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    Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical) - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    topic..snakes in the sea..

    good luck..due on december 29th 2018..good luck..

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Good luck sunecog

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Sea of Snakes

    seas of snakes, seep the day, sea the day, release the waves
    appease the gates, you conjure the black magic when you meditate
    prosper as a serpent, spit pray and hold dominion to darkness
    we have the cleverness and wit'; to hold the soul of a Garden

    Fold the jargon, release waves upon waves of glistening' water
    you are the conjure to black magic; a liquidious satyr
    insidious matyr; precious from above; sinister brilliance
    we have the prayers to hold sanctuary during a ministers wishes

    fellowship of the swear land; the serpent of Eazen prospers in prosperity
    we hold Dios's word as truth; our morality holds prosperity and peace
    we have the conjure of black magic; for the green envious of man
    For our good morals, and ideals hold zealousness in plan

    peace, and prosperity flourish our people with abundant joy
    we gasp a speech from our liquidious alabaster tongue; and the sun has a voice
    satyr of heaven; satyr of light; breathe peace and prosperity for joy
    for we are good people, with good morality in choice

    serpents conjure wishes and prayers for the voice of reason
    devils and angels bring forth burning swords, we are the conjure of demons
    suns of gods, bring forth water and rain; we sea the way
    for as we see god's waters, we spit pray; and swim with the seas of snakes

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    I’ll have mine tomorrow

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    Snakes in the Sea


    On the yacht dashing down the turquoise, crashing waves drowning out every decible of her voice
    I shoulda known to separate my girl from my boys..
    when you get betrayed itís usually cause you didnít have a choice
    Who knew that flip cup would turn into dick suck? Whoíd a thought battle shots would be why she sat on cocks?
    I had to man the ship! I couldnít keep an eye on the guy with the wandering eye, wide sigh from the opening of Janellas thigh

    9 in hand...Iím a prideful man, one move n that nine will blam
    One poetic shot is all itíll take to wash that hoe away like when the tide meets sand


    To be continued soon.. just wanna show you that I have some lines

    Snakes in the Sea


    The ale from my mason jar swished around with a bubble... ok....



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    It was a cold night on the yacht maned by my long time rival
    Fit for survival? I split Jit Dillinger like the day he is for no showing the final
    R. Kelly - are you chasing the pee? Kobe Bryant, young pussy slayin for me
    Twin beers or bears? Pubic hairs, burn it off with nair. Nope not your face crease

    - - - Updated - - -

    Pilgrimage, BON VOYAGE with my entourage through a looking glass
    Fish with a boule in it, why does my glass look like sour patch kids in ass
    Not nice, @Not N Nice whoís wait? Not for grabs keep eating slabs
    Last edited by MV; January 3rd, 2019 at 04:46 AM Reason: make reading and voting easier

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Gonna need ext until the morning

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pilgrimage View Post
    Gonna need ext until the morning
    You have till 11:59 pst tonight to drop a complete verse or you get the dq
    Stop fucking around

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Ok... I would do bar for bar breakdown. But its a Topical battle so I'll give categories.

    Flow: Pilgrim , I could read his weird transitions a bit more clearly. Sin, you had a steady flow but also stalled with a few pauses in between.

    Topic/Theme: Tie, I enjoyed both for what its worth. Even though Pilgrim was on some other type time including awkward references.

    Emotion: Sin, gets this category more easier just because his content gave relevance. I didn't really grasp too much emotion from Pilgrims just straight hardcore points. Though with that being said it didn't draw enough emotion for me as a reader.

    Vocabulary: Sin, had a more concrete style to present. Pilgrim, I liked yours too. Just a few simple words with riddles that didn't form so easily.

    Imagery:Tie, I believe both had a decent amount of concepts. Just not enough to override the next mans mindset. One or two good lines from both I enjoyed reading.

    Creativity: Pilgrim , even though it was a tie with the imagery. Those one or two lines had some creative depth to them. Sin almost had a good perception in the beginning but didn't utilize the rest correctly.

    Overall: I think this was a cool read from both writers. But I have to edge this victory to, Pilgrim slightly more. He barely edged this with his weird ass transitions... So random. His first section kinda saved him. Good read tho nonetheless..
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Re: Sinacog vs. Pilgrimage (Topical Battle)

    Merged Pilgrimage's post into one. upping for votes
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