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u beat WAG, huh?
can't believe this weirdo didn't lose, every punch u drop is bizarre
if u don't Egregious give me a minute, I'm Shocked at how fucking Awful u are
got 12 Gauge Remington Buckshot, the punk gonna need a vest
this bar's about to be Occult Classic, he Meddle I'll put Summon Demon chest
ur girl sprung off that Old Man Dick, we get busy while ur sleepin
she jerks me while I'm Pensioner ass, sucks me off then I Retire for the evenin
bae gets hype AF when I'm around, I expect the hoe to get freaky
she says "we have alot in Commandeer" and Takes Control when she Seize me
Allen beat me in the tourney finals, I'll dead u with mad schemes
so bring up A. Knight Merits cool yo, the .357 will put an end to ur Bad Dreams
Wuxia aka Broke Lesner
solo judging?
murda u, when ur soul leaves they'll contact Wu with a medium prolly
now you can overlook the situation with ALL of ur experience, being Disembodied
I'm saying how we all felt and expressing what I see if it helps
think of a hermaphrodite self impregnating...its fucking wrong that ur seeding yourself
swell ya face up, start punching till ya canine hitcha wisdom
so much blood coming out ya mouth Wack100 will sue-Wu for gimmick infringement
its funny but I'm bout to loc, ur're criminally ugly and plead with no contest
no bitch is going for Broke, even if she at rock bottom she wouldn't settle for Les
upping the Poles, hand me the cash to avoid all of the smoke
see me raising the stock high on a ya just to see you die Broke
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can't believe this weirdo didn't lose, every punch u drop is bizarre
if u don't Egregious give me a minute, I'm Shocked at how fucking Awful u are
dude this grew on me pretty dope
ur girl sprung off that Old Man Dick, we get busy while ur sleepin
she jerks me while I'm Pensioner ass, sucks me off then I Retire for the evenin
lol felt this was a bit of a reach
bae gets hype AF when I'm around, I expect the hoe to get freaky
she says "we have alot in Commandeer" and Takes Control when she Seize me
liked this
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swell ya face up, start punching till ya canine hitcha wisdom
so much blood coming out ya mouth Wack100 will sue-Wu for gimmick infringement
this is fire
its funny but I'm bout to loc, ur're criminally ugly and plead with no contest
no bitch is going for Broke, even if she at rock bottom she wouldn't settle for Les
this was decent
upping the Poles, hand me the cash to avoid all of the smoke
see me raising the stock high on a ya just to see you die Broke
see it, bit statementish
Whattup MV good to see ya here fam, also just found out Wu was broke.. Sup homie.. like a reunion out here.
Going to give it to broke. both had a few misses, i thought the egregious bar was edged you the battle. really never saw that flipped. the pension bar made me laugh just didnt reallly connect for me ... MV had a decent verse also that bar about wack 100 was fire. but the rest of it came a bit statementish to me. cool battle here i think broke just had a few more concepts that i liked a bit more.
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I'm on my phone at work so bare with me.
Wu:
First bar - had to re read a couple times but nice punch.
Second bar - really wordy.
Third bar - reaching
Fourth bar - pretty cool
Last bar - a bit wordy but solid punch
You definitely focus a lot on nameplays and wordplay and sometimes it hits but sometimes it can be a bit messy. You had some solid shots here but also had some concepts that got lost along the way.
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MV:
First bar: pretty cool
Second bar: I like the concept, could've been reworded maybe
Third bar: probably your best bar
Fourth bar: not a fan
Last bar: seems like a throw away finish
You started strong but started to lose momentum in those last two bars for me. That third punch though. Ooph man. Nice stuff.
Overall a pretty solid battle. You had one guy that went for the fences and though he missed here and there, he still went for it. You had another guy that had a strong start but threw the end away. I feel like if you're looking at it punch for punch. Wu just was the stronger fighter here. He wording, nameplays and wordplay edged the creativity side of it while MV was concept than punchline imo. Kudos to both but
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Originally Posted by Wuxia
can't believe this weirdo didn't lose, every punch u drop is bizarre
if u don't Egregious give me a minute, I'm Shocked at how fucking Awful u ar
ur girl sprung off that Old Man Dick, we get busy while ur sleepin
she jerks me while I'm Pensioner ass, sucks me off then I Retire for the evenin
vs
swell ya face up, start punching till ya canine hitcha wisdom
so much blood coming out ya mouth Wack100 will sue-Wu for gimmick infringement
its funny but I'm bout to loc, ur're criminally ugly and plead with no contest
no bitch is going for Broke, even if she at rock bottom she wouldn't settle for Les
rock bottom was very well worded imo and hit well. wack100 was also ok but very niche. Wuxia was harsher overall imo egregious was cool. pensioner was cool too. knight bar was also good but for me the other 2 were more outstanding. I think if MV didnt waste his last bar he could have got this. I got wuxia with more consistency
can't believe this weirdo didn't lose, every punch u drop is bizarre
if u don't Egregious give me a minute, I'm Shocked at how fucking Awful u are
I like this wordplay, have not seen it before, but it's a pretty light jab for an opener
got 12 Gauge Remington Buckshot, the punk gonna need a vest
this bar's about to be Occult Classic, he Meddle I'll put Summon Demon chest
not feeling this, doesn't hit IMO
ur girl sprung off that Old Man Dick, we get busy while ur sleepin
she jerks me while I'm Pensioner ass, sucks me off then I Retire for the evenin
decent word play
bae gets hype AF when I'm around, I expect the hoe to get freaky
she says "we have alot in Commandeer" and Takes Control when she Seize me
the chick/wordplay punches are feeling repetitive here
Allen beat me in the tourney finals, I'll dead u with mad schemes
so bring up A. Knight Merits cool yo, the .357 will put an end to ur Bad Dreams
OK, but you need to diversify your style instead of relying solely on wordplay. Throw in some misdirections & personals, and tighten up the wordplay so that it hits hard, needs to be meaner/more insulting
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murda u, when ur soul leaves they'll contact Wu with a medium prolly
now you can overlook the situation with ALL of ur experience, being Disembodied
weak opener, don't see any real cleverness here
I'm saying how we all felt and expressing what I see if it helps
think of a hermaphrodite self impregnating...its fucking wrong that ur seeding yourself
OK, but the concept could have been executed much more effectively, and needs a better set up
swell ya face up, start punching till ya canine hitcha wisdom
so much blood coming out ya mouth Wack100 will sue-Wu for gimmick infringement
not feeling this
its funny but I'm bout to loc, ur're criminally ugly and plead with no contest
no bitch is going for Broke, even if she at rock bottom she wouldn't settle for Les
again, not seeing any real wit here
upping the Poles, hand me the cash to avoid all of the smoke
see me raising the stock high on a ya just to see you die Brok
poor closer
While Wux can surely tighten up his style, it was enough to take this pretty easy IMO. No hate to MV, just focus on better concepts going forward
v/Wuxia
Egregious was cool, haven’t seen that & I’m always a fan of this kinda wordplay.. it didn’t pack a ton of sting but was def cool.. Pensioner was another cool wp .. closer was alright… I feel like I kinda od’ed with the wordplay.. every bar.. some of ur lines gotta have a punch to it… wp was cool thru out but u gotta mix some other shit in there, or flip the wp to have more sting in the end… cuz the shit you wrote was cool n like I said I like wordplay you just gotta flip it to pack more sting.. cool verse tho. MV had hermaphrodite which was alright..I was feeling the wack 100 line…. Going for broke felt a little wordy for me so it didn’t hit, along with the closer.. overall I gotta give Wu the win here for a better verse.. VOTE WU
5-0 Wuxia wins
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