WK15: Sinning (0-3) vs AeeYo (0-0) vs Hello There (2-5) Hello There Wins

[King]

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@Sinning @AeeYo @hello there

[Echelon]

hey..a rematch..that's what's up..check..check

[hello there]

Check

[AeeYo]

Check.

[King]

@SIN of Darkness hello there has been added to this battle.

blame greedy

[AeeYo]

Drop'n 20 lines to make sure I share the wealth...

[Echelon]

my flows are a sea riot, my flow has a growl like a sea lion
im the seas zion, i'm hearing 'hello there, and 'aee yo'..but I'm like stfu and be quiet
aeeyo?..to torture..you are who i seldom choose, i have the dope lines to sell a ruse
i'm a grammar nazi..i have a hellish clue..but i don't know the difference between..they're, and their, so 'hello there'..who the hell are you?
i'm popping mags, putting sinful prayers in these lawful fags
freaking queers..you're all in drag.. you should be more ashamed than jesus christ in a auschwitz camp
i'm like rage against the machine..i rock raps.. i'm a pussy cat..i have your paw tagged (bitch!)
i have a blade and a sharp dag..but ya'll are scardy cats..ya'll don't pop mags..ya'll pop tags
i'll have yall crew tag sought.. when it comes to treasure flows..ya'll can't brew that lock
i'm mew..this is pokemon..i choose dat rock..'Sin ain't nuthin' to fuck wit'..this is a wu tang song
i have so many win(d)s ya'll sought the dust..i have the cross link chains..ya'll got the rust
i got blades and guns..i'm popping stuff.. but i'll still 'play with the hands' this is gauze (god's) verses a boxing glove
i have cold flows..i'm the winter season.. i'm a angel in heaven..this is the freeing legion
i'm telling you..i'm a beast and demon..ya'll couldn't 'eat mc's'..so eat shit you heathens...



14 lines..don't get it..don't vote..

[AeeYo]

well i'll match that 14...

these bitch niggas r Devils in disguise, i'm gonna expose these hacks
peel off the masks, it'll be Aeeyo vs......wait...... who the Hell is that?
i already killed u Sinning, honestly, there's no need for a second meeting
and don't gimme a Hello There... let's get to it nigga, fuk a dumb ass Greeting
best believe i'ma Milk this shit, come on King... u know i'd Cream these bums, g
put Sin out to Pasture, i hit Wey harder, and the other guy... Dairy confront me?
think u can see me in the ring? shit... i might take the belt tonight
i'll kill u Buster Douglas bitches, and send u back to hitting the Open Mic
i wanted to leave u two to tango, but instead i'm bringing IEDs to your dance
my every bomb is precise, Allah direct... i'm leaving bodies on the floor, gents
and after this i'll own both of you, there will be no possibile rematch
i'm ruin'n your Hole games, my niggas, for me the victory Bean Bagged
rip every Party u niggas, drops u Present ain't regarded as thoughtful
i would continue eating u bitches, but that shit'll make me look all-full

[hello there]

Keyed this shit because fuck you losers..



A-yo. When's my match hit? I'll put dudes in a suit and a black vest..
King -- you ain't put mans in the ring with me; you gave me two faggots..
A, you think you slick, son. But the AK will make your bitch run..
Fuck your quick tongue -- your legs'll shake faster than the clit cum..
You both burb bitches. Witness curbs liftin' till they split your dome..
Cuz I ain't satisfied breakin' bones when I'm in the sticks and stoned..
And Sinning? Winning's a long shot for you. Like I'm far away and laying low..
Swaying scope making codes, but can't nobody S.ave yO.ur S.oul..
And hey, Yo? You gay, though. So Many Caps... you should be Embarassed..
Fucking relationships don't make a bar -- but all those make Sinning's parents..
So far above you both, the weather's clever, and every drop I sends a heavy fall..
Can't either of you step to me. Now that's a fucking Pedi-Stall..
I'll take your bitch AND Control-Her. Like, "What the fuck did you tell me???"
Then put the pump in her back and laugh as I dump in her L3..

