LLL Week 5: $pitacular1 (2-2) vs. Plot (2-1) - SPIT WINS, OPEN FOR FEED

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

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[$pitacular]

going 16

[Plot]

Sounds good, don't hurry

[$pitacular]

20 for this Aussie.

Toobs you ever try hot knives?
Basically get a 2 litre coke bottle and saw the bottom off it. Then heat your knives under the hotplate. Drop your hash on a knife and put the coke bottle in your mouth, put the other knife over the top of the hashed knife and deliver a little bit of pressure the smoke comes up and you catch it all in your coke bottle catcher.

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out

4TC

[Plot]

Might need an Ext, not sure of the time difference thing.
But I'll get mine in soon.

[Plot]

Cant make this, Im sorry.

[$pitacular]

Smh.
@Plot bro... I can give you until Midnight tonight PST.. lemme know whats good

[Blue Bayou]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
lol, very solid for a Resin play. enjoyed this
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
cool, cant recall seeing it done.. fresh, smooth & funny
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
dope, great concept delivered well
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
lol, good misdirect and phrase punch.. this was jokes
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
seen Plan B concepts with a similar take on the punch, but this was delivered well
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
pretty nice, good fresh take on a concept that is fresh to me
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
fire
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
seen both wp's done before tbh, but the personal and flip of both concepts together to form the attack line, as well as the wording, makes this hit imo
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
nah.. banner/green/hulk been done and this was a bit stale to me
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
pretty cool, solid closer


Dope verse. Very consistent with enjoyable fresh concepts that for the most part were all executed well throughout.

Sucks you got NS'd but hey, it happens... great read

[Sting3r]

Should have saved the wallaby line for dom since plot nonshowed. Nice verse spit woulda been a hot battle if plot showed up

[hello there]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off

4TC

He didn't drop cuz you're Blue v 2, you idiot.

jk but fr

Those are the bars I like.

The banner year shoulda been a Slytherin bar fwiw.

[Dominate]

20 for this Aussie.

Yes. Use up all your Australia punches on him. Perfect.



no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
Good spin on that personal angle, worded well.
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
Cool, haven't seen that wp before
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
Wooooo nice. Measley wp is fresh and the flip is tough
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
Lol good
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
OK flip on his name
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
cool
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
niiiice. I've done wallaby before but roos/ruse is fresh and this came off tough, liked it
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
I haven't seen either wp before so that's cool. I think having a wp that doesn't work both ways at the end of the line makes it a little awkward, maybe would work better the other way around - 'When the dingos off.. idc if it's feral just keep fucking u up' or something. Maybe just my preference. Still a cool line anyway.
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
Never heard of banner year, had to google. The shit you learn texting eyy. So that was kinda cool, obv never seen banner flipped that way but I have seen a lot of hulk lines which made the flip feel not fresh
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
pretty cool close


Really sucks Plot didn't show up. This was a really solid verse.

4TC

4TC!

[Barcotic]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
lol k
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
cool, a little light impactwise but coo
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
dope
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
good
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
dece.
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
didnt like
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
dope
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
ehhh, ok. last 1 made this 1 come off mediocre to me
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
ok
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
didnt like this 1

cool verse
v/spitacular

[A. Diction]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
....fiiiiiire. the resin tie in.........
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
...cool wp.....
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
....nice.....
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
....skr8.....
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
....lol.....
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
...nice....
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
...nice....
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
...fire....
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
....seen similar. Only almost in a fire verse so far........
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
...nice...


This shit was heat. Plot ns cuz he woulda lost imho

[Celph Taut]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
Not bad
was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
Lol, I like this. Smooth wordplay
can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
Decent flip
I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
Nice
I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
Not bad, a decent flip once again
dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
Not bad, set up is sort of the same as your last few bars
stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
Good
In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
Lol.
obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
Nah.
feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
Doesn't sound like an ender. Eh



Not nearly your best, Spit. Rhyme schemes were sounding boring and set up the same, but you had some decent flips/shots throughout your verse, alongside some gems.


Keep it up!

[JEM.]

no wonder he places last. now I just wanna see faces smashed.
I was hoping to get Resin.. not some fag who freebases hash.
Lmao, dope.


was gone for a hot minute, came back & see you actin all large
haven't been able to relax my absence cuz I been laughin so hard
Dope.

can't match my caliber on gun bars, I leave you nowhere to 'scape
headshots. your measley attempts end w/ red dots all over your face
Nice.

I'm from the streets, you're a bitch. we both had it rough in this world
we even share some of the same views. mostly POV stuff w/ ya girl
Haha ! YOOOOO…

I'll fuck up your mission, so hide your blueprints. believe me I'm bad
& whatever Plot, keep a plan B for your girl when she leaving the pad
LMAO

dunno know why you even speak. 4TC. no one as hot as my squad
you ain't fly, keep droning on and on & you'll get shot in your quads
Nice.

stop portaying a thug. I'm on point with hollow & be aiming the slug
you being tough is just a roos & the wallaby stained with your blood
DOPE. LOTB… oh wait… haha.

In the ring, even when the round ends - there's no way we go soft
dog I don't care if it's feral keep fucking you up after the dingo off
Nice.

obscene w/ the semi. hate & resent me but please don't temp me
I'm having a banner year.. you'll just end up angry & green with envy
Na… God damn… finally a miss.

feel the heat I serve now. bro I'm fire, no way you'll get it turned down
you should go backdraft some ghostwriters cuz ya shit is burned out
Solid.


God damn man.. You dropped a championship verse on a no-show… I feel for you. I’d be okay with you OPENLY recycling… Fire shit. From what I have read so far… Drop of the week… I hope the magazine shows you that level of love…