LLL Week 4: Ronin vs. Sinning vs. Lenox - OPEN FOR VOTES

[Blue Bayou]

verses due: Thursday 11:59PST
Minimum Lines = 12 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines



Extension: Up to opponent IF verse completed & posted/sent. Otherwise at the Moderators discretion.

VOTING CLOSES SUNDAY NIGHT/MONDAY MORNING
BATTLES SET SHORTLY AFTER!


2 No-Shows = Season Ban

NO BITING OR RECYCLING!!!!
Biting results in a SEASON BAN
Recycle Once = DQ
RECYCLE TWICE = BANNED FOR SEASON

Edits:
First Person can't edit after second person posts their verse
Second person can't edit after first vote


CHECKS,VERSES VOTES ONLY IN BATTLE THREADS!!!!!

[Lenox]

Check, 12

[Ronan]

Blah

[A. Diction]

Sent 12

[Lenox]

still mad about the Underground Railroad, racist text battler talking shit like we actually care.
If we ever hear him on a track, he’s up above yelling making sure no black ppl r there.
Lookin like a failed abortion the way ya dad sperm formed ya mug,
Bro, u look like an incest relationship and the wrong turn movies were at gun point forced to hug.
Not even for the right price this pussy would fight or step to me
so I’ll send 4 to ronins pancreas that’ll leave his entire life in Jeopardy.
it’s gun flashes and bangs if I see this faggot in sight.
Idc how u present urself on the screen, I’ll still show to sincity & kill em if he’s black or white.
The gun e’ll do you justice if u too scared for a fair one..
I’ll Put the eagle to ya back like khabib, my split personality @Cage d help u go airborne.
Look at me wrong n I’m cuttin, my blade jux fake homos.
One tap e’ll put ur head in a box.... like I’m tryna tag someone in a Facebook photo.

[A. Diction]

Shallow to Name himself that but he really Christian and attends mass...
& the Only real Sinning Going on is the Bishop balls deep in lil Lenny's ass.
Len why u wanna die? <rhetorical. Do him a favor n dead this scrub....
U pulled the wrong Cardinal ur walls will be painted Red with blood.
Kids a fake, u struggling bro. Just making a buncha mistakes...
Yall know Sinister the pot...in 15 minutes he gets to take a lunch break.
Sin's not shit, when the last time u drop something Shocking...
Fists like Electricity...fight? better reaccesserize getting gouged out thru the Sockets.

On the balcony depressed as fuck listening to landslide

Why am I such a faggot

Emo queer, self admitted fgt. Do I even gotta flame this lame...
So while u depressed listening to landslide, votes for me will be doing the same
I'm a lil older Len, so here's some tips, try to keep ur skinny spine from breaking...
If u dont wanna age always take naps, especially while u driving.

[Echelon]

I conceal and blunder, with my summer reign; you'll be feeling asunder
I'm spitting dope keys, that'll 'hit at Loki' when I hit him with lightning and steal his thunder!

I'm being apart of the dapper flow, lavish flows, sweeter than pistachio
I have a lavish flow, these 'bitches gave me a threesome again' call me Leonardo Dicaprio!

I'm burn fakes, earned cake; I'm showing you your learned fate!
This man is 'stealing your heart' like Scorpion on a first date!

I'll slay these freaks, you're my offering to pay the priests!
I'm rapping with ease, and Lenox how are you 'rather unique'; when you're name makes all the letters from A to Z! (AZ)

I'm rapping shit, I'm a rapper that'll bask in glitz!
My hell compels, and I'm giving LL,L's; like Cool J taking a L to Canibus!

[Clout]

@Sinning Please add another bar.

[$pitacular]

Lenox

still mad about the Underground Railroad, racist text battler talking shit like we actually care.
If we ever hear him on a track, he’s up above yelling making sure no black ppl r there.
HA! you should have put his name so it's direct.. you're battling two people.. but still, nice
Lookin like a failed abortion the way ya dad sperm formed ya mug,
Bro, u look like an incest relationship and the wrong turn movies were at gun point forced to hug.
again, name your target.. and this one's a nope
Not even for the right price this pussy would fight or step to me
so I’ll send 4 to ronins pancreas that’ll leave his entire life in Jeopardy.
I'm not sure where the concept is on this one..
it’s gun flashes and bangs if I see this faggot in sight.
Idc how u present urself on the screen, I’ll still show to sincity & kill em if he’s black or white.
under developed concept, but ok..
The gun e’ll do you justice if u too scared for a fair one..
I’ll Put the eagle to ya back like khabib, my split personality @Cage d help u go airborne.
nah
Look at me wrong n I’m cuttin, my blade jux fake homos.
One tap e’ll put ur head in a box.... like I’m tryna tag someone in a Facebook photo.
comparison/relation punch, don't like 'em unless they're witty as fuck.. so this is a miss for me

