plot:

    Nothing

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    Mac:

    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments

    Plot i feel like you really rushed this week. I get it shit happens. Tough to see tho cuz I think ur a good writer and clearly capable of winning against Mac. Mac ur opener I thought was cool. Wasn’t feeling anything else. That plot name play with the seasons was cool too but I’ve seen that against plot plenty.

    v/ Mac
    Last edited by Lenox; November 6th, 2023 at 12:08 PM

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.

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    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
    Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
    The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing


    I got Mac taking this, the bold was LOTB

    v/Mac

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.

    Legislator could have been dope bet fell short


    Seemed a bit rushed here Plot ive seen much better from you dawg

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    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
    Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
    The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
    Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
    Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture

    Got Mac here easily. Plot usually drops some fire especially as of late. Seemed rushed

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot

    I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
    Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.

    Wasn't feeling this.

    Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
    This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.

    I thought it was cool. Good recovery from opener.

    Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
    His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.

    This would of hit better to me but you mispronounced Amish. It's more like "honest." Aww-mish. But I liked the concept and the bar itself.

    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.

    Decent.

    Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
    & seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.

    I actually enjoyed this bar the most out of your verse. I loved the creativity with the wordplay.


    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments

    Nice personal to open with.

    Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
    The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing

    I don't know on what basis you're accusing him of biting, quoted examples would have been appropriate in this regard. I did think the nameflip was dope af. But the fake personal itself ruined this bar for me.

    Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
    Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture

    Wasn't feeling this.

    & Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
    Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line

    Wasn't feeling this.

    Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
    Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support

    Wasn't feeling this.


    I actually have Plot taking this 3-1. His punches weren't all solid connects but they were consistently average, while Mac had one dope bar that he opened with and then the rest missed for me.

    v-Plot

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Plot- first 3bars were meh, nothing that hit.. last two were ok.. couple bang could of hit a lot harder if written differently..
    Closer seemed a little lazy but I’ll accept it.. basic/Amish don’t rhyme for shit
    Mac- lazy writing was cool n LOTB.. I had a problem with ur opener bc installments and warrants doesn’t rhyme for me… either does nice shot/life support..

    This battle is a tough call.. both had trouble rhyming in a rap battle which is weird.. and both had misses..

    Imma give this battle to plot 2-1

    Vote PLOT

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    Plot

    I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
    Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.


    Mac.

    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
    Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
    Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture

    I have plot here. close very close but it came down to misses or near misses. I feel like Plot put a bit more creativity in his punches that missed. the midjourney punch from Mac was ok i think the wording could have made that punch the LOTB. as it is, it was still cool.

    v/Plot

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    I cant fit my thumb in while fistin your miss Mac
    Just keep feedin her 4 fingers, fat bitch is dreamin of Kit-Kats.
    my mind went to chicken fingers lol but i thought this was okay
    Dudes got no game in life or the ring, fists'll get no resistance
    This fight'll be all hand to mouth, like his pathetic existence.
    i like the concept but the execution is lacking
    Far fom the best in this text game, needs to get back to basics
    His wheel-house would be more...working a mill for the Amish.
    not a fan, doesnt rhyme
    So put a bullet in this cuck Mac, then find his slut still taking a dick
    & let another couple bang! Like his open relationship.
    light but not horrible
    Now what he got? He will prolly try to sue he's so fuckin soft
    & seek the highest legislator...To throw his body off.
    this was lotb although a bit lazy on the execution. still cool though

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    Jeeeezzz

    Why tear
    Down ur verse
    Like this?

    This cunt breaks down his style quite more than it warrants
    Bitch I’m dissin u upfront. while the shit u write comes in installments
    cool
    Guessing that’s all u got? with good reason I say its biting
    The thing about plots is after a few seasons its all lazy writing
    i like this
    Art schemed Plot quick n dirty. It was so low-diff u seem like kinda bitter
    Stream of shots’ll stop ya Midjourney. With no real life in the final picture
    not a fan
    & Nine at hand means face to the grass, fingers triggers is the Mac sign
    Trust this armband will give u a fast-pass quicker than a theme park line
    nah
    Gats autotuned, ought to Flatline “artists” who thought they a nice shot
    Plot unplugged would be tough to hear, but his fam aint withdrawing life support
    get what you're going for, wasnt a fan of as is

    fuck its close. have mac with 2 Il ike and plot with 1 i like and 2 i half liked. I thought the legislator punch was lotb so im gonna give my vote to plot

    v/ Plot

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    Re: WK01: (0-0) Mac vs. (0-1) Plot (OPEN FOR VOTES)

    4-3 needs votes

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