Week 1: Cody Nash (0-0) vs. Smash (0-0) - CN WINS VIA NS

[Zunto]

LLL Season 24

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Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!


@Cody Nash @Smash

[Cody Nash]

Look dweeb, look at your history... No one’s threatened or rattled
If I had a list of worries…it’s that you showed up to more sign in threads than your battles
His reputation is settled, I ain’t buyin’ it…I think that Smash don’t know enough
it’s funny you refer to yourself as DA GAWD and got less than a 50% chance of showing up
Thinks he’s a big green monster, says he’s 6’2” - but he don’t want me to try him
Cuz in his case, when I Hulk smash…it’ll be legendary like I’m droppin’ Andre the giant
Just a supersized faggot, check the logs, his whole track record got potholes
Why Zunto still tryna smash? dude less known for showin up than grindr dates at McDonalds
To win? He’d have to be forcing the voters..cuz yo, this game isn’t over
But if I smash on the buttons… it’s cause I’m known to break the controllers
Guess what y’all? I’m an admin now…and as my first act? I’m wasting it
I could administer shots to his shoulders…and he’d just cry like I vaccinated him

[Wuxia]

@Big Nash @Smash

[Zunto]

@Smash due tonight

[Zunto]

Cody Nash Wins via NS, OPEN FOR FEED

[Zunto]

Look dweeb, look at your history... No one’s threatened or rattled
If I had a list of worries…it’s that you showed up to more sign in threads than your battles
decent personal
His reputation is settled, I ain’t buyin’ it…I think that Smash don’t know enough
it’s funny you refer to yourself as DA GAWD and got less than a 50% chance of showing up
nah
Thinks he’s a big green monster, says he’s 6’2” - but he don’t want me to try him
Cuz in his case, when I Hulk smash…it’ll be legendary like I’m droppin’ Andre the giant
im not quite seeing what the punch is here bro
Just a supersized faggot, check the logs, his whole track record got potholes
Why Zunto still tryna smash? dude less known for showin up than grindr dates at McDonalds
lol
To win? He’d have to be forcing the voters..cuz yo, this game isn’t over
But if I smash on the buttons… it’s cause I’m known to break the controllers
good bar here
Guess what y’all? I’m an admin now…and as my first act? I’m wasting it
I could administer shots to his shoulders…and he’d just cry like I vaccinated him
nah


If this was just a no show verse then alright cool I understand. But if not, I think it was below par for you tbh. It probably would’ve beaten whatever smash would’ve posted if he had showed, but you’re better than this my man. I liked the smash on buttons punch but that was about it. I know you’ll kill it next week

[Chrit.]

Look dweeb, look at your history... No one’s threatened or rattled
If I had a list of worries…it’s that you showed up to more sign in threads than your battles
Super bland
His reputation is settled, I ain’t buyin’ it…I think that Smash don’t know enough
it’s funny you refer to yourself as DA GAWD and got less than a 50% chance of showing up
No... and this was worded poorly
Thinks he’s a big green monster, says he’s 6’2” - but he don’t want me to try him
Cuz in his case, when I Hulk smash…it’ll be legendary like I’m droppin’ Andre the giant
Wording isn't there again... concept isnt bad
Just a supersized faggot, check the logs, his whole track record got potholes
Why Zunto still tryna smash? dude less known for showin up than grindr dates at McDonalds
This is now 75% of your lines that are about no showing...
To win? He’d have to be forcing the voters..cuz yo, this game isn’t over
But if I smash on the buttons… it’s cause I’m known to break the controllers
Eh.... nah
Guess what y’all? I’m an admin now…and as my first act? I’m wasting it
I could administer shots to his shoulders…and he’d just cry like I vaccinated him
Super basic... Im assuming vax lines are played by now?

Damnit Cry... you actually rap... so fix your wording.

[Cody Nash]

I KNEW THIS FUCKER WOULD NO SHOW... check his history.

[Fresh]

Look dweeb, look at your history... No one’s threatened or rattled
If I had a list of worries…it’s that you showed up to more sign in threads than your battles
i like the concept but wording seems a bit off
His reputation is settled, I ain’t buyin’ it…I think that Smash don’t know enough
it’s funny you refer to yourself as DA GAWD and got less than a 50% chance of showing up
wasnt feeling this one although theres truth to it lol
Thinks he’s a big green monster, says he’s 6’2” - but he don’t want me to try him
Cuz in his case, when I Hulk smash…it’ll be legendary like I’m droppin’ Andre the giant
not feeling this one
Just a supersized faggot, check the logs, his whole track record got potholes
Why Zunto still tryna smash? dude less known for showin up than grindr dates at McDonalds
very basic imo
To win? He’d have to be forcing the voters..cuz yo, this game isn’t over
But if I smash on the buttons… it’s cause I’m known to break the controllers
not a fan
Guess what y’all? I’m an admin now…and as my first act? I’m wasting it
I could administer shots to his shoulders…and he’d just cry like I vaccinated him
basic jab here

overall felt lackluster and your nameplays didnt really work the way they could have. like when i hulk smash? if i smash the buttons? youre just throwing his name into a random sentence and not really using it in a more clever way. not sure if it was a no show verse but theres my feed

[Spree]

I get hulk smash.. when you hill someone one it’s either to truck or or slam. Like the Incredible Hulk or Hulk Hogan… but Hulk Smash is Incredible Hulk not Hulk Hogan.


Smash on the buttons was worded bad. Closer was cool.

Text is easy Nash come on bro! Smash sucks and is a giant faggot anyways

[Fresh]

Smash sucks and is a giant faggot anyways

lmfaooo

[Mac]

verse reads smoothly to me.. dont listen to them. I really dig your style

[Phalanx]

Opener was dope. Second line felt like a rehash jab of the first concept. Hulk smash was solid. Grinder flip was meh. Smash buttons had potential, landed light. Vacinstion closer was decent. Oversll, solid verse. Started real strong; then coasted towards the end.