Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
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@Fresh
Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Fresh
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he claim to have mad swag, ur a damn fag so u aint baggin no bitches
the Stories Zun Told are unbelievable as fuck n' should be erased from existence
U know this mod delivers. Aim at ur lil ones n I’m poppin triggers
ur Minions’ get raised by the long nose.. it Gru on ya girls like a father figure
Last edited by Zunto; November 2nd, 2021 at 04:57 AM
vote = zunto
i think his bar hit just that little bit harder and tighter.. was all round a tight match though i think fresh was raw but zunto just came through more professional.. zuntos experience really shone in this it was a lil quirky but yet straight forward with a punchy hit
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Fresh: Had never heard of ZunTold before now, fiction therapy is an interesting idea so +1 for the education. Set up was ok, Zun Told wordplay was a good idea but the execution let it down a bit.
Zunto: Set up flowed nicely. First time I read the second line I thought it was fire, minions raised by the long nose is hard. The long nose Gru on your girls part doesn't really make sense, the wordplay makes it sound good but I don't see how the long nose is growing on them unless you're referring to the very slight expansion of the weapon caused by the heat released when it is fired.
Edged to Zunto
Damn this was a close one!! I liked both bars and feel torn on the vote honestly haha Fresh get more points for creativity but Zunto felt more direct and connected like a haymaker. It’s a close one that coulda easily been voted either way though. Props!
Vote Zunto
Creative vs harder hitting. I think I got Zelph taking it with the heavier jab. Fresh could've hit harder but it was clever, ol' chap.
I wasn’t a fan of how Zunto finished his punch but as a whole I enjoyed his bar more.
Fresh didn’t hit for me this week. Every time I read it it just doesn’t come off as impactful.
V. Zunto
Zunto Wins 5-0
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