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    Phalanx vs Aeeyo - Open For Votes

    10 - 16 lines. Due Sunday Night.

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    Re: Phalanx vs Aeeyo

    Ok.
    A.....T A C T I C A L.....F O R M A T I O N.....O F.....W O R D S

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    @AeeYo I went 10.




    His parents thought it'd be dandy, liked the thought of a family..
    Nine months later wished they had opted for plan B!
    Its a Damn shame that they planned Aeey, like a best case scenario!
    You're flows been borderline so long, you're the next Lake Ontario.
    Got em draggin like Gyrados! But his talent is a Magikarp!
    Plus he's Tin man in oz....pal just never had the heart...
    And the saddest part? Keeping up with me'll wind up overloading his pistons..
    Bout to prove I'm triple Aeey like roadside assistance!
    I'm closing the distance then Im planning on snapping your neck jerk...
    Started your name w/ A&E...now in 48hours your murder will be broadcast on their network!
    A.....T A C T I C A L.....F O R M A T I O N.....O F.....W O R D S

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    @Phalanx Cool, I'll go 10 too...


    to ever find you cook'n is rare, the cupboard is bare, niggas is hungry with they plates out
    spits is easy take outs, we can't find decent roasts in ya verses, you got us all on a steak-out//
    is this really all you got? if you gonna shoot, you need to pull the trigger, your ^^shit is played out
    i see you're like Paul Pierce behind a line, drop a "check" on niggas, then hit 'em with a fake out//
    nigga, you sayin shit like "Congratulations..." or "Happy Thanksgiving" followed by a lengthy post
    your history is littered with no-shows and dickriders, that 8-1 record seems more like an empty boast//
    nothin dope about you, i'ma make the whole forum doubt you, so Phalanx, try me with your frail shots
    all your written deliveries is pussy, nigga, there's no doubt your posts are hitting the male-box//
    but you think this is a game, huh? fuk your fake ass, me and your moms knows who you is, dun
    she at Homer head in her hands thinking why did I ever give birth to such a bitch ass Sim-son//

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    Re: Phalanx vs Aeeyo - Open For Votes

    So yea, wow.. this battle was very interesting.. I been peepin @Phalanx and dude got some skills to be honest, with work, he could be a serious contender in any forum. Then you got @Sinning , that I've personally considered wack, who was obviously and apparently been improving with each and every drop. Never thought he'd catch Phalanx slippin but here's my breakdown.



    His parents thought it'd be dandy, liked the thought of a family..
    Nine months later wished they had opted for plan B!
    ^ Very short and to the point, not personalized, to a fault, but not a bad opener
    Its a Damn shame that they planned Aeey, like a best case scenario!
    You're flows been borderline so long, you're the next Lake Ontario.
    ^On point w/how he's dropped so far, but vague and unappealing in terms of delivery. The setup didn;t aide in the sting of the punch what so ever.
    Got em draggin like Gyrados! But his talent is a Magikarp!
    Plus he's Tin man in oz....pal just never had the heart...
    ^Interesting double play in the set up and punch but they in no way correlate and are not at all personal so they lose sting tremendously.
    And the saddest part? Keeping up with me'll wind up overloading his pistons..
    Bout to prove I'm triple Aeey like roadside assistance!
    ^Pretty good, minus the obvious metaphor that could've been worked around but, good delivery, short, sweet and personal with the nameplay
    I'm closing the distance then Im planning on snapping your neck jerk...
    Started your name w/ A&E...now in 48hours your murder will be broadcast on their network!
    ^Good concept, poor setup and poor wording on that closing delivery ruined the punch here



