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@Kill Spree
@Wuxia
Check. 16 lines?
Sure. I aint writing a thing till this weekend though
16
ur old lady refuse to get prego, said ur a whiny cuck and lame
the bitch gotta 'NO DUE DATES' policy that puts mine to fuckin shame
u no show ALL. THE. TIME. i used to be a frequent supporter
ur the type to Bailiff shit gets real, cuz ur unable To Keep Ur Shit In Order
and ya taste in music is wack, best stay in touch with the kid
dog. I'd say give Serious Eczma try but u already Flake enough as it is
u ain't get that Onomatopoeia flip?!? nvm. let me hit this joint
guess u was on Discord slurpin Aer Balls & Completely Missed The Point
told us dudes like a brother. FUNNY. he said u was bottom-tier
want him to blow u off but have to settle for 'talk to you later Dom is here'
u aint bout that hood life fam, dont tell me u let the gun buck
ur idea of Struggle Bars is Tryin Hard as SHIT to word them like Unfuk
squaded up with goons now? DEAD maybe this guys a homo
Cross me and I'll let it Buck in ya Circle like it's the Jagermeister Logo
8 DAYS LATER: i posted 2 mags & had 3 battles tf is u thinkin
u got until Thursday/After Hours, drop or u won't live to see The Weeknd
Last edited by Wuxia; October 25th, 2023 at 09:28 PM
Wuxia aka Broke Lesnar aka Onslaught
Originally Posted by Wuxia
*scenario*
Wife leaving pool side knowing daddy just 6-0’d Aero.
Aero continues to clean pool
Wife walks in house & sees I have a fever and may not be able to perform & doesn’t want me to get our son sick.
Aero realizes a daughter was never in the situation and calls Blue Bayou to write next verse while wife fixes me a meal….**
Listen faggot…
My wifes bone broth bringin me back till im golden son
While your daughter comes home from bone broths after drinking bowls of cum
Plus she “GRABS ME A BEER!!!” after I dump inside’er
BUT last time we saw a group w/MADD? Was after she got killed by a drunk driver
You’ll get shot on sight; wit 1 click…splattered intestines
cover you in such solid battle hacks? Dia would shut RB down in a matter of seconds!
& your wordplay jus reaches to the sky! Guy just stop
Even if we put Ontological shit…vs me he’s finding god
The heat you shoot? Old school & deaded as shit
Broke bled from the clip & was found more dried up than Lay beggin 4 $pit
&&&&there goes my votes! Fuck them & this dead verse
Yeah i got a Mad head, but u should see how Broke daughters neck jerk!
*Aero finishes pool cleaning, calls his dad who wears gloves to drive vehicles because hes so rich he gave aero enough money to consider the dweeb a fund baby so pick him up at the end of my driveway..*
I got “stick up kids” that leave Broke in piles
They pull up to WuBlock & dead’m harder than Ghost & Styles
I appreciate your work here, its tight, theres hope for text
But you wont see Lessen better shape, than a tight rope around his neck
Opener was meh, bailiff was cool wordplay but I didn’t think the punch went hard enough
Eczema seemed forced n didn’t hit for me.. air balls was cool, buck circle was alright.. anything I didn’t mention was blah.. honestly I was kinda disappointed read this verse.. seemed like a verse riddled with mild hits, I’ve seen way better from u so I expected more here n maybe that’s what let me down.. as for kill… I skipped everything that wasn’t a battle bar… except the quote..the beginning shit and that shit in the middle I did not read so hopefully that doesn’t effect me knowing some of ur punches..
opener was ok, I’m assuming bone brothels? Anyways yeah ok… I didn’t get the Mandy drunk driver shit… finging god was ok.. spit was ok.. daughter blowjob was meh closer was ok… overall a verse full of ok bars and meh bars
Honestly this battle was disappointing on both sides… it is 3am and I’m tired as fuck so maybe I’m missing the ‘hot lines’ but just seemed like a lot of mild shit on both sides
I guess I will vote for kill for being a little more consistent. No hate fellas I usually like read shit from both of y’all but this wasn’t it
I’m going to re read tomorrow and see if anything has changed..but as of right now
Vote KILL
ur old lady refuse to get prego, said ur a whiny cuck and lame
the bitch gotta 'NO DUE DATES' policy that puts mine to fuckin shame
lol
u no show ALL. THE. TIME. i used to be a frequent supporter
ur the type to Bailiff shit gets real, cuz ur unable To Keep Ur Shit In Order
okay liked the wording
and ya taste in music is wack, best stay in touch with the kid
dog. I'd say give Serious Eczma try but u already Flake enough as it is
creative but you already did a no show bar that was better
u ain't get that Onomatopoeia flip?!? nvm. let me hit this joint
guess u was on Discord slurpin Aer Balls & Completely Missed The Point
I see what you did here but feel the punch could've been harder
told us dudes like a brother. FUNNY. he said u was bottom-tier
want him to blow u off but have to settle for 'talk to you later Dom is here'
lol
u aint bout that hood life fam, dont tell me u let the gun buck
ur idea of Struggle Bars is Tryin Hard as SHIT to word them like Unfuk
lol
squaded up with goons now? DEAD maybe this guys a homo
Cross me and I'll let it Buck in ya Circle like it's the Jagermeister Logo
clever
8 DAYS LATER: i posted 2 mags & had 3 battles tf is u thinkin
u got until Thursday/After Hours, drop or u won't live to see The Weeknd
missed as a punch but a solid concept
Wu, you had a lot of nice shots here and a few misses. I have you at 5/8.