vs Useless

Shallow to Name himself that but he really Christian and attends mass...
& the Only real Sinning Going on is the Bishop balls deep in lil Lenny's ass.
eww
Len why u wanna die? <rhetorical. Do him a favor n dead this scrub....
U pulled the wrong Cardinal ur walls will be painted Red with blood.
nice!
Kids a fake, u struggling bro. Just making a buncha mistakes...
Yall know Sinister the pot...in 15 minutes he gets to take a lunch break.
weak but wp is kinda there
Sin's not shit, when the last time u drop something Shocking...
Fists like Electricity...fight? better reaccesserize getting gouged out thru the Sockets.
stretched wording, but ok
Emo queer, self admitted fgt. Do I even gotta flame this lame...
So while u depressed listening to landslide, votes for me will be doing the same
ok, not bad here
I'm a lil older Len, so here's some tips, try to keep ur skinny spine from breaking...
If u dont wanna age always take naps, especially while u driving.
weak af tbh.. you could have went with personals about his chick bro.. this was wack

vs Sinning

I conceal and blunder, with my summer reign; you'll be feeling asunder
I'm spitting dope keys, that'll 'hit at Loki' when I hit him with lightning and steal his thunder!
kind of cool w/the Thor ref
I'm being apart of the dapper flow, lavish flows, sweeter than pistachio
I have a lavish flow, these 'bitches gave me a threesome again' call me Leonardo Dicaprio!
nope
I'm burn fakes, earned cake; I'm showing you your learned fate!
This man is 'stealing your heart' like Scorpion on a first date!
compairson and a weak one at that
I'll slay these freaks, you're my offering to pay the priests!
I'm rapping with ease, and Lenox how are you 'rather unique'; when you're name makes all the letters from A to Z! (AZ)
wtf lol no
I'm rapping shit, I'm a rapper that'll bask in glitz!
My hell compels, and I'm giving LL,L's; like Cool J taking a L to Canibus!
weak comparison, and untrue, LL merked Canibus hard and you did nothing of the sort



Sinning.. you're not horrible, I am seeing slight improvements, but on a side note.. for the love of God.. don't vote on battles unless you're going to give the respect of a real breakdown cuz that vote in mine & Blue's did nobody any favors.. so I had it deleted.. don't vote if you can't give the respect the writers deserve for their effort. Kepp elevating and you'll get better.. read a lot of battles.. learn how we write them.. and emulate that.

Lenox.. you're talented you just need more practice and focus.. your opener was a nice personal on Ronin but you didn't tie it to him by name.. overall you seem to really get the direction, you just still have some road to travel to get where you need to be.. "Useless" or whatever you name is this week.. decent verse, not great but enough to win here. But stop being a fucking racist or I'll vote against you just because. Yeah, I mean it

v/ Useless

[Sting3r]

Shallow to Name himself that but he really Christian and attends mass...
& the Only real Sinning Going on is the Bishop balls deep in lil Lenny's ass.
haha
Len why u wanna die? <rhetorical. Do him a favor n dead this scrub....
U pulled the wrong Cardinal ur walls will be painted Red with blood.
cool wp
Kids a fake, u struggling bro. Just making a buncha mistakes...
Yall know Sinister the pot...in 15 minutes he gets to take a lunch break.
ehh, sin is stir or sinis stir either way not a big set up for the scheme
Sin's not shit, when the last time u drop something Shocking...
Fists like Electricity...fight? better reaccesserize getting gouged out thru the Sockets.
not my fav

Emo queer, self admitted fgt. Do I even gotta flame this lame...
So while u depressed listening to landslide, votes for me will be doing the same
ok

I'm a lil older Len, so here's some tips, try to keep ur skinny spine from breaking...
If u dont wanna age always take naps, especially while u driving.
punch was funny rhyme was non existent

I conceal and blunder, with my summer reign; you'll be feeling asunder
I'm spitting dope keys, that'll 'hit at Loki' when I hit him with lightning and steal his thunder!
rhyme was dope
I'm being apart of the dapper flow, lavish flows, sweeter than pistachio
I have a lavish flow, these 'bitches gave me a threesome again' call me Leonardo Dicaprio!
rhymed flow twice, punch didnt hit
I'm burn fakes, earned cake; I'm showing you your learned fate!
This man is 'stealing your heart' like Scorpion on a first date!
ha
I'll slay these freaks, you're my offering to pay the priests!

