LLL Week 5: Resin M-I-C (1-0) vs. Josh S. (2-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit after first vote


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[Sting3r]

check

[Resin M-I-C]

16.

[Sting3r]

Yesir

[Resin M-I-C]

will be busy tonight, sent 16 to @Blue Bayou @ Josh S.

[Sting3r]

no respect.

I'm Bellator, he's Skelator; dude must be LSD tripping.. this is clinically planned
when I bring an acid flash back.. it will give his face more exposure than an industry plant

Your toddler said u a hot head. That lil twat aint new to ur rubbish..
tryna go Cray on me’ll be a wash then this stupid doodle get punished.

Resin got shitty concepts, guess he didn't know I had this work
rematch? sure, I'll do you like that shitty flip n' give you 2 L's after word
on some step dad shit; I'm smacking lips, swear to god it's overdose
now this shit is smooth sailing since I gave your mom a motor boat
what's in store for you in the hood? with no stamina & wimpy muscles??
you'll go from running the marathon to getting shot.. RIP Nispsy Hustle
my war haul is covered in splatter, graffiti over his legacy on each part
So if he 'bask he ought' not to cause i'll turn his body of work into street art
dudes known for laying low & spying leagues, I'm here to recall ya clearance
turns out Resin been rubbernecking so long it became his personal appearance
Corny by nature, a PPV where no 1's paying or viewing.. or even appears to care
Resin M-I-C's best battles were losses back in 05' but that's neither here nor there
Netcees hyping filler not soul crushing lines, none of my business, they can all up n die
S'why I'm feeling froggy with the mean mug..
..cuz I been sipping tea in yo hood this whole fucking time!

[Blue Bayou]

Resin's Verse

bash is a biter bro. U can’t tell me nothing bout it


I posted in the cypher but that’s gone now

It’s the damn wording You choose stop lying

That was 30 minutes of research homie u gonna dig this hole or what?

Weak af. If some 1 says I’m a biter and disses me ima fight to the death cause that’s wrong. U just wanna save face and be political like a true sociopath. Rat

Let the community decide? They already did u just keep changing names and playing games

etc, etc., give it a rest cuz


Aiyyo
Ayy u bitter as hell. Blamin Ry for stealin lines maann u a poor user..
but when the Bitmaps out.. only thing the pixel prove is ya image as a sore loser.
Yousa muthafuckn diva. You tryna twist shit into a perfect storm..
here, take an apostrophe S.. cuz this little bitch just showed us his Possessive form.
I’ma Big Shot to this kid.. you gonna realize these rounds bigger..
when the ratchet belts out.. it’ll ‘lay on top of ya organ’ like a lounge singer.
This an asssss whoopin. Got Josh feelin the damagin effect..
now people staring and wondering how ‘money function’ like a charity event.
You think u got worked befo but Res is beating u better..
one punch, nose fragments.. composure won’t help you try to keep it together.
I’ll try to lose on purpose. Nahh that’s just me bein brash & rude..
bro I could take a Dive here and STILL would make a bigger splash than you.
heat to ur face: ya nose meltin.. push ya wig back: this troll bending..
revolver: the roll pendin, get touched by somethin from the cylinder: that’s goaltending.
This gon be ur spoiler alert. There’s no debating what i show bud..
cuz if Josh brawlin.. you’ll just see Old Boy laid the fuck out with his own blood.
Mahfucka.
.
.

[Blue Bayou]

Upping over Ext's

Will make sure I hit this tomorrow

[hello there]

no respect.