[MV]

Sinning
my flows are a sea riot, my flow has a growl like a sea lion
im the seas zion, i'm hearing 'hello there, and 'aee yo'..but I'm like stfu and be quiet
idk why this shit was funny as fuck to me. set up wasnt great. but i still laughed so fuck it imma count it.


vs

Aeeyo

i already killed u Sinning, honestly, there's no need for a second meeting
and don't gimme a Hello There... let's get to it nigga, fuk a dumb ass Greeting
best believe i'ma Milk this shit, come on King... u know i'd Cream these bums, g
put Sin out to Pasture, i hit Wey harder, and the other guy... Dairy confront me?


vs

this drunk mofo Hello there


A, you think you slick, son. But the AK will make your bitch run..
Fuck your quick tongue -- your legs'll shake faster than the clit cum..
And hey, Yo? You gay, though. So Many Caps... you should be Embarassed..
Fucking relationships don't make a bar -- but all those make Sinning's parents..
I'll take your bitch AND Control-Her. Like, "What the fuck did you tell me???"
Then put the pump in her back and laugh as I dump in her L3..




v/Hello There

L3 bar was the bar of the battle. even tho controller schemes and word plays are usually played out, that shit caught me completely off guard and had me on the fucking floor dying yo. good shit all of you this was a weirdly entertaining battle. like i really enjoyed this.

[.SiQ.]

Stfu be quiet

Vs

Dairy scheme
All full

Vs

Sticks n stones
Pedi stall
Winnings parents
L3

Good battle yall
V- hello

[Ryno]

N/A

vs

Dumb ass greeting

vs

Sticks and stoned

v. Aeeyo... didnt like this battle tbh but i like his disses alil better

[CleverWordz]

This battle was a bit frustrating... Not bad just a few pauses in between.

Sin: I liked the approach you took. It just grasped me more as a Horrorcore Topical verse rather than straight dissing in a normal battle climate. I understood completely far as the angle goes, but not a lot of pinpoint jabs at your opponents.

Aeeyo: I felt your verse had mad potential. Just a few misses here and there just didn't standout to me in a scarecrow stance. Typically the generic concepts would bend to your advantage. Tho I think the simplicity could cost you for lack of creativity. Just keep that in mind.

Hello there: I believe you have the same vibe as aeeyo. Both seeking for aggression, yet fail to utilize a clean execution. However, i read your verse a bit clearer scanning a few elements that could improve or have made sense with better development. Not bad nor great neither.

Overall: I have selected, hello there as the winner. But by a very very small margin of winning. Kinda like your pick up lines for women... Kidding.

[King]

3-1

[Phalanx]

my flows are a sea riot, my flow has a growl like a sea lion
im the seas zion, i'm hearing 'hello there, and 'aee yo'..but I'm like stfu and be quiet
Set up was ass. Punch was low key funny.
aeeyo?..to torture..you are who i seldom choose, i have the dope lines to sell a ruse
i'm a grammar nazi..i have a hellish clue..but i don't know the difference between..they're, and their, so 'hello there'..who the hell are you?
This was bad...
i'm popping mags, putting sinful prayers in these lawful fags
freaking queers..you're all in drag.. you should be more ashamed than jesus christ in a auschwitz camp
This was typical AJ...trying to be complex...wound up being convoluted.
i'm like rage against the machine..i rock raps.. i'm a pussy cat..i have your paw tagged (bitch!)
i have a blade and a sharp dag..but ya'll are scardy cats..ya'll don't pop mags..ya'll pop tags
This was basura, Senor Flores.
i'll have yall crew tag sought.. when it comes to treasure flows..ya'll can't brew that lock
i'm mew..this is pokemon..i choose dat rock..'Sin ain't nuthin' to fuck wit'..this is a wu tang song
Brew that lock...wu tang song. The ending concept was okayish self hype, but the bar was a complete miss thanks to that slant rhyme. And I use the word rhyme loosely.
i have so many win(d)s ya'll sought the dust..i have the cross link chains..ya'll got the rust
i got blades and guns..i'm popping stuff.. but i'll still 'play with the hands' this is gauze (god's) verses a boxing glove
Forced wordplay abound. You can't just make the d in wind disappear and reappear in gauze. This was bad.
i have cold flows..i'm the winter season.. i'm a angel in heaven..this is the freeing legion
i'm telling you..i'm a beast and demon..ya'll couldn't 'eat mc's'..so eat shit you heathens...
Suuuper soft closer.


