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    SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia - OPEN 4 VOTES

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia

    Check. 20?

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia

    This tourney is done lol

    I'll do my best to show and match whatever you post

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia

    Let's do 16 then, lol.

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia

    Need an ext.

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia

    no problem

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia EXT

    u already forget summer classic ix?, al's premium stuff was dang terrific
    this fucking chivalry mind u how knight was decent enough to shank u with it
    speedballs when he's down in votes, the dope fiend inject it in his thighs
    so let's all ignore this 'has benediction', a bb hotshot fix = blessing in disguise
    rofl u dropped 50 bars against zelph, tbph i mean the tard got me vexed
    usually monster and red bulwark great, but u slept me with a garb wall of text
    dickriders think ur wp game creative, ur archive flips are light as can be
    u just change the wording to doctorate, ur an assclown to the highest degree
    bb u done fell off hard af forever ago, ur win/loss numbers are BUSTED
    and the debatables per month u gross? u should be pretty fucking disgusted
    word is ur soulmate recently left u tho, i used to chitchat with the tease
    ur hyperextended to give me blumpkin, bitch so active it did that to her knees
    i bet u thought ur gf was faithful, huh? blue i'm sorry but the ratchet lied
    so to recap let's just satiate the wiener, n gulped wads until she was satisfied
    witty's nerd poem duffed u at the lime, rofl i hear it was a dreaded thing
    okay blue ur topicals 're: choir practice', so put the .45 to ur ear and let it sing
    Last edited by Wuxia; August 14th, 2019 at 05:37 PM

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia EXT

    Wuxia in Round One
    u try to friend NC hof'ers and vets, need to fasten a hard grip
    cuz ur attempt is a failed enterprise, ur better off in captain picard's ship
    Woooo Shuh, it’s 2019 man..

    an enterprise bar?! lmaooo my god dawg ya spit’s is weak
    not only is that Play Dead…it sits on command, plays fetch & does tricks for treats
    my verses make the crowd go wild cuz i’m slick from the gullet
    when it comes to Woozy just leaves us feelin light headed & sick to our stomachs
    i fucked your girl ONE TIME & it was out with you
    enjoyed my company so much the bitch bought shares & did a Yelp review
    his girl wants to be with me, suck me off then take my load in her throat
    & after i Letterkenny win her back?! LOL the thought alone's more jokes then the show
    nothing but a soft little pussy there’s no might in this bitch
    if i say anything’s ‘hard done by’ Lesnar.. i’m bringing up his shitty life as a kid
    so when it comes to you droppin dope lines that are gnarly n’ hurt
    i don’t just have reservations…i have four course meals plus a hearty desert
    forever the bitch of his crew, excluded from deals cuz they know he’s shook n’ fake
    won’t even invite em to the Spot. they don’t trust em as ‘back-up’ when it comes to Pushin Weight
    i obliterate poser’s so trust he's spewin’ vomit, shook..
    punch em in his mouth so hard bubbles form in the corner like comic book
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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by Wuxia View Post
    u already forget summer classic ix?, al's premium stuff was dang terrific
    this fucking chivalry mind u how knight was decent enough to shank u with it
    unique. Good opener.
    speedballs when he's down in votes, the dope fiend inject it in his thighs
    so let's all ignore this 'has benediction', a bb hotshot fix = blessing in disguise
    okay, good jab.
    rofl u dropped 50 bars against zelph, tbph i mean the tard got me vexed
    usually monster and red bulwark great, but u slept me with a garb wall of text
    decent personal
    dickriders think ur wp game creative, ur archive flips are light as can be
    u just change the wording to doctorate, ur an assclown to the highest degree
    all right, jab
    bb u done fell off hard af forever ago, ur win/loss numbers are BUSTED
    and the debatables per month u gross? u should be pretty fucking disgusted
    nah, seems like you gave up here
    word is ur soulmate recently left u tho, i used to chitchat with the tease
    ur hyperextended to give me blumpkin, bitch so active it did that to her knees
    don't like the wording here, I get the concept though.
    i bet u thought ur gf was faithful, huh? blue i'm sorry but the ratchet lied
    so to recap let's just satiate the wiener, n gulped wads until she was satisfied
    wording again....ok concept.
    witty's nerd poem duffed u at the lime, rofl i hear it was a dreaded thing
    okay blue ur topicals 're: choir practice', so put the .45 to ur ear and let it sing
    cool
    Quote Originally Posted by Blue Bayou View Post
    Woooo Shuh, it’s 2019 man..

