LLL Week 10: Blue Bayou vs Joe Boston / blue wins

[King]

verses due: MONDAY 11:59PST
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Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



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[Blue Bayou]

I will drop the max

[Joe Boston]

Hi sir

[Joe Boston]

20 straight bars @Blue Bayou

Joes that ambitious motherfucker, his girl gets wet by my financial gain
He waste his life getting high all day, no wonder the bitch left cuz Blue Cheese Strain.
I’ll inflict pain to families and the innocent I’ll fucking burn you alive
Power of Daenerys Targaryen I’ll have your block looking like Season 8 episode 5
You thrive for a reputation I’ll slap you outta retaliation for real
Full palm will remove all masculinity your new appearance will develop into a Snapchat gender reveal
Navy seal stealth mode the way I move to execute the grapple
For a fact this kids a Sapp these heavy hands will hit em harder then a fucking defensive tackle
Say its natural for grown men to cry, that soft shit with me it don’t fit
You’re such Asad faggot I wanna shoot you, but the Khaled to you exposing your inner bitch
Stitch those exit wounds quickly, these shells will enter skin deep
Talk that thug shit then approach with a Melatonin, barrel on his chin I’ll put his fucking ass to sleep
Weep when your family’s gone could give a fuck how devastating
If any of them want smoke I’ll make sure I apply holes for the proper ventilating
Over here dictating that your rap battles sensation, I’ll have you realizing what anguish is
Mention you do this For The Culture again I’ll slap u so hard next text verse you write will be in six different languages
Into gay shit like sucking filling out of Danishes, been in the closet for a century
His hobbies consist Of Mikes and Men, this fag ain’t built to make it through a 4 part Wu Tang Documentary
Hope you kill yourself eventually, plastic bag suffocating until there’s no sign of life
If it’s easier I’ll equip you the rope, I get it by the foot at a reasonable discount price

[Blue Bayou]

lately i’ve been talkin w/ ur girl. i relate to your bae it’s a fact
what can i say, she knows what i’m going through...starting w/ her labia flap
no-show after no-show this season, erry week you choke mortified fam
had so many ‘ducks in a row’ you’re now considered RB’s most organized man
you lost weight huh?! well that’s a lie that isn’t hard to trace..
say you’re eating Lean but judging by ur wording you just drink it at alarming rates
one bullet = certain death. i got NO plans to bring em for ransom
shot to the chest, that’s a Cap on his heart like they’re singin the anthem
soft kisses & sweet whispers. i’m w/ ya girl once i squeeze the led
i’ll get on her necromancer then laugh when she says ‘nah, just leave em dead’
sex is always a ruthless sesh. she’s got me feelin on her boobs n flesh
never visited Romania but when the time comes you can bet i’m leavin Bucharest
old man claims he’s blunt af & when going toe to toe he stuns
pulls no punches. just the muscles in his arm, neck & back when hes throwing one
what happened Joe? lately we’ve been confused & haven’t felt ya wrath
went from thinkin’ we’d bedazzled to thinkin you wear bedazzled belts n’ hats
don’t care how tough he’s actin cuz when i come to snuff he’s passin
stab a flathead up his belly - then screw my way to the top like a slutty actress
he’s wack n’ played, his crap is gay n’ what he lacks is flames
they’re only sayin this Manilla cuz i got Joe on the ropes worse than Cassius Clay

20.

[Sting3r]

Holy fuck this was dope. Joe with the punches and blue with some crazy ass wordplay. I think I enjoyed this as much as that Barc vs lay match. I was gonna leave a vote on some quickly get it done shit but I’ll bust out the laptop tonight and give a breakdown.

Props

[Joe Boston]

Can we get some votes here!

[Joe Boston]

Can we fucking get a vote!

