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    WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2) LETTER WINS

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    Cool.

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    @Letterman @JEM.

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    @JEM. Sent 10 to miracle

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    I only mentioned you cause these bars were meant for you!


    Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
    When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
    Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
    Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
    Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
    Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
    You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
    Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
    Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
    They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census

    Easy.

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    LETTERMANS VERSE
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    This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
    If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
    & he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
    So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
    For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
    It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
    I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
    This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
    All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
    Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2) VOTE NOW!!

    Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
    When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
    wording isn't to die for, but i like the idea even though it's obvious you're not measuring a grown womans height
    Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
    Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
    seen too many make up flips and this didnt freshen it up
    Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
    Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
    meh
    You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
    Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
    wtf is this setup LOOOL
    Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
    They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
    very meh

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    This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
    If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
    haha, coo
    & he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
    So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
    fucking fire, wording is dope too
    For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
    It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
    ughhh the wording and connection is so bad for how good this could have been w/ the wp. sick wp/concept tho
    I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
    This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
    tie ins could have worked better but once again, cool concept
    All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
    Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
    simple yet effective, if it isn't played it's cool

    ..

    breakdown says it all, v/ letterman

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2) VOTE NOW!!

    Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
    When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
    kinda predictable but decent nonetheless
    Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
    Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
    this type of flip can be very affective but make up been done and theres nothing fresh about your twist
    Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
    Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
    nahh
    You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
    Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
    wtf this is just odd
    Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
    They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
    not a fan

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    This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
    If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
    tried looking up jem and can't find anything to tie it in with your concept. Shouldn't have to do research to try and figure out your bar. not a fan of it. perhaps its good for people know know wtf jem star is or whatever
    & he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
    So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
    nice. current too. diggin it
    For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
    It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
    why would you be better off battling yourself? i like this bar but the ending punch makes it seem like you're an easier opponent than jem.
    I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
    This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
    couldn't find anything for fasfa. google corrects it to fafsa. miss for me
    All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
    Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
    cool personal

    JEM has a lot of potential but for me this verse fell mostly flat. Letterman had some nice punches and better attempts as well. I got Letterman taking it

    v/letterman

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2) VOTE NOW!!

    2-0 letter

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    Mvgt Letterman for an overwhelming edge in everything but openers

    While Jem could've made his opener BOTB with some minor wording changes and less lazy execution, it was still noteworthy. Other than that, shit was played out or missed. Dr pepp had potential but it seemed forced into a concept tbh

    I was really fucking with one liners and Gemini Man from Letterman. Shoutouts to Will Smith, I enjoyed that movie

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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2)

    Ask ya chick, I give her that clinical dick and fuck her right
    When I pin her against the wall - I ain’t measuring height
    not bad. cant remember seeing this flip
    Yet that loyal bitch even accepts that your manhoods a con?!
    Crazy how she wanna make up, while you have hers on!
    nah
    Homie… round here, you can’t win if you leaning that far
    Junkie! bicycle & that’s exactly why you can’t handle bars
    junk he buys'll kill right? points for creativity but wording could've been better fs
    You need a license to pop Glocks the size of clocks
    Dr.Pepper time, cuz when it flames you won’t want the shot
    not feelin this one
    Went to where you claim… but nobody knew who let is
    They was slamming doors as if I was there for the census
    concept could work even tho it's basically a jehova witness flip, which is played to death, but either way the execution wasn't nearly harsh enough




    This nerd could really quit rap to go & act on a screen
    If Jem star in a movie, he’d be a perfect fit for the kid picked last on the team
    ok ish, lil soft
    & he can’t pull bitches.. cuz when he flirts they’d rather die instead
    So many bad one liners, his pick-up game could rival Zelph’s last cypher thread
    cool
    For him this is a handicap match. You might have to get some help
    It’s no comparison between Gemini, man.. I would’ve been better off battling myself
    fire concept. gemini has been done against him but not as a movie reference as far as I know. wording could've been tweaked a little
    I gotta school money, tryna outrun a .762 when I’m squeezin the chrome
    This dummy should’ve known that bullets too fasfa him, so he better leave me alone
    too much of a reach with the wp considered its actually fafsa
    All I anticipate from you is trash. This fag is the worst
    Everytime we see you dropping Jem, we never expect you to do that in ur verse
    eh feels like a filler bar just to be done writing. very played np


    didn't think a lot connected for JEM, his best bar was the opener which was really a jab and then it fell off from there. letterman had a couple land and was more creative.

    vote CBjkdfj
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    Re: WK13: Letterman (0-0) vs Jem (2-2) VOTE NOW!!

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