    an enterprise bar?! lmaooo my god dawg ya spit’s is weak
    not only is that Play Dead…it sits on command, plays fetch & does tricks for treats
    lol, all right opener
    my verses make the crowd go wild cuz i’m slick from the gullet
    when it comes to Woozy just leaves us feelin light headed & sick to our stomachs
    cool follow up
    i fucked your girl ONE TIME & it was out with you
    enjoyed my company so much the bitch bought shares & did a Yelp review
    funny, ok jab
    his girl wants to be with me, suck me off then take my load in her throat
    & after i Letterkenny win her back?! LOL the thought alone's more jokes then the show
    nah, I get it though.
    nothing but a soft little pussy there’s no might in this bitch
    if i say anything’s ‘hard done by’ Lesnar.. i’m bringing up his shitty life as a kid
    ok, decent jab
    so when it comes to you droppin dope lines that are gnarly n’ hurt
    i don’t just have reservations…i have four course meals plus a hearty desert
    decent.
    forever the bitch of his crew, excluded from deals cuz they know he’s shook n’ fake
    won’t even invite em to the Spot. they don’t trust em as ‘back-up’ when it comes to Pushin Weight
    nice play here.
    i obliterate poser’s so trust he's spewin’ vomit, shook..
    punch em in his mouth so hard bubbles form in the corner like comic book
    wording hurt you here but cool punch

    Did not notice these battles going on right now. Good to catch one. Cool battle here, first time that I hear about Wuxia.
    Reminded me of some old some old school me. Definitely gotta work on the wording a bit mmore. Take some time to develop your
    concept. Blue, dope punches. Spend some time, double checking your wording. Will def make the punch smoother and hit harder.

    #ForTheCulture

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia - OPEN 4 VOTES

    u already forget summer classic ix?, al's premium stuff was dang terrific
    this fucking chivalry mind u how knight was decent enough to shank u with it

    dope opener. 9/10

    speedballs when he's down in votes, the dope fiend inject it in his thighs
    so let's all ignore this 'has benediction', a bb hotshot fix = blessing in disguise

    the hasbeen addiction wp is clever & cool but overall the idea just doesnt come off as very smooth or natural to me. 7/10

    rofl u dropped 50 bars against zelph, tbph i mean the tard got me vexed
    usually monster and red bulwark great, but u slept me with a garb wall of text

    tying the bulwark wp into the wall of text idea is dope, my only issue is the "monster and red" part of the line aren't really tied into anything, so they're just kind of hanging out there for no reason other than making the redbull wp work. 8/10

    dickriders think ur wp game creative, ur archive flips are light as can be
    u just change the wording to doctorate, ur an assclown to the highest degree

    lol i dig this and it was funny, 9/10

    bb u done fell off hard af forever ago, ur win/loss numbers are BUSTED
    and the debatables per month u gross? u should be pretty fucking disgusted

    eh doesn't come off as fresh or clever as some of the other bars. 7/10

    word is ur soulmate recently left u tho, i used to chitchat with the tease
    ur hyperextended to give me blumpkin, bitch so active it did that to her knees

    I like it, but I think your set-up should have some reference to "hyper" which would be difficult to do. If you pulled it off somehow I think that would've taken this bar to the next level. 8/10

    i bet u thought ur gf was faithful, huh? blue i'm sorry but the ratchet lied
    so to recap let's just satiate the wiener, n gulped wads until she was satisfied

    eh this kinda implies that you're trying to feed the wiener until it's full. Not digging the execution here at all. I'm also not super read up on RB style wp's, but I would venture a guess that "Satiate" has been done before more than once. 6/10

    witty's nerd poem duffed u at the lime, rofl i hear it was a dreaded thing
    okay blue ur topicals 're: choir practice', so put the .45 to ur ear and let it sing

    you could've done more to make the "re:" part of this wp work. I definitely know I've seen a handful of acquire/a choir flips, so that also takes some of the freshness off this. 6/10


    an enterprise bar?! lmaooo my god dawg ya spit’s is weak
    not only is that Play Dead…it sits on command, plays fetch & does tricks for treats

    eh nah not really feeling this one to be honest. 6/10

    my verses make the crowd go wild cuz i’m slick from the gullet
    when it comes to Woozy just leaves us feelin light headed & sick to our stomachs

    I know what you're doing, but I think you could've called him "Wu" at least once or twice in a previous bar or your intro. It's kind of like a breadcrumb for voters to follow and help them understand that this is a name flip. Overall this is cool though. 8/10

    i fucked your girl ONE TIME & it was out with you
    enjoyed my company so much the bitch bought shares & did a Yelp review

    I thought this was funny & dope. 9/10

    his girl wants to be with me, suck me off then take my load in her throat
    & after i Letterkenny win her back?! LOL the thought alone's more jokes then the show

    eh the wordplay is cool but I think when a bar lands it should either be funny enough to make me laugh or aggressive. When you drove this home, you were kind of somewhere in the middle and it missed for me. 6/10

    nothing but a soft little pussy there’s no might in this bitch
    if i say anything’s ‘hard done by’ Lesnar.. i’m bringing up his shitty life as a kid

    Kinda the opposite of the last bar where I'm not crazy about the wp aspect but the tail end was humorous enough to save the bar. 8/10

    so when it comes to you droppin dope lines that are gnarly n’ hurt
    i don’t just have reservations…i have four course meals plus a hearty desert