I'm rapping with ease, and Lenox how are you 'rather unique'; when you're name makes all the letters from A to Z! (AZ)
ehh

I'm rapping shit, I'm a rapper that'll bask in glitz!
My hell compels, and I'm giving LL,L's; like Cool J taking a L to Canibus!
2nd rd ko boiii

still mad about the Underground Railroad, racist text battler talking shit like we actually care.
If we ever hear him on a track, he’s up above yelling making sure no black ppl r there.
thats fucked up
Lookin like a failed abortion the way ya dad sperm formed ya mug,
Bro, u look like an incest relationship and the wrong turn movies were at gun point forced to hug.
bit wordy
Not even for the right price this pussy would fight or step to me
so I’ll send 4 to ronins pancreas that’ll leave his entire life in Jeopardy.
ok
it’s gun flashes and bangs if I see this faggot in sight.
Idc how u present urself on the screen, I’ll still show to sincity & kill em if he’s black or white.
not bad
The gun e’ll do you justice if u too scared for a fair one..
I’ll Put the eagle to ya back like khabib, my split personality @Cage d help u go airborne.
cool concept, khabbbbib
Look at me wrong n I’m cuttin, my blade jux fake homos.
One tap e’ll put ur head in a box.... like I’m tryna tag someone in a Facebook photo.
good, better

over all; ronin started off hot, had a couple ok decent bars, sinning had some fun concepts just need to polish the wording and punch lines, lenox had some good punches and a few misses.

i'd say sinnis 3rd, lenox 2nd

v/ ronin

entertaining 3 way, good battle folks, each of u had at least 1 bar or concept i really liked. definitely work on consistency, something i need to work on as well

[Blas]

still mad about the Underground Railroad, racist text battler talking shit like we actually care.
If we ever hear him on a track, he’s up above yelling making sure no black ppl r there.
it’s gun flashes and bangs if I see this faggot in sight.
Idc how u present urself on the screen, I’ll still show to sincity & kill em if he’s black or white.
Look at me wrong n I’m cuttin, my blade jux fake homos.
One tap e’ll put ur head in a box.... like I’m tryna tag someone in a Facebook photo.
^facebook bar fire, others were ok

vs


Len why u wanna die? <rhetorical. Do him a favor n dead this scrub....
U pulled the wrong Cardinal ur walls will be painted Red with blood.
I have no idea how cardinal plays in here but the WP is cool for the connection
Kids a fake, u struggling bro. Just making a buncha mistakes...
Yall know Sinister the pot...in 15 minutes he gets to take a lunch break.
once again the wp is good but how is sinister the pot a punch...it has to work both ways

^these aren't quotes but I felt the need to point out why because if they worked both ways it would have been cool.

Emo queer, self admitted fgt. Do I even gotta flame this lame...
So while u depressed listening to landslide, votes for me will be doing the same

also, you tried to rhyme breaking/driving and shocking/sockets? wtf

vs

I'm being apart of the dapper flow, lavish flows, sweeter than pistachio
I have a lavish flow, these 'bitches gave me a threesome again' call me Leonardo Dicaprio
I'm rapping shit, I'm a rapper that'll bask in glitz!
My hell compels, and I'm giving LL,L's; like Cool J taking a L to Canibus!

not quoting these bars because they were good, but because I started audibly laughing while reading them. thanks for that i appreciate it.

not sure whats going on in this battle here, lenox had some legitimately cool shit, useless had a bunch of wtf type shit and shit that didn't even make sense or connect or sometimes even rhyme and sinning did his normal im an alias troll shit but it was hysterical so word.

lenox won easy dunno what battle voters r reading lmao. v/ lenox

[Resin M-I-C]

sincity
facebook

vs

cardinal
sockets
landslide - lotb, that was nasty

vs

loki was decent


lenox lines seem like they’re almost there, i lil wording tweek on some and this might be a different story. Sin u gotta stop focusing on ur flow and just work on ur punches., there is no need for “sweeter than pistachio” unless this is an iron chef battle.. are u kevin c?.. simply useless had more solid lines here, with landslide as the best imo..

v Ronin/Useless, u guys have too many names here

[King]

Look at me wrong n I’m cuttin, my blade jux fake homos.
One tap e’ll put ur head in a box.... like I’m tryna tag someone in a Facebook photo
this was cool. your opener had huge potential, should have worked on that more.

vs

Len why u wanna die? <rhetorical. Do him a favor n dead this scrub....
U pulled the wrong Cardinal ur walls will be painted Red with blood.
Emo queer, self admitted fgt. Do I even gotta flame this lame...
So while u depressed listening to landslide, votes for me will be doing the same
these were dope. surprised there werent more personals tbh

vs

nothing
BUT...this verse had some of ur best attempts yet. i hope u keep moving in that direction homie.


vote Useless

[Spree]

Useless wins
4-1