I'm Bellator, he's Skelator; dude must be LSD tripping.. this is clinically planned
when I bring an acid flash back.. it will give his face more exposure than an industry plant
I don't really love this. It feels super wordy. The payoff isnt enough 4me.
Resin got shitty concepts, guess he didn't know I had this work
rematch? sure, I'll do you like that shitty flip n' give you 2 L's after word
Afterward? This is kinda wimpy if that's what it is. I like the setup tho.
on some step dad shit; I'm smacking lips, swear to god it's overdose
now this shit is smooth sailing since I gave your mom a motor boat
Its a mom joke. What do you really expect me to be excited about haha
what's in store for you in the hood? with no stamina & wimpy muscles??
you'll go from running the marathon to getting shot.. RIP Nispsy Hustle
RIPRIPRIPRIRPIRRPIRPRIRPRIRPRIRPIRR wgaf
my war haul is covered in splatter, graffiti over his legacy on each part
So if he 'bask he ought' not to cause i'll turn his body of work into street art
I mean this is a super stretch. Bask He Ought. I honestly don't get the other side of this.
dudes known for laying low & spying leagues, I'm here to recall ya clearance
turns out Resin been rubbernecking so long it became his personal appearance
Pic would be cool. This is fun.
Corny by nature, a PPV where no 1's paying or viewing.. or even appears to care
Resin M-I-C's best battles were losses back in 05' but that's neither here nor there
Ehhhh this could have been a lot better
Netcees hyping filler not soul crushing lines, none of my business, they can all up n die
S'why I'm feeling froggy with the mean mug..
..cuz I been sipping tea in yo hood this whole fucking time!
.

Really not my favorite Josh S verse man. Lots of light work. Lots of unfinished concepts IMO.

Resin's Verse











etc, etc., give it a rest cuz


Aiyyo
Ayy u bitter as hell. Blamin Ry for stealin lines maann u a poor user..
but when the Bitmaps out.. only thing the pixel prove is ya image as a sore loser.
Bitmaps and pixel is sick. I didn't really like the punch.
Yousa muthafuckn diva. You tryna twist shit into a perfect storm..
here, take an apostrophe S.. cuz this little bitch just showed us his Possessive form.
This is clever man
I’ma Big Shot to this kid.. you gonna realize these rounds bigger..
when the ratchet belts out.. it’ll ‘lay on top of ya organ’ like a lounge singer.
Ehhhhhhhh yeeaaahhhh ehhhhh
This an asssss whoopin. Got Josh feelin the damagin effect..
now people staring and wondering how ‘money function’ like a charity event.
I don't love these kinda punches from you tbh
You think u got worked befo but Res is beating u better..
one punch, nose fragments.. composure won’t help you try to keep it together.
So this and the two previous are just kinda played I feel like. Theyre fun punches though too. But you gave me your first two bars and now I have to hold you to that standard.
I’ll try to lose on purpose. Nahh that’s just me bein brash & rude..
bro I could take a Dive here and STILL would make a bigger splash than you.
This is ok.
heat to ur face: ya nose meltin.. push ya wig back: this troll bending..
revolver: the roll pendin, get touched by somethin from the cylinder: that’s goaltending.
Idk how goaltending and cylinder go together
This gon be ur spoiler alert. There’s no debating what i show bud..
cuz if Josh brawlin.. you’ll just see Old Boy laid the fuck out with his own blood.
Mahfucka.
Eh
.
.

Vote Resin First couple bars were great, rest were fine and cool little punches. Not my favorite Josh verse. I just wish Resin had more punches like Bitmap.

[Dominate]

