WK15: Jit (6-5) vs Cred (0-0) Jit Wins

[King]

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@Jit @Cred

[YG]

Lmk how many u thinking @Cred

[YG]

14 ready @Cred

[Cred]

Bet

[Cred]

I will drop in the am my guy

[Cred]

1 arm to his neck like the Big Show - let the shit go
U a fake, Rick Roll.. pussy the last Fire in ur palms was a Kindle
n ur girl? I’ll wave the shotty at her face
Have that bitch downin’ a pipe faster than El Chapos last escape
Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
I gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime

[YG]

Cred: self-proclaimed 'Gun Bar King'

About that...

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
Known for stealing a shorty, I'm swingin blades that are rippin this vet
Aint comin up for air like she had gills - kinda like the 3 slits in ya neck
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair

[Ryno]

1 arm to his neck like the Big Show - let the shit go
U a fake, Rick Roll.. pussy the last Fire in ur palms was a Kindle
ok ok
n ur girl? I’ll wave the shotty at her face
Have that bitch downin’ a pipe faster than El Chapos last escape
nah
Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
nah
gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
i like this
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime
decent closer

Cred: self-proclaimed 'Gun Bar King'

About that...

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
good opener
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
could have been worded better
Known for stealing a shorty, I'm swingin blades that are rippin this vet
Aint comin up for air like she had gills - kinda like the 3 slits in ya neck
like the tie ins, the execution though, you gotta get a tad bit more grimey
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
ok
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair
i like this

v. Jit... the mag punch & el chapo punch i felt let Cred down. I think Jit did his thing here. Wording could have been nicer but i liked his concepts better

[Barcotic]

school
1 arm to his neck like the Big Show - let the shit go
U a fake, Rick Roll.. pussy the last Fire in ur palms was a Kindle
dece
n ur girl? I’ll wave the shotty at her face
Have that bitch downin’ a pipe faster than El Chapos last escape
no
Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
this had potential to be a jab at least but execution was slackluster, not feelin
I gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
coo
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime
ok

1 gd punch
2 jabs
2 misses

vs

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
coo
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
played concept, fresh personal flip. it hits
Known for stealing a shorty, I'm swingin blades that are rippin this vet
Aint comin up for air like she had gills - kinda like the 3 slits in ya neck
no, whack
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
coo
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair
ok, barely

2 gd punches
2 jabs
1 miss

v/jit

edit

@Cred ur down in a pipe jank went over my head bc i originally thought u said dRownin but i was wrong
pretty good land on second read, i cant take it back now but i mayve voted the other way had i not missed what cred was tryna do w it.. my fault

[Greedy]

Cred:
Opener- this was decent. Nun special
Down in a pipe- concept dope. Wording coulda been sharper tho imo
Bitch section/mag- again i fk w the concept. Over the execution let u down
Greedy- now u kno this is a hit
Closer- i like it

Vs

Jit:
Opener-pretty decent
Gun bar king- tge gun barking wp is def played. But this is a decent personal attempt
Gills- dope concept. Wording was average tho
Atv- didnt like this at all
Dunk tank- i used a line like this back in the day, but thats not enough to call this played.

Overall i think u guys have kinda similar styles. Good ideas and concepts but so so wording.
I almost voted this as a tie, but on further review @Jit u had one bar that i flat out didnt like. So w that, ima slide thus one creds way

Vote cred barely

[CleverWordz]

Ok battle...

Cred: I really like gun bars a lot. Tay Roc is one of my favorites doing them. Nonetheless, you haven't really shown complete depth on the gunplay vibe you presented throughout. I think your opener/closure was your only highlights. The rest were subpar or not enough ammunition for those gun bars... So to speak.

Jit: I respect the angle you took while identifying his style. But trying to fight fire with fire doesn't always transgress. I did like the bike trick line alongside the gill concept. Yet those were the only two I felt had gravity to atmosphere this battle.

Overall: Both had misses and only two potential bars I liked individually. It was a close calling card here. But I have Jit as the winner. More precise verse slightly than Cred... Good battle tho

[plethora]

1 arm to his neck like the Big Show - let the shit go
U a fake, Rick Roll.. pussy the last Fire in ur palms was a Kindle
^ehh. kindles are old & so is this concept
n ur girl? I’ll wave the shotty at her face
Have that bitch downin’ a pipe faster than El Chapos last escape
^down in a pipe. Dope
Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
^cool
I gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
^good
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime
^dope

Vs.

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
^decent opener
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
^someone used Barking against king recently so this is a miss
Known for stealing a shorty, I'm swingin blades that are rippin this vet
Aint comin up for air like she had gills - kinda like the 3 slits in ya neck
^ok
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
^nice
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair
^dope


Dope battle fellas..

Liked creds verse but ima go with jits more personal approach


Very slight edge to Jit

[King]

4-1

[MV]

Cred

Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
I gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime

vs

jiz

Cred: self-proclaimed 'Gun Bar King'

About that... (lets talk about it lol)

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair



v/jit
i liked this match up. Cred i felt you were really consistent except for like 2 bars. if your opener was a bit stronger i believe this match would have been in your favor but i have jit coming through with a pretty good verse. imo neither of you had any huge misses or horrible wording issues. as you see i have more quotables for Jit, i left out 3 slits line because i thought that one could have been sick but as is it didnt tickle my fancy.

[Phalanx]

1 arm to his neck like the Big Show - let the shit go
U a fake, Rick Roll.. pussy the last Fire in ur palms was a Kindle
This was an alright light jab
n ur girl? I’ll wave the shotty at her face
Have that bitch downin’ a pipe faster than El Chapos last escape
This was cool. I liked it.
Last night I felt like the king of the club, Jits night was hella tragic
I had a bitch in ery section.. u jus helped put the mag together faggot
Wasn't feeling this. Not much of a punch.
I gotta trigger saying squeeze me! Gun bar king do em greazy
This semi-retired.. but ‘ll still catch a body on the side like @Greedy
This wasn't too bad, though it does come off a nut-huggish.
For some text shit u cud get wacked quick. I don’t stand by no lies
Over the internet I’ll be @ ur door in 2 days MAX bitch.. Amazon Prime
[B]Lol the ultimate internet threat, the plane ticket. As silly as the idea is, I like your flip. Decent closer.

Cred: self-proclaimed 'Gun Bar King'

About that...

U aint a fuckin Bear, ur demeanor is more of a little cub kid
After I run thru this 'Mack from Chicago' it'll look like Khalil trucked him
Nice jab to start. I liked it.
& lol @ Gun Bar King - faggot ur flexin right?
U should change it to Gun BarKing, cuz all they do is THAT & never bite
Second barking concept I've seen this week. But flipped differently. This was clean either way.
Known for stealing a shorty, I'm swingin blades that are rippin this vet
Aint comin up for air like she had gills - kinda like the 3 slits in ya neck
Aye, this was dope. Good shit.
Chiraq? Nah bum, U never rolled w/ a hood on some street shit
I'll have a NY homie 'pull up & put 2 in the air' but he aint doing ATV tricks
This was okay. Kinda light.
Squads lining up for a shot, on sight it's point blank w/ a stare
& when I pay to have this clown dropped in the water its not a dunk tank at the fair
[B]I like it. Solid closer.

Bar 1- Jit.
Bar 2- Cred.
Bar 3- Jit.
Bar 4- Tie.
Bar 5- Jit.

This was a solid battle. Some dope shit from both. I think Jit was more consistent. Cred definitely had the biggest miss with the mag line.

Vote - Jit