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Thread: Many Men........comedy version

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    Many Men........comedy version

    lol its a a parody..........i'm jsut straight clowning.........its just towards peeps in my town.....money hungry scabs.....................real po peeps.....who scab money every day

    [Friend]
    Man we gotta go get something to eat man
    I'm hungry as a motherfucker
    [trill]
    Ay yo man, damn what's taking homie so long son?
    [Friend]
    T, calm down, here he come
    [9 wallet grabs]
    [Friend n trill]
    Ahh, ohh, what the fuck!?
    [Friend]
    Ahh! son, protect yo wallet! Protect it!
    [Intro: trill - singing]
    Many men, wish money from me
    Chicken Salt in my eye dawg and I can't see
    I'm trying to be what I'm destined to be
    And olly trying to take my change away
    I put olly back in his hole for fucking with me
    My back on the wall, now you gon' see
    Better watch how you talk, when you take money from me
    Cause I'll come and take your credit card away

    Many men, many, many, many, many men
    Wish money from me
    Lord I don't cry no more
    Don't look to the sky no more
    Have mercy on me

    [Verse One]
    Now these pussy bums taking money from my hand
    Go on and get my refund motherfucker, betta understand
    I'm the rich-o in the mansion, that’s been found
    I'm the Eumundi king and I’ve been crowned
    When I come downtown, something special happen every time
    People try and scab, try n take what’s mine,
    I walk the block with the bundles
    I've been donating to the humble
    Swing the ox when I rumble
    Got money… you betta run-dude
    Got a temper bum, go'head, lose your head
    Turn your back on me, get mugged and lose your legs
    I walk around money in my pocket, coin aint neva been colder
    Till I bust a water bomb in your face, pussy, this beef ain't over

    [Chorus - singing]
    Many men, many, many, many, many men
    Wish money from me
    Lord I don't cry no more
    Don't look to the sky no more
    Have mercy on me
    Have mercy on my silver n gold
    Somewhere my wallet turned cold
    Have mercy on many men
    Many, many, many, many men
    Wish death upon me

    [Verse Two]
    Some days wouldn't be terrible, if it wasn't for scabs
    Being rich wouldn't feel so good, if stiffy didn’t wear rags
    Loosing cash gotta be easy, 'cause earning is hard
    Scum scabers, leave you physically, mentally, and financially scarred
    This if for my peeps on the block, chopping buds and cigars
    For the peeps doin detention, doing life behind bars
    I don't see only god can judge me, 'cause I see things clear
    Quick these crackers will give my black ass a hundred years
    I'm like Mc Cally Culcan in Riche Rich, you can call me a rich bastard
    Save money by any means, with my sniper moves mastered
    Errol switched sides on me, let peeps take money from-me
    I thought we was cool, why you want me to be broke homie?

    [Chorus]

    [Verse Three]
    Every day I give to the bums, but they don't give back nothing
    I know they scheming, they say they got money but they only bluffing
    In my nightmares, scabs keep stealing change from me
    Nibs says give me a dollar, or he’ll put a hex on me
    The BP didn't know much, when gum got stolen
    I got a drink from the fish cafe, drank it behind her holden
    I ain't gonna give it out for you motherfuckers all the time
    Are you povo nigga? You can't afford the lines
    In the bible it says, what goes around, comes around
    Almost got my money, three weeks later he got scabbed down
    Now it's clear that I'm here, for a real reason shit aint strange
    'Cause he got scabbed like I got scabbed, but he ain't fucking got no change

    [Chorus]

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    lol

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    thanx..............tis is pretty funny.............yo upping

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    dont normally like remixes...
    but bein honest...
    shit made me laugh...
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    DAt be classik, shit, funny as hell, uppin'

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    haha pretty funny..

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    Funny shit man........Lol

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    ........dat was seriously funny dawg........dat shit was cleva how u made da lines fit.........u had me laughin my mutha fuckin ass off........

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    lol trill = weird al of hip hop

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    aiyo trill this was hilarious, we gots to collab on a remix, yo...
    Hence Forward.. BURR!
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    Pretty nice. Mad me chuckle at some points.
    Originals.

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    that was pretty good, even if you look at it as not clownin. It had a nice flow, after the first verse anyways, and the lines fit the original pretty well.
    Good spit tRiLL, this was hilarity
    peace
    wordperfect?
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    DarkHisTory
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    lol crazy lmao

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    Great idea. Yea yea, it was funny. But most of you guys gotta really read it.

    Lyrically, this was tight. The flow wasn't perfect, but it was close enough. I turned on the beat to this and spit it to see how it went, good shit. One problem with this parody. In "Many Men" by 50, and in your version of it, alot of the rhyming words are the same. You want to make it different. Just one thing to stay away from.

    Otherwise, good drop man. Why is it stickied tho? Just 'cause you MOD this don't mean your drops should be stickied. Not being an asshole, just telling you.

    Peep the link titled "Reflection of Fate" in my sig.

    pZ!

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    Nice man

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