[Sting3r]

Joe: best verse I’ve read from ya. Started off strong and kept it going I can respect it. Consistent bars and only 2 misses imo the sap line is kinda old and played and the closer was just ok. Your opener was sick and he wutang reference was awesome

Blue: had some stingers and cool flips. I felt like you had 2 of the best bars of the battle but also a few misses. Cashius clay and bedazzled fell short. Neck romancer and screw your way to the top we’re crazy lines gd


I’m conflicted with my vote because the 2 lines from blue could take the win against a lighter verse. But joe was consistently hitting with funny set ups that led to good punches all around. I think joes punches hit harder but blue was more creative. I’ve seen the cap pine before otherwise that’s a banger but that takes something away from it. I think this comes down to style preference and what joe brought was dope. I wanna c joe va lay doubt in the future for the style match up. Although I want to vote tie I think joe got it

Vote Boston

Not gonna make it to a laptop this week end otherwise I woulda done b4b breakdown

Big ups and props

[JEM.]

Joes that ambitious motherfucker, his girl gets wet by my financial gain
He waste his life getting high all day, no wonder the bitch left cuz Blue Cheese Strain.
Dope.

I’ll inflict pain to families and the innocent I’ll fucking burn you alive
Power of Daenerys Targaryen I’ll have your block looking like Season 8 episode 5
mmm... I guess the matter of fact of this bar made it just okay to me.

You thrive for a reputation I’ll slap you outta retaliation for real
Full palm will remove all masculinity your new appearance will develop into a Snapchat gender reveal
Good.

Navy seal stealth mode the way I move to execute the grapple
For a fact this kids a Sapp these heavy hands will hit em harder then a fucking defensive tackle
Naaa... I've seen Sapp bars for years now and this was not a new twist.

Say its natural for grown men to cry, that soft shit with me it don’t fit
You’re such Asad faggot I wanna shoot you, but the Khaled to you exposing your inner bitch
Dope

Stitch those exit wounds quickly, these shells will enter skin deep
Talk that thug shit then approach with a Melatonin, barrel on his chin I’ll put his fucking ass to sleep
Nice.

Weep when your family’s gone could give a fuck how devastating
If any of them want smoke I’ll make sure I apply holes for the proper ventilating
Pretty good.

Over here dictating that your rap battles sensation, I’ll have you realizing what anguish is
Mention you do this For The Culture again I’ll slap u so hard next text verse you write will be in six different languages
Not feeling.

Into gay shit like sucking filling out of Danishes, been in the closet for a century
His hobbies consist Of Mikes and Men, this fag ain’t built to make it through a 4 part Wu Tang Documentary
Okay.

Hope you kill yourself eventually, plastic bag suffocating until there’s no sign of life
If it’s easier I’ll equip you the rope, I get it by the foot at a reasonable discount price
Not bad.



lately i’ve been talkin w/ ur girl. i relate to your bae it’s a fact
what can i say, she knows what i’m going through...starting w/ her labia flap
lmaoooo.... that's cruel. Nice. Good opener.

no-show after no-show this season, erry week you choke mortified fam
had so many ‘ducks in a row’ you’re now considered RB’s most organized man
Dope.

you lost weight huh?! well that’s a lie that isn’t hard to trace..
say you’re eating Lean but judging by ur wording you just drink it at alarming rates
Nice personal

one bullet = certain death. i got NO plans to bring em for ransom
shot to the chest, that’s a Cap on his heart like they’re singin the anthem
Played mate. The cap/chest/anthem has been done and I just didn't see an agressive new twist on it
and I gave Joe the same feedback on one so I will be consistent here.

soft kisses & sweet whispers. i’m w/ ya girl once i squeeze the led
i’ll get on her necromancer then laugh when she says ‘nah, just leave em dead’
Nice! I HOPE everybody gets this bar.

sex is always a ruthless sesh. she’s got me feelin on her boobs n flesh
never visited Romania but when the time comes you can bet i’m leavin Bucharest
haha well done WP. High impact.

old man claims he’s blunt af & when going toe to toe he stuns
pulls no punches. just the muscles in his arm, neck & back when hes throwing one
Okay... the execution here kind of let me down ending the bar.

what happened Joe? lately we’ve been confused & haven’t felt ya wrath
went from thinkin’ we’d bedazzled to thinkin you wear bedazzled belts n’ hats
Lol... I laughed good humor punch.

don’t care how tough he’s actin cuz when i come to snuff he’s passin
stab a flathead up his belly - then screw my way to the top like a slutty actress
Dope tie ins, perfectly worded. Well done.

he’s wack n’ played, his crap is gay n’ what he lacks is flames
they’re only sayin this Manilla cuz i got Joe on the ropes worse than Cassius Clay
Nice.

