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    WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - Jit Wins

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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    Exotic my clothes, my hoes, and my reefer.
    Yea.
    They say its cheaper to keep her.
    Yea.
    But fuck it, im rich so i left her
    Yea.
    Shot out my plug. He let me keep all the extra
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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    Last edited by YG; December 6th, 2018 at 10:05 AM

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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    Last edited by Greedy; December 6th, 2018 at 09:46 AM
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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    So yea, this was a great way to start off the competition this week. Both opponents came with equally creative concepts, and each of them was consistent mostly throughout. It came down to the battler that seemed to personalize their verse more. Note the per vs gen explanations in the breakdown to see where Im going. Personal/Generic obviously.

    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    This Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    ^nice .. gen/
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    ^tight wordlpay setup could been a lil better.. per/
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    ^this was set up well but lost sting somehow, good concept tho... gen/
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    ^decent, a bit flat on delivery.. gen/ with a per/ nod for a name drop
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    ^pretty cool setup and wordplay... gen/
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    ^Interesting attempt, a bit wordy forsure tho... per/

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    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    ^Good concept, cool delivery minus a wordy setup... per/
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    ^this was funny, good delivery, it flowed well... gen/
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    ^Dope concept, cool delivery... gen/
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    ^nice concept, awkward wording in the setup.. gen/ with a per/ nod for relevance.
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    ^meh.. meh not, cool attempt, fell flat mostly tho... gen/
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    ^kinda the only flat out miss in your verse.. gen/



    I gotta vote/Jit for more personal attempts and a tad bit more consistency. Very good battle from both overall. high level stuff really.


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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Jit View Post
    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    swaggin, could of been cleaner
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    nah not feelin it
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    i like the concept but same as ur first bar
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    these r ur signature bars. i fks w/ em though. solid
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    cool cool
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    no sir
    Quote Originally Posted by Greedy View Post
    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    nasty
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    clean asf
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    this could of hit harder
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    tie ins made this bar solid. nice
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    not feeling this one
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    alil humorous, could of closed better
    Paddys Done, holiday sweater

    vs

    family matters, snicker doodle, friend of hours

    v. Greedy...in a close one. Could go either way

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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    -ok

    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food 
    -no

    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner 
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner 
    -decent

    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    -nope

    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    -nah

    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen 
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    -not feelin

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    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    -been done b4 but ok

    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas 
    -dope & happy holidays to u & ur fam

    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    -not feelin and it's not bcuz it's a "cripplin" bar

    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers 
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    -ok

    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    -lol shit was funny.

    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    -lol ok closer

    Overall cool battle

    V- greed

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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    ^good tie-ins but a miss for me
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    ^what?
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    ^no
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    ^ok as is but coulda been worded better for harder punch
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    ^dope
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    ^miss

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    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    ^lazy
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    ^dope
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    ^ehh
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    ^no
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    ^remote location is played
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    ^nah man





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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    Quote Originally Posted by Jit View Post
    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    not into these.
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    nah
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    dope idea, not crazy about how u finished it
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season.
    ok jab
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    dope, fresh concept to me and worded well.
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    ehh this doesnt hit for me.




    Quote Originally Posted by Greedy View Post
    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    eh u had cypher bars better than this lol
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    dope, lol @ u both dropping holiday bars
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    cool idea, not feeling the execution
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    eh ok
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    ok flip but remote location definitely played
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    funny but too simple imo

    this is tough to call. taking the best 2 bars from each verse, i like jits more. but i think jit also had the worst misses with pedigree and degree. greedy made this tough because even the bars i thought missed were worded well for the most part. i think i still have jit here, he had 2 of the best 3 punches.

    vote Jit
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    Re: WK14: Jit (5-5) vs Greedy (0-0)

    jit
    .45 if u flexin that cash shit, u don't throw u be bluffin bro
    Colt'll leave u in the snow w/ some Bills around u, this the Indy D against Buffalo
    a little stretched but coo
    U couldn't convert a lesbo in a million yrs, I got one massaging me while I snooze dude
    & by the looks of it, the only bitches switchin to Pedigree are dog owners looking for new food
    reach on the np
    If u at the Casino I'm squadin up on ya stuntin ass, u aint no stable gunner
    & 'gettin laid out before me & my homies feast' is the only time u'll be a Table Runner
    ehhh, ok
    We know u be menstruating , so when u act like a bitch it aint w/o reason
    & if Greedy don't replace his 'Paddy's Done' like Always Sunny after their last season
    ok
    Find me @ ya Xmas party w/ barettas rippin til ya head is drippin
    N when I 'push a button & light up ya torso' it aint a Holiday Sweater gimmick
    ok
    Bum's whole life is RB, ur washed up & a loss waiting to happen
    Should u retire? Duh, Greed - & maybe u shoulda done that in college instead of rappin
    miss

    1 good punch
    3 jabs
    2 misses


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    greedy
    At ur door like Urkel. Holsters look like suspenders, but im here w these clappers
    ur thinkn '80s Cypher'. But should be focused on which members of ur family matters
    ok, family matters is played but it was ok the way u did it
    Make a sound during this robbery, proooobably get murked...its business
    No cookies for Santa. But if he as much as snickerdoodle get served this Christmas
    dope
    But its leg shots only, cuz he suicidal. fuck giving him the blessin
    Cuz when u think about it...a wheel chair goes great w the crippling depression
    fuck no
    U try sooo hard to fit in. Dirty fgt, all u gonna see is lead in showers
    This choppa shoot for damn near 60 minutes. Still wanna be a friend of hours?
    this would have been fire when wordplay came out, not in 2018
    St. Lucia w black sand on the beach. To ibiza. To Panama, jammin w freaks
    Those r hidden remote locations. Ur just lazy, n haven't changed the channel in weeks
    played again
    Bet u say sorry 6x per convo. Stop being weird for god sakes
    Nigga got a black belt in awkwardness. Prob even wears it on dates
    too simple/filler

    1 good punch
    1 jab
    4 misses


    v/jit

    yikes
    thats an upset

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