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    Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Kill Spree wins.

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2)

    Check. Planning for 12-14.

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2)

    Sounds good

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2)

    He’s beat
    A Disciple
    Echelon
    Malediction
    Mimic


    He’s lost to
    phal aka The Great One X2



    That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
    It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
    Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
    You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
    Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2)

    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
    So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
    Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
    Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
    No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
    So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes

    Kill spree: Opener was light for a personal. The Phal/dick line had some added humor factor but a slight reach felt you could’ve done more with a Phallus concept. Align pro bar was pretty dope solid hit. Engram np was ok again little reach but overall creativity on the flip.

    Grimm: Opener was pretty dope. 2nd bar like the humor factor there. The seasoned Indian cuisine line was pretty funny too.

    I felt battle was pretty even but I felt kill spree was slightly more creative with the wordplay n np hit. Probably can go either way humor factor vs creativity.

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes

    That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
    It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
    decent stab
    Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
    You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
    okay ...
    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    iight... the end could use better wording
    Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
    Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
    you love gun bars... pun was a lil weak
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    in grimm/engram... i little stretched.. wordplay wasnt bad though
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
    not feeling this


    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    okay
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    straight
    Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
    So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
    i looked dude up... if Wim Hof is an entendre let me know
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
    straight
    Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
    Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
    i dunno about this one
    No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
    So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
    could be better

    i got Grimm edging this out ..sorry Spree (i know what you're thinking.. but it's not what you thought)... spree should lighten up on the gun bars ... they're hurting his verses..

    vote - Grimm
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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes

    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy

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    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine

    pretty close but i thought grimm had lotb with his operner so hes gonna get my vote

    v/ justice grimm

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2)

    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Spree View Post
    He’s beat
    A Disciple
    Echelon
    Malediction
    Mimic


    He’s lost to
    phal aka The Great One X2



    That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
    It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
    Light jab w/ the personal.
    Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
    You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
    Not sure I like what this implies. That said, the personal hits.
    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    [B] Punch was a decent jab.[
    Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
    Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
    I laughed. Simple but timely.
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    I fucks with it.
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
    I like this. I did just if eyed, but I like your flip.

    Quote Originally Posted by Justice Grimm View Post
    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    Not bad. Just not the first time Ive seen this angle vs Spree.
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    Lol. Funny light jab.
    Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
    So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
    Feel like Im missing something? This whiffed for me.
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
    Solid jab.
    Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
    Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
    Not big on this. Light jab at best.
    No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
    So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
    This was mild...at best.

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    Not a bad battle. I got Spree landing the heavier shots. Grim just had too many bars I didnt like. Surprising, because he's been super consistent for most of the season.

    Vote - Spree

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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes.

    That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
    It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
    Not bad. The bad look/wears make up connection is OK. With a fairly direct punch bar like this I really need the execution to be flawless to like it and there’s some spelling and punctuation missteps here that, for me, do take from the impact (it’s “a lot”, not “allot” & “wears” not “wear’s”).
    Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
    You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
    OK. Personal punch idea is cool.
    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    Is JG aka Pro?. Pretty cool if so, although “you’ll never have a line” maybe could have been something stronger that still let the wp work. If he’s not aka Pro then ehhh it’s a bit of a reach to me
    Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
    Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
    OK, decent jab
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    I’m guessing the player’s name is pronounced like EN-grum in which case “in grimm” is passable and this is cool. Tight end set up tie in works also
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
    Cool np. Justify/proof aren’t quite the same thing, connection’s a little tenuous. Split you in half & you bleed tie in is good though and overall I like it

    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    Cool. Basic np flip but execution’s adequate
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    Cool. Punch is good. Wp is simple but the way it all ties in works
    Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
    So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
    Is wim hof meant to be a wp? If so it didn’t work for me. If not, too basic/not punchy enough to compensate
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
    Alright. Seasoned and herbs wps are olllld but the personal aspect helps and it’s worded strongly for the punch
    Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
    Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
    Ehhh. You did as well as you could with this punch wise but the wp/flip is just not doing it for me
    No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
    So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
    Nah seen Biden plays before and the punch wasn’t that strong here


    This battle is very close IMO. I’ve had to re-read and come back to it a few times. JG had streak, telekinesis, Indian cuisine that were all pretty cool. The other three I didn’t really like. KS had burst out which was basic but OK, not as creative as JG’s lines I liked. But the giants bar and the justify one were probably the best bars of the battle to me. Not by a lot, though. But enough. Other three bars of his were so-so. So let’s call it three quotables each, with KS having the very slightly better ones. Good shit fellas.

    V/ KS
    Last edited by Dominate; January 30th, 2022 at 07:47 PM
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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes.

    That win list a Bad Look, I’ll tear this lame fuck
    It says allot, when your biggest win’s a guy who wear’s makeup
    not bad opener..
    Faggot! Any muscle you fight?…leaves you rattled pal
    You’ve taken on that dick Great… & ur ass gets sore w/e you battle Phal
    I seen the concept.. not bad..
    I’ve beat phal w/bars you can’t stomach! Your shit is fuckin void
    You’ll never have Align Pro, but this gun’ll leave your gut destroyed
    cool..
    Battling ain’t your habitat! It’s nothing to choke & dead Grimm
    Or this gun have his heart ‘Burst Out’ like Fresh W/votes against him
    lol nice..
    Vs real comp acting tight,ends w/you dying, queer
    Ery’thing Engram verse a stretch, that’s why He’ll never be a Giant here
    ehh seemed a little streched..
    Your vet status holds no validation! So dude don’t push me
    Justify split you in half & you bleed? It ain’t the only proof you pussy
    nice closer...

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    Shoulda stayed playin Xbox, my bars fire n leave you kneeling n meek
    I sick my dogs on u first, then three shots turn Kill Spree into a streak
    nice opener..
    think you’re a Force, but next week you can tell it to Jesus
    Fine if you call my bars reaches… since I peeped yours n saw em using telekenisis
    had soooo much potential but just missed the way it was worded..
    Ya whole careers on ice! And in contention we all agree on voting him off
    So bring all ya methods to summit the peak. Only one I need to beat you’d Wim Hof
    nah..
    Don’t try n flex your wins, ya weak battles never end in a scene
    Can’t debate you’re seasoned, with a record packing more herbs than Indian cuisine
    decent concept.. just not really feeling this..
    Your lines are garbage too, recycled n all we finding is crap
    Got aspirations to trap? Ya bars sooo full of filler Slim Jim tried to sign him to rap
    okay..
    No runner ups in this race, all these voters ballots goin for me
    So as long as I’m here you best Biden ya time… like Kamala’s presidency
    not a great closer..

    I feel like this was fairly matched. However, I felt Justice would of easily taken this if he reworded some of his concepts. Because the concepts like the telekensis line and Indian Cuisine line had so much potential but just fell short for me.. although I did feel like he had LOTB with the Kill spree/dogs/streak line. Kill came slightly more consistent - maybe less creative concepts but overall more solid hits..

    V/Kill
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    Re: Contender's Match - Justice Grimm (4-3) vs Kill Spree (3-2) - Open For Votes.

    Kill Spree wins 4-2.

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