WK 15: GrimmReaperZ (5-6) vs Revelation 18:3 (0-5) - OPEN 4 VOTES

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[GrimmReaperZ]

Check

[CleverWordz]

.. Look I'm Duncan shots, till it break his BACK 'N unloads da Sim,
It begins slowly dim, Until u see deez Arms going through gRIMM, like I just Vince Carter him..

[Spree]

Rev wins Open for feed

[GrimmReaperZ]

My bad....forgot


U been here 3 years and no one cares....

Changed ya name and still ain't acknowledged , but thats clear from ya recent selection
Since OUR revelations u struggling to have bars is why u never get a decent reception

[Spree]

@Revelation 18:3

Grimm bar is waaaay last the due date. If you want to let it ride cool if not you get that win. Let me know asap

[CleverWordz]

Nah its cool. I'll let the votes commence.

[Networth]

I found this battle to be of varying interests. on one hand I enjoyed the creativity of both bars along with the nameplay and personalization.. On the other I found it difficult to grasp in wording and delivery while reading it to someone.


Tough call really cause it comes down to preference.. both structures were loose so who to side with.. Grimm had the better one, but both concepts were tight and personal.. so.. It came down to flow here.. With the use of the light multis playing off Grimm's name with the BBall reference,

I V/Revelation by a small margin.

[Ryno]

.. Look I'm Duncan shots, till it break his BACK 'N unloads da Sim,
It begins slowly dim, Until u see deez Arms going through gRIMM, like I just Vince Carter him..

Nah man, even w/ the tie ins the concept seems like a reach

[QUOTE=GrimmReaperZ;8910128]My bad....forgot


U been here 3 years and no one cares....

Changed ya name and still ain't acknowledged , but thats clear from ya recent selection
Since OUR revelations u struggling to have bars is why u never get a decent reception
personal aim, kinda cheeks though/QUOTE]

v. Grimm...better diss

[Phalanx]

Okay, this was alright. Wasn't big on either bar. But one had a clear margin of victory. Rev had bar that was pretty much all there, except for that forced gRimm portion it hinged on. I mean the g just goes silent like lasagna? I mean I've definitely seen more forced shit. But you were definitely trying to fit the square into the circle here. Grim had an okay punch. Pretty straight forward, a light jab honestly. But it landed, and was enough to take this.

Vote - Grim

[MV]

im not going to do a very detailed breakdown because i think it is pretty obvious which was this battle went. i think Revelation tried something a bit unorthodox with the name play but unfortunately it was too much of a reach and ended up being a miss.if his name had was rim-ANYTHING that would have been fire. but as is it just didnt connect. so imo the only thing Grimm had to do was connect an okay punch.

V/Grimm

[.SiQ.]

A reception/bars line
Vs
Bball scheme

Overall decent battle
I liked rev's creativity more, I know he forced the np but who cares... yo rev u should of just said- 'RIMM. I mean in the champ match MV was called "V" lol. So using part of folks names are ok now. I get it tho, theres only so many nameplays some1 can do.

Anyways... my vote- REV

[Greedy]

Vote grimm.

Rev- idk man. I like the concept here. But what was u going for w gRimm? I cant give u that. Way too forced.

Grimm- reception/ bars lines are played. Bit i liked your bar better.

[Spree]

4-2 few more votes

[Amen]

Rev's bar was all over the place. Not feeling the NP attempt either.

Grimm's was more on the simple/basic side but more effective insult.

Grimm got it.