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    AJ The Menace Echelon's Avatar
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    darkness

    Ascended from dementia', rendering light; i ascend in the night; birthing the sky
    i'm learning the chime of the bells of church, my name rings bells; seldom worth
    hell is birthed, melodies dance on melodies; abundance of heartbreak and sound
    for the sake i pronounce my self king; prince of darkness; spitting jargon
    i have minuscule and whimsical speech; i prosper and ponder; listen and teach
    sinister preach; for the good of this man will preach the eviliest deeds
    conjure black magic with black apparatus; sang tragic love songs during fasting
    for the quench of water, and the taste of fish; are everlasting
    malice is profound in my speech; i preach to crowds of sinful people
    may you abide by sin; for none of you are worthy of the opposite; sought a fish
    ponder living by myself; inherit wealth from the gods; i am a devil in a wedding gown
    surrounding woman with prince of darkness aura; aurora borealis oh' aurora borealis
    watch sinful prayers levitate from sinister preachers; for once they can look at this seether
    for as long as my spanish ethic is spontaneous with fire; i will be a leader
    sin is whimsical; watch it slither with the wind to my conscious
    for as long as light is shining brighter than sin; i see in the darkness..

    for i am darkness..

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    Re: darkness

    Hey sin!
    I thought this started off quite strong and I like the poetic strengths in the way this was taken. This wasnt as creative at it quite possibly couldve been, but it had some vivid visuals and a good poetic encompassing.
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