I'm Bellator, he's Skelator; dude must be LSD tripping.. this is clinically planned
when I bring an acid flash back.. it will give his face more exposure than an industry plant
I like the bellator/skelator comparison punch individually.. but I think there's too much going on in this line. I think what you're going for is an attack line about throwing acid in his face, and that's fine. But there's two seperate wp schemes happening with acid/drugs and face exposure/industry plant. I know acid and face exposure connects to be the punch but I think it would be better/cleaner to just say "When I bring the acid his face will get more exposure than an industry plant" without talking about drugs at all, OR flip 'acid flash back' into an attack line without using the face exposure wp
Resin got shitty concepts, guess he didn't know I had this work
rematch? sure, I'll do you like that shitty flip n' give you 2 L's after word
I actually really like this. Pretty much all letter/punctuation flips are played these days but I haven't seen this before and I think you did it quite well with the 'rematch' flip and tying in the personal.
on some step dad shit; I'm smacking lips, swear to god it's overdose
now this shit is smooth sailing since I gave your mom a motor boat
Lol. Not bad. Funny.
what's in store for you in the hood? with no stamina & wimpy muscles??
you'll go from running the marathon to getting shot.. RIP Nispsy Hustle
hmmmm not so much on this one. "running the marathon" is good as a wp to flip with NH but it's not a diss on its own... good try with the set up but it still doesn't really work for me as a punch. Running a marathon is an achievement, something to be proud of... maybe you could've set it up with "you'll run from me all day before I catch you with the heater" or something, so that you're not saying he's literally running a marathon - just running a long distance FROM you
my war haul is covered in splatter, graffiti over his legacy on each part
So if he 'bask he ought' not to cause i'll turn his body of work into street art
I'm not catching this one. What's the other side of Bask He Ought supposed to be?
dudes known for laying low & spying leagues, I'm here to recall ya clearance
turns out Resin been rubbernecking so long it became his personal appearance
OKish but I'm not sure what a literal rubber neck means. There's potential for it to be a diss.. need something in the set up for it
Corny by nature, a PPV where no 1's paying or viewing.. or even appears to care
Resin M-I-C's best battles were losses back in 05' but that's neither here nor there
I really dig 'neither here nor there' as a wp here but not as a diss. It would need a set up like 'nc and rb are the only sites that matter/you were only good on small change boards'... even then though, that's blatantly untrue so it's hard to make it work
Netcees hyping filler not soul crushing lines, none of my business, they can all up n die
S'why I'm feeling froggy with the mean mug..
..cuz I been sipping tea in yo hood this whole fucking time!
set up is good here. This was coolish



Ayy u bitter as hell. Blamin Ry for stealin lines maann u a poor user..
but when the Bitmaps out.. only thing the pixel prove is ya image as a sore loser.
Good wording for the punch - image as a sore loser. Pixel is old but bitmaps is fresh to me. Maybe woulda said 'when WHO bitmaps out' otherwise feels like it shoulda been 'when the bite maps out'. A nitpick. Decent open.
Yousa muthafuckn diva. You tryna twist shit into a perfect storm..
here, take an apostrophe S.. cuz this little bitch just showed us his Possessive form.
Like the wp. Think the angle coulda been cleaner on 'possessive' - being a diva/drama queen is a bit of a tenuous connection
I’ma Big Shot to this kid.. you gonna realize these rounds bigger..
when the ratchet belts out.. it’ll ‘lay on top of ya organ’ like a lounge singer.
lol @ that imagery. Not bad. Would have preferred the set up to say something about exposing his heart/liver/lungs/whatever organ
This an asssss whoopin. Got Josh feelin the damagin effect..
now people staring and wondering how ‘money function’ like a charity event.
Don't like this one so much. Saw a lot of 'money' plays years ago when it was more popular to call people money instead of brodie or w/e the kids are saying now
You think u got worked befo but Res is beating u better..
one punch, nose fragments.. composure won’t help you try to keep it together.
Nah seen a keep it together line recently
I’ll try to lose on purpose. Nahh that’s just me bein brash & rude..
bro I could take a Dive here and STILL would make a bigger splash than you.
Heh good. Simple but direct and worded well for the punch
heat to ur face: ya nose meltin.. push ya wig back: this troll bending..
revolver: the roll pendin, get touched by somethin from the cylinder: that’s goaltending.
I'm looking for one of these bars in all of your verses now lol. Liked the cylinder/goaltending play
This gon be ur spoiler alert. There’s no debating what i show bud..
cuz if Josh brawlin.. you’ll just see Old Boy laid the fuck out with his own blood.
had to google the flip but it was cool. Good nameflip


Res got it with a few more hits. Seeing lotta potential from Josh though, good work man.