    Nah, reservations is dated and the tail end of the wording here was also kinda meh for me. 6/10

    forever the bitch of his crew, excluded from deals cuz they know he’s shook n’ fake
    won’t even invite em to the Spot. they don’t trust em as ‘back-up’ when it comes to Pushin Weight

    What holds this back for me is the spotter concept is dated, but what I do appreciate is that this works on a few different levels and syntactically it doesn't have any holes. 8/10

    i obliterate poser’s so trust he's spewin’ vomit, shook..
    punch em in his mouth so hard bubbles form in the corner like comic book

    I like this. Should've been "a" comic book or "comic books" but I can overlook that. Funnily enough I was trying to come up with a bar similar to this a couple days ago but gave up on it. You pulled it off 9/10


    so unfortunately I've got 60/80 for both parties.

    chivalry & doctorate are highlights for wuxia
    yelp & comicbook for blue

    I'd vote this a tie, but that really won't be productive. Honestly, this is a culture clash for me and I'm trying to be respectful of that. I think wuxia had the more creative and clever wordplay and phonetically the wordplay works seamlessly. But zooming out and looking at the overall placement of how the wordplay fits in the sentence on both sides, it just falls apart in some areas. That's why I've never been a huge proponent of the wp-heavy style. Blue is guilty of it, too e.g. the letterkenny bar but to a somewhat lesser extent.

    overall v/ blue

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia EXT

    Quote Originally Posted by slecht View Post
    Did not notice these battles going on right now. Good to catch one. Cool battle here, first time that I hear about Wuxia.
    Reminded me of some old some old school me. Definitely gotta work on the wording a bit mmore. Take some time to develop your
    concept. Blue, dope punches. Spend some time, double checking your wording. Will def make the punch smoother and hit harder.

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia - OPEN 4 VOTES

    vote - blue

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    Re: SEMIFINALS: Blue Bayou vs Wuxia EXT

    u already forget summer classic ix?, al's premium stuff was dang terrific
    this fucking chivalry mind u how knight was decent enough to shank u with it
    cool flip
    speedballs when he's down in votes, the dope fiend inject it in his thighs
    so let's all ignore this 'has benediction', a bb hotshot fix = blessing in disguise
    i reaally like the idea, execution was a little off imo. fire concept tho
    rofl u dropped 50 bars against zelph, tbph i mean the tard got me vexed
    usually monster and red bulwark great, but u slept me with a garb wall of text
    cool
    dickriders think ur wp game creative, ur archive flips are light as can be
    u just change the wording to doctorate, ur an assclown to the highest degree
    lol i actually can't remember seeing a doctorate/highest degree play somehow
    bb u done fell off hard af forever ago, ur win/loss numbers are BUSTED
    and the debatables per month u gross? u should be pretty fucking disgusted
    eh not crazy about this one
    word is ur soulmate recently left u tho, i used to chitchat with the tease
    ur hyperextended to give me blumpkin, bitch so active it did that to her knees
    not feeling this much either
    i bet u thought ur gf was faithful, huh? blue i'm sorry but the ratchet lied
    so to recap let's just satiate the wiener, n gulped wads until she was satisfied
    clean wp, could have made this hit harder imo
    witty's nerd poem duffed u at the lime, rofl i hear it was a dreaded thing
    okay blue ur topicals 're: choir practice', so put the .45 to ur ear and let it sing
    needed to work this out a little more, another really dope idea tho

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    an enterprise bar?! lmaooo my god dawg ya spit’s is weak
    not only is that Play Dead…it sits on command, plays fetch & does tricks for treats
    ok opener. little obv
    my verses make the crowd go wild cuz i’m slick from the gullet
    when it comes to Woozy just leaves us feelin light headed & sick to our stomachs
    eh, not feelin this np a ton.
    i fucked your girl ONE TIME & it was out with you
    enjoyed my company so much the bitch bought shares & did a Yelp review
    lolll dope flip.
    his girl wants to be with me, suck me off then take my load in her throat
    & after i Letterkenny win her back?! LOL the thought alone's more jokes then the show
    cool
    nothing but a soft little pussy there’s no might in this bitch
    if i say anything’s ‘hard done by’ Lesnar.. i’m bringing up his shitty life as a kid
    ok
    so when it comes to you droppin dope lines that are gnarly n’ hurt
    i don’t just have reservations…i have four course meals plus a hearty desert
    ok flip
    forever the bitch of his crew, excluded from deals cuz they know he’s shook n’ fake
    won’t even invite em to the Spot. they don’t trust em as ‘back-up’ when it comes to Pushin Weight
    decent
    i obliterate poser’s so trust he's spewin’ vomit, shook..
    punch em in his mouth so hard bubbles form in the corner like comic book
    seen a few speech bubble plays, this was cool tho


    Pretty close. I thought Wuxia was gonna be tough to match at first but he started to fall off in the second half. He was more original imo, had a couple concepts that were fire but the execution wasn't quite there for me. Blue wasn't quite as original with his concepts but was more consistent overall. Props to Wuxia for swinging for the fences and trying to be creative but overall Blue landed more so I gotta go with him here.

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