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    to ever find you cook'n is rare, the cupboard is bare, niggas is hungry with they plates out
    spits is easy take outs, we can't find decent roasts in ya verses, you got us all on a steak-out//
    ^very nicely set up and direct with an attempted personal, wording almost ruined this for you, but good punch.
    is this really all you got? if you gonna shoot, you need to pull the trigger, your ^^shit is played out
    i see you're like Paul Pierce behind a line, drop a "check" on niggas, then hit 'em with a fake out//
    ^Nicely done, setup coulda been better
    nigga, you sayin shit like "Congratulations..." or "Happy Thanksgiving" followed by a lengthy post
    your history is littered with no-shows and dickriders, that 8-1 record seems more like an empty boast//
    ^Interesting attempt at a personal, the setup did nothing to help the punch though and the sting declined very much because of it, the first line became all but filler after the shot.
    nothin dope about you, i'ma make the whole forum doubt you, so Phalanx, try me with your frail shots
    all your written deliveries is pussy, nigga, there's no doubt your posts are hitting the male-box//
    ^This was ok, the setup should've aided your delivery but not too bad overall.
    but you think this is a game, huh? fuk your fake ass, me and your moms knows who you is, dun
    she at Homer head in her hands thinking why did I ever give birth to such a bitch ass Sim-son//
    ^Decent close, this could've been dope had you set it up with any tag along for the Simpson line, or at least called him dumb in the first line and came with Simp-)le(-son in the close, but still, not a bad ending




    Damnnnnnn..... As I get to the end here, I realize that @AeeYo is one of the competitors not Sinning.... lol smdh I almost feel dumb, but Aeeyo bro, you clearly need to elevate if you're even being mentioned in the same sentence as that clown. I was bouta say this is the most improved I've ever seen someone over the course of a couple weeks, I had my whole spilll planned out, now I'm just feelin slow frfr. Still, overall here you can see that the opponent vs Phalanx in question, managed to over shadow the former in terms of concepts/personals/ and even wordplay. I generally prefer the short bar style of someone like Phal ... but with the lack of connection in the punches that quick witted delivery fell flat versus a more precise/specific/ and conceptually superior opponent in V/Aeeyo not Sinning, sorry.


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    Re: Phalanx vs Aeeyo - Open For Votes

    to ever find you cook'n is rare, the cupboard is bare, niggas is hungry with they plates out
    spits is easy take outs, we can't find decent roasts in ya verses, you got us all on a steak-out//
    -this is more of a stmt...no actual punch...bad start

    is this really all you got? if you gonna shoot, you need to pull the trigger, your ^^shit is played out
    i see you're like Paul Pierce behind a line, drop a "check" on niggas, then hit 'em with a fake out//
    -ok...wording sucked but it's ok

    nigga, you sayin shit like "Congratulations..." or "Happy Thanksgiving" followed by a lengthy post
    your history is littered with no-shows and dickriders, that 8-1 record seems more like an empty boast//
    -no

    nothin dope about you, i'ma make the whole forum doubt you, so Phalanx, try me with your frail shots
    all your written deliveries is pussy, nigga, there's no doubt your posts are hitting the male-box//
    -w0w this is not good

    but you think this is a game, huh? fuk your fake ass, me and your moms knows who you is, dun
    she at Homer head in her hands thinking why did I ever give birth to such a bitch ass Sim-son//
    Simpson bars been done a trillion times and this 1 is bad

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    His parents thought it'd be dandy, liked the thought of a family..
    Nine months later wished they had opted for plan B!
    -no punch but I see u r just warming up for ur next line

    Its a Damn shame that they planned Aeey, like a best case scenario!
    You're flows been borderline so long, you're the next Lake Ontario.
    -niice

    Got em draggin like Gyrados! But his talent is a Magikarp!
    Plus he's Tin man in oz....pal just never had the heart...
    -light

    And the saddest part? Keeping up with me'll wind up overloading his pistons..
    Bout to prove I'm triple Aeey like roadside assistance!
    -dope

    I'm closing the distance then Im planning on snapping your neck jerk...
    Started your name w/ A&E...now in 48hours your murder will be broadcast on their network!
    -light jab

    V- phal

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