V/ Res

[Barcotic]

I'm Bellator, he's Skelator; dude must be LSD tripping.. this is clinically planned
when I bring an acid flash back.. it will give his face more exposure than an industry plant
not feelin it at all
Resin got shitty concepts, guess he didn't know I had this work
rematch? sure, I'll do you like that shitty flip n' give you 2 L's after word
decent
on some step dad shit; I'm smacking lips, swear to god it's overdose
now this shit is smooth sailing since I gave your mom a motor boat
ok
what's in store for you in the hood? with no stamina & wimpy muscles??
you'll go from running the marathon to getting shot.. RIP Nispsy Hustle
nah b
my war haul is covered in splatter, graffiti over his legacy on each part
So if he 'bask he ought' not to cause i'll turn his body of work into street art
miss
dudes known for laying low & spying leagues, I'm here to recall ya clearance
turns out Resin been rubbernecking so long it became his personal appearance
dece.
Corny by nature, a PPV where no 1's paying or viewing.. or even appears to care
Resin M-I-C's best battles were losses back in 05' but that's neither here nor there
ehh, this falls flat to me
Netcees hyping filler not soul crushing lines, none of my business, they can all up n die
S'why I'm feeling froggy with the mean mug..
..cuz I been sipping tea in yo hood this whole fucking time
lol word

1 gd punch
3 jabs
4 misses

Resin
Ayy u bitter as hell. Blamin Ry for stealin lines maann u a poor user..
but when the Bitmaps out.. only thing the pixel prove is ya image as a sore loser.
i meannn, good effort but this doesnt work for me due to 'bit'
cudve used bitmaps in a different manor to make it dope. its a miss as is
Yousa muthafuckn diva. You tryna twist shit into a perfect storm..
here, take an apostrophe S.. cuz this little bitch just showed us his Possessive form.
ok
I’ma Big Shot to this kid.. you gonna realize these rounds bigger..
when the ratchet belts out.. it’ll ‘lay on top of ya organ’ like a lounge singer.
ok
This an asssss whoopin. Got Josh feelin the damagin effect..
now people staring and wondering how ‘money function’ like a charity event.
nope
You think u got worked befo but Res is beating u better..
one punch, nose fragments.. composure won’t help you try to keep it together.
dated concept
I’ll try to lose on purpose. Nahh that’s just me bein brash & rude..
bro I could take a Dive here and STILL would make a bigger splash than you.
iffy, this barely hits & its bc of slick wording that it does
heat to ur face: ya nose meltin.. push ya wig back: this troll bending..
revolver: the roll pendin, get touched by somethin from the cylinder: that’s goaltending.
cool
This gon be ur spoiler alert. There’s no debating what i show bud..
cuz if Josh brawlin.. you’ll just see Old Boy laid the fuck out with his own blood.
Mahfucka.
dope

2 gd punches
3 jabs
3 misses

wow
all the heavy hitters went light this wk.
v/res

[King]

Resin got shitty concepts, guess he didn't know I had this work
rematch? sure, I'll do you like that shitty flip n' give you 2 L's after word
on some step dad shit; I'm smacking lips, swear to god it's overdose
now this shit is smooth sailing since I gave your mom a motor boat

those were ur best two imo. had some good ideas but needed to work some of them out better and ur wording hurt u in some sports.






Ayy u bitter as hell. Blamin Ry for stealin lines maann u a poor user..
but when the Bitmaps out.. only thing the pixel prove is ya image as a sore loser.
Yousa muthafuckn diva. You tryna twist shit into a perfect storm..
here, take an apostrophe S.. cuz this little bitch just showed us his Possessive form.
I’ll try to lose on purpose. Nahh that’s just me bein brash & rude..
bro I could take a Dive here and STILL would make a bigger splash than you.
heat to ur face: ya nose meltin.. push ya wig back: this troll bending..
revolver: the roll pendin, get touched by somethin from the cylinder: that’s goaltending.
This gon be ur spoiler alert. There’s no debating what i show bud..
cuz if Josh brawlin.. you’ll just see Old Boy laid the fuck out with his own blood.

pretty dope verse. wasn't much i didn't like


vote Res

[Exalted.]

Josh-- 2L's, motorboat was clean but tbh seen the concept done better. Basquiat\Bask he ought cool wp but the second meaning doesn't go anywhere. opener had too much going on but effort was there.

Resin-- bitmap creative, possessive was alright, good wording. Brawlin/Cylinder last two sealed it for ya..

V- Res

[Blue Bayou]

5-0 Resin wins