14 lines..don't get it..don't vote..

well i'll match that 14...

these bitch niggas r Devils in disguise, i'm gonna expose these hacks
peel off the masks, it'll be Aeeyo vs......wait...... who the Hell is that?
This was a decent jab. Funny.
i already killed u Sinning, honestly, there's no need for a second meeting
and don't gimme a Hello There... let's get to it nigga, fuk a dumb ass Greeting
Another okay jab. Feels kind of light especially consider you & sinning opened with similar hello flips in your respective first four lines.
best believe i'ma Milk this shit, come on King... u know i'd Cream these bums, g
put Sin out to Pasture, i hit Wey harder, and the other guy... Dairy confront me?
I'm a sucker for word association schemes, and while this bordered on corny, I think you pulled it off. Good shit.
think u can see me in the ring? shit... i might take the belt tonight
i'll kill u Buster Douglas bitches, and send u back to hitting the Open Mic
I wasn't feeling this.
i wanted to leave u two to tango, but instead i'm bringing IEDs to your dance
my every bomb is precise, Allah direct... i'm leaving bodies on the floor, gents
This felt really lackluster.
and after this i'll own both of you, there will be no possibile rematch
i'm ruin'n your Hole games, my niggas, for me the victory Bean Bagged
Cool corn hole jab. Never thought I'd say that.
rip every Party u niggas, drops u Present ain't regarded as thoughtful
i would continue eating u bitches, but that shit'll make me look all-full
[B]Light jab. Flowed nicely.

Keyed this shit because fuck you losers..



A-yo. When's my match hit? I'll put dudes in a suit and a black vest..
King -- you ain't put mans in the ring with me; you gave me two faggots..
This was kind of weak. Just called em faggots.
A, you think you slick, son. But the AK will make your bitch run..
Fuck your quick tongue -- your legs'll shake faster than the clit cum..
Cool flow, light sting.
You both burb bitches. Witness curbs liftin' till they split your dome..
Cuz I ain't satisfied breakin' bones when I'm in the sticks and stoned..
I like the flip. It's dope, but it's not a punch.
And Sinning? Winning's a long shot for you. Like I'm far away and laying low..
Swaying scope making codes, but can't nobody S.ave yO.ur S.oul..
This was convoluted from a conceptual pov. Missed for me.
And hey, Yo? You gay, though. So Many Caps... you should be Embarassed..
Fucking relationships don't make a bar -- but all those make Sinning's parents..
Not completely sold on the wording. But the idea is cool. Quick jab.
So far above you both, the weather's clever, and every drop I sends a heavy fall..
Can't either of you step to me. Now that's a fucking Pedi-Stall..
A little forced, but not horribly so.
I'll take your bitch AND Control-Her. Like, "What the fuck did you tell me???"
Then put the pump in her back and laugh as I dump in her L3..
[B]This was pretty cool. [B]

Bar 1- Sin, Aeeyo, Hello.
Bar 2- Aeeyo, Hello, Sin.
Bar 3- Aeeyo, Hello, Sin.
Bar 4- Tie. All three missed.
Bar 5- Hello, Aeeyo, Sin.
Bar 6- Aeeyo, Hello, Sin.
Bar 7- Hello, Aeeyo, Sin.

So this was a two man race, as Sin broke down after the first bar. It was close between Hello and Aeyo, but I think Aeeyo was a bit more consistent and punchy. On a side note, Hello sticks n stoned line was dope self hype.

Vote - Aeeyo