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    Round 2 - 3. Fresh (1) vs 7. EXalted (3) -Ex Wins

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    10 or 12?

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    10 or 12?
    10.

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
    n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
    your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
    he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
    no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
    Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
    pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
    and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
    u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
    if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    Quote Originally Posted by Phalanx View Post
    This match has BotW potential. If both these guys lock in, this should be a war.
    [B]Fresh 60/40
    aka Habitat

    I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
    That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
    Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
    Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
    Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
    U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
    My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
    For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
    I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
    The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
    Last edited by Exalted.; March 26th, 2022 at 07:37 PM

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted OPEN FOR VOTES

    it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
    n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
    feels a bit old conceptually lol
    your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
    he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
    ehh, aight
    no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
    Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
    this was neat
    pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
    and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
    pretty slick
    u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
    if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
    ok, decent again

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    I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
    That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
    aight
    Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
    Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
    wasn't feeling this wording here
    Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
    U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
    I liked this
    My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
    For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
    not sure about "face in formation" as the ending there but I dig the concept and everything before that
    I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
    The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
    wasn't feelin' this either, ugh.

    I wasn't super impressed with either verse. Use to seeing fresher concepts from Fresh, and I feel like Exalted had the concepts but the wording felt weird in a lot of places so the impact wasn't felt as heavy from him... it's really close but I think

    Vote Fresh w/ the edge

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
    n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
    It's worded well for the punch but the wp has been done a lot on anyone who's name starts with Ex or X, which is a lot of people over the years. I've seen this a lot
    your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
    he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
    The Wonder wp is cool but needed a punchier flip
    no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
    Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
    The 'identify' wp has been done a lot too, but the punch is good. This is a good example of a generic bar that you can easily adapt to make a personal - Exalted gets criticism for confusing/overly complicated wording, so if you'd referenced that in the set up this would've hit harder
    pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
    and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same type terrain
    Cool. Haven't seen the wp before. Decent jab
    hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
    if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
    Yep, not bad to finish on
    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    aka Habitat

    I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
    That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
    It's a good concept but I didn't get it immediately, had to figure it out which takes impact. Still like it but I think the wording could've been like... "only thing doing a 180 is the semi circling your head"
    Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
    Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
    Same here. The wordplay is great but you have to stop and work it out.
    Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
    U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
    Bang. That's good. Hits immediately, good punch, good set up, good wording
    My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
    For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
    Cool
    I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
    The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
    Nah. I pronounce it "Hab uh LISS" not "Hab uh LIES", a quick google didn't find anything supporting the latter

    I got Exalted
    3TC

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh vs 7. EXalted

    Quote Originally Posted by Fresh View Post
    it ain't a game w/ me, i swear that you'll only get facts
    n it's funny, on his resume, droppin some solid shit is something that ex lacks
    Tf is this? Eminem did ex lacks wp...and 50 text battlers before him
    your wishful thinkin at best, I've seen your failures all unfurl
    he'll Wonder why hes in this mess while hopin it's the 8th one of the world
    Weak
    no impact with fists or the pen.. cant tell which of em is worse, kid
    Identify punch, while we're still trying to do that with one of ya verses
    Execution on point here but identify is old old
    pull up at ya moms crib, in plain sight you'll get slain
    and then the Rugged conceal your body before you're buried in the same typa terrain
    Cool
    u hide behind a facade, ur a pussy and you ain't even at all tough
    if u reveal ur true colours, it's black n blue from getting beaten the fuck up
    Oh hell na, this idea beeen dead
    Quote Originally Posted by Exalted. View Post
    I'm on to the final four baby, you losing twice is just crazy
    That's 0 in two. Ironic you'd ONLY see the semi-circle doing a 180°
    Cool idea, weak execution
    Previews are in: stage host, voters stopped for a late show
    Once they 'Throw- u Off' it cuz Fresh at 60 = rating for Rotten Tomatoes
    What?
    Your ranking is allll shoddy, beaten no namers & got cocky
    U follow, g? This fake gotta big head over small bodies like Alien Autopsy
    Fire
    My crew surround his girl w/ dicks out, makin more ways in
    For dead presidents she'll Rushmore in her mouth while face in formation
    Old wp, corny flip
    I evolved faster, but Phal need a handyman next week to start
    The winner stands before you; now this Homo Habilis behind me in charts
    Fuck no
    Rugged vs. Ufology
    Exalted wins

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh (1) vs 7. EXalted (1) OPEN FOR VOTES

    I got Ex here he had creativity over consistently how ever weird that is. Wasnt feeling the fresher opener I feel like 'shit' concepts are super old, didnt like the 'wonder' flip as a punch, 'identify' also a bit throw away but was worded well nice to read and personal. Rugged was interesting not sure if it works both ways for me, closer was ok Ive done true colours before.
    Ex opener was kinda dope, loved the semi circle 180 connection, the rotten tomatoes had mad potential too, unsure how the 60 fits in though. Alien autopsy was dope liked that one, rushmore had potential but wording issues on the punch, habillis the same good np but wording dosent work smooth for me.
    Good battle

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    Re: Round 2 - 3. Fresh (1) vs 7. EXalted (3) OPEN FOR VOTES

    Exalted wins

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