LLL Week 5 Championship: King (4-0) vs. Blue Bayou (3-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Blue Bayou]

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[Blue Bayou]

Gluck man

20?

[King]

Gluck man

20?

Sounds good

[Blue Bayou]

King last week
Kill ur fam in shocking ways, u cant handle the trauma dude
I just got that Wow factor, now watch how quick these cans'll departure crew

Blue Bayou in February
we all got roles in this game, but you’ll never be as clever a guy..
realize departure always gunna play is that of the guy that was never as fly

i know everyone always comments about me writing drunk but..


i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by


aaaannnndddd NEW

[King]

Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks

[Dominate]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
Cool wp, good self personal/personal
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
I don't get the AIDS/government issue bits... Was Nipsey pushing that conspiracy theory or something?
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
Cool. I did a meet in the middle/compromise flip against Meters the other week but this angle was fresh.
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
Hmmm this is just OK. That wp is hard to flip and I can't say I would've done any better with it, but the bar reads to me like you just had to work too damn hard to get the wp to work and there wasn't enough space left over in the wording to make the punch sting.
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
Heh. cool personal/name flip. Some people might object to that pronunciation of Saladin but it's OK to me - people do say it that way
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
lol pretty cool concept.. I think a diff set up could've helped make it stronger... 'even ur brain is lazy' or something to tie the physical and mental aspects together
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
Pretty good here, cool wp
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
Not bad
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
LoL cool. Tied in the personal aspect nicely
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
Seen similar wp before but the wording was good here, still liked




Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
Mr execute.. coolish. Worded well in the set up
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
Don't think I get this entirely. I'm seeing 'if the shit he come(s) back with (is) heat' but unsure how either side of the wp connects with '4 shots & a kick in the head', besides heat/shots
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
Decent. I like that grazing flip
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
Like the wp. Would have been a stronger personal vs an opponent that puts up walls of swaying/bitching but still not bad here
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
Lol simple but kinda funny, not bad
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
Dece concept. Needed a better set up. "they keep sayin it'll be 50/50 but every time I leave this guy folded
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Fiiiiiiiiire
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
Wooooooo that's a banger
4 more lines
two more rhymes
OMFG
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks
Fuck you. Shoulda just let me win last week you asshole.


V/ Blue

[Blas]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by

v

Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros


Well this was stupid. Blue came pretty dope/consistent per usual but king just seemed to have kinda half assed it yet STILL had some cool stuff but it still wasn't enough since he literally posted 4 less bars. I don't even like voting on this but blue took it. Come on king

v/ Blue

[hello there]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
Gotta single this out
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by


aaaannnndddd NEW

That closer was clever.

Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros

Get an ext next time man.

Vote Blue

[Sting3r]

Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
u normally would have worded this better or not used it at all
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
lol
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
nasty
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
yes
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
could have just used this in the gun cypher
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
u would have worded this better
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks

i know everyone always comments about me writing drunk but..


i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
nice, feels like u been waiting to use this rebuttal, sorry to c it wasted here
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
not the hardest punch
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
nice
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
sooth wp with the flow n rhyme scheme, this is what i like
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
i dont get the punch, i get the salad in part tho.. im a bit high and this already seems like its going ur way
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
i don't get the punch man, i know what feigning means but im missing something wtf
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
nice wordplay
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
good scheme
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
ok
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
dope


aaaannnndddd NEW

this isn't the most deserving win for a champ battle, but i do think blues verse could have beat king even if king dropped in full. with that said, i would still have liked to see king bring the fire that he has shown every week so far. maybe he would have had some fire shit to keep the spot. but thats all in the past now

and new - v/ blue, more punches and creative lines than king. some of kings verse u could tell he didnt have time to refine

[A. Diction]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
.....skr8......
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
.....huh? I get they'll rush for aid after something happens lol.......
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
.....nice.......
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
.....nice. pry or a ties. Good wording......
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
.....dope. nit picking u coulda done something better with the flip than just saying 'I ain't talkn some guy from Egypt'........
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
...lol...
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
...cool wp.....
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
.....so u get mad then laugh once u get him mad....pretty good.......
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
....lmao dope....
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
....aite...

Vs

Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
....mr execute fire.....
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
.....not seeing a connection here. Tf........
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
.....skr8......
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
.....this is good but I've seen a lot of mag flips.........
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
....lmao.....
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
....skr8......
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks
......damn ur soul to hades, how dare u..........