Okay... soooo this was an unexpected read for me from Joe. The wording issues
are definetly being fixed... Some bars were really dope... here's the thing
in terms of IMPACT bars It hought blue matched and blue just came that bit more polished
so in a tight battle (that this is one) I will side with the more complete drop.

v/Blue

Dope read boys.

[Aero]

JB:

Weep when your family’s gone could give a fuck how devastating
If any of them want smoke I’ll make sure I apply holes for the proper ventilating
Over here dictating that your rap battles sensation, I’ll have you realizing what anguish is
Mention you do this For The Culture again I’ll slap u so hard next text verse you write will be in six different languages

harrrrrd!!!

Almost all of Blue's was tough.

[Skin and Bone]

Lately i’ve been talkin w/ ur girl. i relate to your bae it’s a fact
what can i say, she knows what i’m going through...starting w/ her labia flap
you lost weight huh?! well that’s a lie that isn’t hard to trace..
say you’re eating Lean but judging by ur wording you just drink it at alarming rates
one bullet = certain death. i got NO plans to bring em for ransom
shot to the chest, that’s a Cap on his heart like they’re singin the anthem
soft kisses & sweet whispers. i’m w/ ya girl once i squeeze the led
i’ll get on her necromancer then laugh when she says ‘nah, just leave em dead’
sex is always a ruthless sesh. she’s got me feelin on her boobs n flesh
never visited Romania but when the time comes you can bet i’m leavin Bucharest
old man claims he’s blunt af & when going toe to toe he stuns
pulls no punches. just the muscles in his arm, neck & back when hes throwing one

All the above made Blue kill this in my opinion. Other voters seem to think this closer than me but I gotta say I wasn’t really feeling much of Boston’s verse.. maybe it’s a style thing idk...

V/Blue

[$pitacular]

Joes that ambitious motherfucker, his girl gets wet by my financial gain 
He waste his life getting high all day, no wonder the bitch left cuz Blue Cheese Strain.  
Say its natural for grown men to cry, that soft shit with me it don’t fit
You’re such Asad faggot I wanna shoot you, but the Khaled to you exposing your inner bitch
Stitch those exit wounds quickly, these shells will enter skin deep 
Talk that thug shit then approach with a Melatonin, barrel on his chin I’ll put his fucking ass to sleep  
Over here dictating that your rap battles sensation, I’ll have you realizing what anguish is 
Mention you do this For The Culture again I’ll slap u so hard next text verse you write will be in six different languages

Vs

lately i’ve been talkin w/ ur girl. i relate to your bae it’s a fact
what can i say, she knows what i’m going through...starting w/ her labia flap
no-show after no-show this season, erry week you choke mortified fam 
had so many ‘ducks in a row’ you’re now considered RB’s most organized man
you lost weight huh?! well that’s a lie that isn’t hard to trace..
say you’re eating Lean but judging by ur wording you just drink it at alarming rates
one bullet = certain death. i got NO plans to bring em for ransom 
shot to the chest, that’s a Cap on his heart like they’re singin the anthem
soft kisses & sweet whispers. i’m w/ ya girl once i squeeze the led 
i’ll get on her necromancer then laugh when she says ‘nah, just leave em dead’ 
what happened Joe? lately we’ve been confused & haven’t felt ya wrath
went from thinkin’ we’d bedazzled to thinkin you wear bedazzled belts n’ hats

Nice battle gentlemen.. I got Blue with the win here, consistency was the key and even the ones I didn't quote from Blue were pretty solid. Joe you have def gotten better tho, enjoyed the read

v/ Blue

[Sting3r]

Up for votes

[Crash Carson]

I had a lengthy breakdown of this vote but being on mobile and the session timed out. Gonna keep this one a little shorter.

Joe I felt lacked in a lot of areas that Blue seems to have locked down throughout. Multis being a big part of it for me. Joe had some good concepts but I feel should've worked in more some more skill and finesse. Overall I kept feeling something was missing.

Blue was very consistent with multis and most the punches hit good. Had a lot of word play and the concepts were used well.

Both had a "fuck your girl" opener which I felt blues was stronger, and the closer I don't see there being much comparison.

Gotta vote
BLUE BAYOU