LLL Week 5: Barcotic (2-1) vs. Skurj. (2-2) - OPEN FOR FEED

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit after first vote


CHECKS,VERSES VOTES ONLY IN BATTLE THREADS!!!!!

[Barcotic]

sup

[Skurj.]

Yup

[Barcotic]

listen pancake, ur a farce. u aint able to spark
running up a tree is the only way u Maple on Barc
im state of the art. the only fuckin king remaining
Ur state of the art too - paper snowflakes and a finger painting
ur last opponent fed, n look..ur basic shit is garbage
u lost to a cheating Ex but couldnt take the kid regardless
presently im questioning more lines than i laugh at
+ im already in ur head. u mentioned me 4x in ur last match
thought ud catch a body ay? not today, fruit
my bars are thought provoking...
urs take the 'ignore it & walk away' route
wired by design, i supply the finest lines
salty bc im good? or bc every chick to Iodize inside
i cant give rb a perfect mark until certain parts'll omit u
hard to give it an Aorta sugarcoat, ur the heart of the issue
dont like hospital wards? best be walkin towards an exit then
fuck Accountability, this fight'll be stoppin before it gets to 10
he alone, shootin blanks. i brought a whole group of treys
figures theres no one Whisker when they comb thru his face
think anyone'd miss u if ur dead? heads up..ur worth abortin
mom'll find ya n say "Aw, Skur" then get 1 for her performance

[Skurj.]

@Skurj.

I’ll have it tonight super busy.

[Barcotic]

@Skurj.

[Blue Bayou]

Barc wins by NS open for feed

[A. Diction]

listen pancake, ur a farce. u aint able to spark
running up a tree is the only way u Maple on Barc
....I've used maple wp before but u tied into ur name. Skr8......
im state of the art. the only fuckin king remaining
Ur state of the art too - paper snowflakes and a finger painting
....ehhhh.......
ur last opponent fed, n look..ur basic shit is garbage
u lost to a cheating Ex but couldnt take the kid regardless
....good wording.....
presently im questioning more lines than i laugh at
+ im already in ur head. u mentioned me 4x in ur last match
......fucked up if true good bar.......
thought ud catch a body ay? not today, fruit
my bars are thought provoking...
urs take the 'ignore it & walk away' route
....plz dont use ay to multi. Bar was skr8......
wired by design, i supply the finest lines
salty bc im good? or bc every chick to Iodize inside
......skr8......
i cant give rb a perfect mark until certain parts'll omit u
hard to give it an Aorta sugarcoat, ur the heart of the issue
....seen aorta, jeff foxworthy did it for gods sake......
dont like hospital wards? best be walkin towards an exit then
fuck Accountability, this fight'll be stoppin before it gets to 10
...skr8......
he alone, shootin blanks. i brought a whole group of treys
figures theres no one Whisker when they comb thru his face
....not really feeling the wp.......
think anyone'd miss u if ur dead? heads up..ur worth abortin
mom'll find ya n say "Aw, Skur" then get 1 for her performance
.......Her performance for what. Cool np but the flip shoulda been diff imho......

[Celph Taut]

listen pancake, ur a farce. u aint able to spark
running up a tree is the only way u Maple on Barc
Nice concept and wording, OK execution
im state of the art. the only fuckin king remaining
Ur state of the art too - paper snowflakes and a finger painting
Decent
ur last opponent fed, n look..ur basic shit is garbage
u lost to a cheating Ex but couldnt take the kid regardless
Nice
presently im questioning more lines than i laugh at
+ im already in ur head. u mentioned me 4x in ur last match
Cool
thought ud catch a body ay? not today, fruit
my bars are thought provoking...
urs take the 'ignore it & walk away' route
Decent
wired by design, i supply the finest lines
salty bc im good? or bc every chick to Iodize inside
Lol, I liked it.
i cant give rb a perfect mark until certain parts'll omit u
hard to give it an Aorta sugarcoat, ur the heart of the issue
Concept is cool, wording isn't bad
dont like hospital wards? best be walkin towards an exit then
fuck Accountability, this fight'll be stoppin before it gets to 10
Good
he alone, shootin blanks. i brought a whole group of treys
figures theres no one Whisker when they comb thru his face
Decent
think anyone'd miss u if ur dead? heads up..ur worth abortin
mom'll find ya n say "Aw, Skur" then get 1 for her performance
Nah



Impressive showing. Some dope lines, good flips, and solid jabs throughout. Keep it up

[JEM.]

listen pancake, ur a farce. u aint able to spark
running up a tree is the only way u Maple on Barc
I thought this was dope.

im state of the art. the only fuckin king remaining
Ur state of the art too - paper snowflakes and a finger painting
Eh, this was okay.

ur last opponent fed, n look..ur basic shit is garbage
u lost to a cheating Ex but couldnt take the kid regardless
Lmao. Nice.

presently im questioning more lines than i laugh at
+ im already in ur head. u mentioned me 4x in ur last match
Facts, can’t beat that.. dope.

thought ud catch a body ay? not today, fruit
my bars are thought provoking...
urs take the 'ignore it & walk away' route
Mmm, this was pretty good.

wired by design, i supply the finest lines
salty bc im good? or bc every chick to Iodize inside
Dope lol.

i cant give rb a perfect mark until certain parts'll omit u
hard to give it an Aorta sugarcoat, ur the heart of the issue
Pretty good… Smooth when you read it outloud, even if the visual
Suggests otherwise.

dont like hospital wards? best be walkin towards an exit then
fuck Accountability, this fight'll be stoppin before it gets to 10
Nice.

he alone, shootin blanks. i brought a whole group of treys
figures theres no one Whisker when they comb thru his face
I thought this was actually really good.

think anyone'd miss u if ur dead? heads up..ur worth abortin
mom'll find ya n say "Aw, Skur" then get 1 for her performance
Dope.


You know... and I'm saying this despite I fully expect to face you in the future... I gotta give you probs, you bring it every week... and your ability to keep it direct, concise while delivering impact is impressive.

BUT w that said...

v/Skurj

lmao... na just fucking w ya good shit man.