V. BB gun

[Celph Taut]

Blue
i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
Lol. Nice
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
Everyone used the Nipsey flip in almost the same way, wish I would have seen more creative takes on this angle
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
Dope
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
Decent
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
Lol. Nice
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
Decent
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
Cool concept, eh execution
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
Nice
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
Not bad
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
Nice


King
Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
Decent
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
Nah
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
Wha?
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
Nah
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
Lol.
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
Decent
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks
Oh, Ok.



V/ Blue



Some of the cleanest stuff I've seen from Blue this season, and King was off his game. Easy win.

[JEM.]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
I thought this was really dope, like creative AF and perfectly executed.

clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
RIP Nipsey… and I think this was nice… but I don’t want to read another Nipsey bar.
Everyone kinda rushed to it.

stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
Lol, nice.

get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
Eh, okay.

fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
LMAO DOPE.

so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
Lol.

drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
Hmm dope concept, and all… but and you probably agree - it doesn’t just read
As smooth as most your stuff.

you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
I really thought this was dope.

fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
Lol. funny.

doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
Eh, okay.


Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
nice.

I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
Ok.

I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
With my accent I had to manipulate that shit out of this to rhyme LMAO… Nice bar.

Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
Funny, stinger.

Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
lmao. Dope.

Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
Eh, okay.

Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks

Shame.

v/blue.

[Barcotic]

i better not see a single word about some Hen n’ some Draft..
cuz when i’m writing Tipsy’s the first guy reaching for his pen n’ his pad
good
clap you in front of ya fam, got’em panicked sayin feds should get me
they’ll Hussle for AIDS after this government-issue has you layin next to Nipsey
hated all the diff. nip lines this wk tbh
stab a blade in your left side, then your right as i watch you die
i won’t stop pushing til they meet in the middle...that's a compromise
dope
get in my business, i’m at ya jugular snappin at the threat
my first order is your death so don’t prioritize gettin wrapped around ya neck
dope
fix your diet chubbs, life isn’t all about fries & reeses
you need to mix some Saladin King. & i ain’t talkin some guy from Egypt
ok
so fat you get halfway up the stairs and start gassin’ cow..
shiiit even feigning interest in something has you close to passin’ out
ok
drop the joint King. your wording’s AWFUL when you type ur flips
not only do you see me n’ retreat...you must be hideaway you write ur shit
coo
you’re soft af man, catch me laughin as i read all ur threats
serious, my expression turns from a scowl to a smile demeanor you get
dece.
fade to black. i don’t care if you’re the champ, you can state the fact
‘talk about rank’ all u want.. girls say that to their friends when you make a pass
lol k, this is slick
doesnt matter if he’s alone or if there’s a thousand fuckin friends w/ this guy
he’ll be independent regardless...the one his bitch wears to remember him by
fire

6 gd punches
3 jabs
1 miss

King
Every angles tight. Don't see it comin coz theres no flaw in my rap
U think ur 'misdirects acute', til I kill u for a 3rd time n now they callin me that
mr execute? this is flocka rh, very nice
I won't lose. If theres beef in store, my bars'll rip em to shreds
n If the 'Shitty comeback w/ heat', then he gettin 4 shots n a kick in the head
not so much, this is awk.
I'm torture u, this'll be ur last ride but we takin the scenic route
Surgical w/ rounds. Have them grazin' ya hair just to see the stress eat at u
miss
Used to pack a punch. King vs old Blue, maybe that'd been close
These days, only time Blue's posts a wallop is when rambles in the mag intros
good
Catch em late, him n wifey freakin when I run up in his place
Fuckin disgrace. He'll go from eating ass to taking a gun butt to the face
ok
Supposed to be close but i'll leave this guy folded
Odd that this even fight keeps having the same result like the dice loaded
no
Don't have time to finish this
Rap on some exquisite shit
Smashing these herbs
n Attacking these nerds
4 more lines
two more rhymes
My bad have fun with these geeks
n see u in a few weeks
disrespectful
u shud prob. make that hate mag n direct it at urself

v/blue bayou

[Exalted.]

Not really going to break down every bar.
Blue was pretty consistent.. liked the opener, saladin, rank
prioritize & compromise were cool too.

King -- mr execute was creative, post wallop was good
obv threw your last bars away..

vote - Blue

[Blue Bayou]

Blue wins