Vs
My wifes bone broth bringin me back till im golden son
While your daughter comes home from bone broths after drinking bowls of cum
hmm not feeling it
Plus she “GRABS ME A BEER!!!” after I dump inside’er
BUT last time we saw a group w/MADD? Was after she got killed by a drunk driver
I dig it but some people gonna have to research to understand
You’ll get shot on sight; wit 1 click…splattered intestines
cover you in such solid battle hacks? Dia would shut RB down in a matter of seconds!
dead
& your wordplay jus reaches to the sky! Guy just stop
Even if we put Ontological shit…vs me he’s finding god
seems like filler
The heat you shoot? Old school & deaded as shit
Broke bled from the clip & was found more dried up than Lay beggin 4 $pit
lmfao
&&&&there goes my votes! Fuck them & this dead verse
Yeah i got a Mad head, but u should see how Broke daughters neck jerk!
okay
I got “stick up kids” that leave Broke in piles
They pull up to WuBlock & dead’m harder than Ghost & Styles
okay
I appreciate your work here, its tight, theres hope for text
But you wont see Lessen better shape, than a tight rope around his neck
okay
Kill, had some nice bars, some jabs, and some misses. Could definitely tell you were struggling to invest but did what you could. Got you at 6/8.
So. Close battle. Similar to Wu vs Ryno, you got a comedian vs a battler. Wu had a couple bars I either giggled at or laughed out loud to where as kill had a couple bars I was like damn. I have it at 5v6 with Spree taking it though. Could go either way but it just edged it for me. Great job fellas.
V ks
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
u no show ALL. THE. TIME. i used to be a frequent supporter
ur the type to Bailiff shit gets real, cuz ur unable To Keep Ur Shit In Order
squaded up with goons now? DEAD maybe this guys a homo
Cross me and I'll let it Buck in ya Circle like it's the Jagermeister Logo
told us dudes like a brother. FUNNY. he said u was bottom-tier
want him to blow u off but have to settle for 'talk to you later Dom is here'
Vs
& your wordplay jus reaches to the sky! Guy just stop
Even if we put Ontological shit…vs me he’s finding god
e heat you shoot? Old school & deaded as shit
Broke bled from the clip & was found more dried up than Lay beggin 4 $pit
I appreciate your work here, its tight, theres hope for text
But you wont see Lessen better shape, than a tight rope around his neck
Ok battle , not up to y’all standards I don’t think, but I also feel like broke dropped 30 bars in the last 2 days … I’m not a fan of the constant other battles /members name drops in this battle . One is cool I guess but I felt like there was the dom drop the aer drop , the spit , dia.. I feel like y’all were just reaching for angles lol .. kill I wasn’t a fan of the intro lol or the outro for that matter lol it was close though .. I think I’m going with Wu , thought he had a couple of more stingers , don’t think anyone reallyyy had a haymaker to swing it… idk it could go either way , I’m going with Wu made me laugh a couple of times
Vote Wu
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Wu
Opener was dope
Bailiff was light wp was nice
Serious XM was dope
I thought air balls was nice
Dom is here was fire
Struggle bars was iight
Jäegermeister logo was dope too
Closer I fuck with.
Vs
Spree
Opener was oooook
MADD was dope
Battle hacks was cool
Ontological was a fire NP
Dried up was dope too
Mad head was ehh
WU block was fire. Lotb
Closer was ok
Wow! Dope battle imo. Thought y’all put the verses together well. Props.. idk man I loved brokes vs and his approach but I felt like spree was going for the kill. In this case the harshness overpowered. Plus the lotb imo.. I mean I like the comedy but I feel it didn’t clown hard enough to overcome the attack mode spree was in. Just felt like Wu want to clown and spree wanted him dead. I appreciate both styles and feel like if spree missed on one more bar then it’s going to WU but since he didn’t I gotta edge this to spree In a tight but dope battle.. nice read fellas.
Spree.
ur old lady refuse to get prego, said ur a whiny cuck and lame
the bitch gotta 'NO DUE DATES' policy that puts mine to fuckin shame
u no show ALL. THE. TIME. i used to be a frequent supporter
ur the type to Bailiff shit gets real, cuz ur unable To Keep Ur Shit In Order
u aint bout that hood life fam, dont tell me u let the gun buck
ur idea of Struggle Bars is Tryin Hard as SHIT to word them like Unfuk
squaded up with goons now? DEAD maybe this guys a homo
Cross me and I'll let it Buck in ya Circle like it's the Jagermeister Logo
vs
& your wordplay jus reaches to the sky! Guy just stop
Even if we put Ontological shit…vs me he’s finding god
The heat you shoot? Old school & deaded as shit
Broke bled from the clip & was found more dried up than Lay beggin 4 $pit fire
&&&&there goes my votes! Fuck them & this dead verse
Yeah i got a Mad head, but u should see how Broke daughters neck jerk!
I got “stick up kids” that leave Broke in piles
They pull up to WuBlock & dead’m harder than Ghost & Styles
I appreciate your work here, its tight, theres hope for text
But you wont see Lessen better shape, than a tight rope around his neck
niice.. soo wux started strong and got progressively worse, and spree started horribly but ended it like a champ.. the ontological followed by lay spit was a fire sequence to me. well worded and smooth flow. wux 2 openers were cool too and followed up nicely each other. then there are some ok bars in both verses. but I feel spree was simply harsher here. going for the throat. except his lame attempt at trying to be aero (opener)
thx v/spree good battle fellas
4-1 Kill Spree wins
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