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Thread: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN 4 VOTES

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    Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN 4 VOTES



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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6)

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6)

    This guy again

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6)

    Told ya girl to come home w/ a real one, ur a pussy so I snagged her w/ a quick buck
    The way I rushed this strange dude baby to the crib, u’d think a hospital had a newborn mix up
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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6)

    Listen u Fake homo thug.....



    Bro, Whoever birthed your style, surely was a closet homo and a blatant bitch
    They gave me a stage ...just to expose the "fag out the creator" like Jaden Smith

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6)

    Eh both seemed rushed with little creative depth.

    JIT: I like the idea of having his girl come my way approach, but the actual Execution wasn't as impressive. I honestly expected more twist behind this idea. Not bad nor great either way.

    Grim: it seems like y'all both had an idea flip to use infant concepts. Though, I understand your direction was more "whom raised you" detail approach.. We all know Will Smith is a flame along with his hills have eyes children. I just wasn't feeling the overall punch to diss your opponent in a Flamboyant ideal.. Or wasn't clever enough for my taste.

    Overall: both competitors came simplistic but if I had to choose I'd say Jit had the better direction of a landed punch. Keep writing guys!
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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    I liked both concepts tbh. Had issues w both of yalls wording tho
    Jit- i thought "bringing some dudes baby home" angle was good, just the wording was heavyhanded imo.
    Rev- good personal angle, but it didnt land as hard imo

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    This was alright. Wasn't super big on either bar. Jit had the diaper concept, but Grim had the better execution. Makes it kind of a hard decision

    Jit, the concept was pretty dope. But the ending portion felt really verbose, and awkwardly worded aswell. "You'd think a hospital had a new born mix up" I think you could have switched the scheme up to something like switched at birth, and the wording would feel more natural. Obviously, the would require some change in the set up aswell. But I found the set up kind of lacking, so that would improve the bar too.

    Grim, the execution is clean as always. Your wording is usually pretty polished. So no surprise there. I like the concept, but don't think I would base a bar on it. It's the kind of shit I would use as a set up jab, if I was double punching, as opposed to using the 1-2 punch formula. Still, it lands as a clean jab.

    This was a tough call. A sloppy hook verses a clean jab. It's hard not to give credit to a great concept, and that makes me appreciate Jits bar. But I think the wording made it land as a glancing blow, whereas Grins quick jab landed flush. Close battle..but...

    Vote - Grim by slim margin..

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    LOL..what in the world..I didn't really have to think about this one..it was really there and subtle to decide, know what im saying..grimmzreaperz..this wasn't too bad..but what the..i seen you come with dope bars..this wasn't it..Jit..one of your best bars..good work..i like this one..decent battle

    V/ JIT

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    i think this battle came down to wording. Jit had a good concept with ok wording, Grimm however had a concept that i thought had more potential but the wording was off and felt incomplete. that took away from the punch imo. Jit kept it simple while and didnt overly complicate his punch and in this case it paid off.

    v/jit

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Didnt like the wording from either. I enjoyed Kits concept a bit more here though.

    V. Kit

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    I got JIT because I liked the concept better... I just didn't really like the the Jaden/gay out angle... just creativity weak to me but it was better executed... JIT why the stretched bar homie? Because your concept was that much better, it had more impact. you win.

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    Re: Wk 13: GrimmReaperZ(5-4) vs Jit(5-6) - OPEN 4 VOTES

    Jit wins

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