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    WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2) - plethora WINS

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2)

    @Smog the truck driver..




    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    Last edited by plethora; November 13th, 2018 at 02:10 AM

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2)

    In order
    Originally posted by plethora
    So how does this work.. Can't win a title via no show but king technically posted a verse
    Originally posted by barcotic
    nah dude, u win that shit next wk (if u win next wk)
    king is out w/ injury

    have a little pride


    Originally posted by amen
    pleth paving his way in to the HOF.
    Originally posted by plethora
    How can u ns a 1-2battle? Smfh

    And Week 4 no shows me


    Hmm where to start


    Ok so basically

    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!
    Last edited by Smog; November 14th, 2018 at 05:47 AM Reason: Double posted

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2)

    plethora..


    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town

    Not a bad bar, I enjoyed the ambiguity of it. Not bad. Could've used more personal though, but decent at best.

    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away

    Yeah, pretty good. You could've killed him, or something. I believe you finished the kill, so nice. This was decent.

    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive

    Pretty good bar. Not too bad. Actually very well said, and done. Nice, one; plehtora.


    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space

    Not too bad, not too good. Wasn't feeling this one.

    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration

    Good one, I enjoyed this one.

    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal

    Pretty good bar, probably your best. Nice one.

    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit

    Good work on this one, enjoyed it.

    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part

    Pretty good bar..i get it..because you are alike..nice one..decent.

    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements

    This was okay..the execution wasn't too good at all. Maybe next time.

    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks

    Not that good. Maybe next time.

    Smog -

    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but

    Decent bar. The execution could've been better. Not too bad.

    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit

    Decent bar, not too bad.

    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp

    Not too bad, could've been better.

    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes

    Decent.

    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude

    This was pretty bad, maybe next time.

    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull

    Your best bar, nice one.

    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke

    Good one, decent.

    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps

    Decent, a decent hit.


    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip

    Not too bad, decent.

    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!

    Decent, nice one.

    Overall - pretty good battle, here. i don't really see anything wrong with this battle..seemed long winded..but it was good..nothing too bad knowwhatimsayin'; not bad verses..decent verses is all... could've been a bit better in ways..plethora..your ideas were there..but execution was off..you could've worded your lines a bit better..but okay..smog..your ideas are good..but execution needs work..not too bad..decent battle..nice one..

    V/ Plehtora.

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2)

    Plethora
    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    -paradise/pair a dice is played to death. But ill give u pts for the current event concept.

    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    -this is played too. Midsection as a wp, and pretry much this whole concept

    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    -this was ok

    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face 
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    -nah this is weak.

    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    -this was a good personal angle. Having seen this done this way

    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    -this was good

    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    -trash

    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    -this was pretty good

    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    -nah weak. Also way too wordy

    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    -ok i fk w this one.

    Vs

    Smog
    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but 
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    -this was decent. Way too wordy and also pretty bland imo

    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    -nah not feeling this approach here

    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    -again reeeeallly simple. Just a badice earn/hard work flip. Nun special

    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    -this is weak

    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    -a bit wordy. But i liked this one

    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    -nah

    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    -too simple. Plus 1-2/ combo is played af

    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    -played concept.

    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    -this was good

    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT
    -nope


    Damn a lot of misses in this match.
    Plethora- u didnt have many misses, u just dropped a whole verse full of played concepts.
    Smog- ur shit was way too simple. Ur usually a lot more creative than this.

    Vote plethora

    - - - Updated - - -

    Plethora
    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    -paradise/pair a dice is played to death. But ill give u pts for the current event concept.

    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    -this is played too. Midsection as a wp, and pretry much this whole concept

    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    -this was ok

    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face 
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    -nah this is weak.

    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    -this was a good personal angle. Having seen this done this way

    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    -this was good

    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    -trash

    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    -this was pretty good

    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    -nah weak. Also way too wordy

    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    -ok i fk w this one.

    Vs

    Smog
    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but 
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    -this was decent. Way too wordy and also pretty bland imo

    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    -nah not feeling this approach here

    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    -again reeeeallly simple. Just a badice earn/hard work flip. Nun special

    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    -this is weak

    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    -a bit wordy. But i liked this one

    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    -nah

    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    -too simple. Plus 1-2/ combo is played af

    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    -played concept.

    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    -this was good

    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT
    -nope


    Damn a lot of misses in this match.
    Plethora- u didnt have many misses, u just dropped a whole verse full of played concepts.
    Smog- ur shit was way too simple. Ur usually a lot more creative than this.

    Vote plethora
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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2)

    Smog
    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    tho the personals are true af n had mad potential, this missed. drawn tf out w/ no real followthru
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    nah, weak
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    no wit. weak again
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    wtf no
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    ...
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    what? no
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    ok, finally something hits
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    no
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    fire
    more of this please

    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!
    hit

    1 gd punch
    2 jabs
    7 misses


    vs

    Plethora
    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    hell na, paradise is played af
    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    dope
    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    cool
    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    whack
    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    dece
    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    ok
    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    a bit of a reach but ok. on par w/ one from smog i was generous on, so ima call it a jab
    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    nah, too awkward
    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    ok
    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    ehh, ok. gd creativity n all, but u coulda made it dope & work technically sound another way

    2 gd punches
    5 jabs
    3 misses


    v/pleth
    in my mind & in fairness, this is where u won the belt. props
    Last edited by Barcotic; November 16th, 2018 at 02:12 PM

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    blood drive, pumpkin patches, paralyzed, x rey

    vs

    1-2, fun dip, closer

    v. Pleth...wasnt really close. I fucks w/ smog shit normally. He came personal but none of it had a good twist to it or it was too straight forward.

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    no lol
    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    pretty nice, wording a bit weird though. Mostly word choice
    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    this was cool
    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    had potential but worded like a 3rd grader
    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    ok
    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    doesnt make sense
    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    lol wtf. Made me laugh but it’s dumb
    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    you niggas love wordplay so much here you’re willing to force it into anything. Good grief. Decent bar
    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    ill give you this one, ok
    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    i liked this, nice


    Vs


    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    man what?
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    you should know better smh
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    ok, a lot better than the previous bars. Good personal because he is a little brat from what I’ve seen
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    nahhh complex does not sound like comp pleth lmaooo what are you hush?
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    nah
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    no
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    lol this was cool
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    i mean I guess, I’ll give you this cause it was swaggy
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    ha, I liked this
    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!
    no



    I don’t think this was as one sided as everyone has been saying. But smog definitely had too many misses in comparison to his hits. Plethora gets it


    Vote plethora

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    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    @Smog the truck driver..




    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    I really don't love the wording on the punch. But Paradise is pretty solid. The setup is super wordy, IMO.
    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    I don't think this works both ways. Furthermore, he's battling you for champ.
    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    Honestly? When you dropped K+5 I was hoping for a blackjack punch. I was disappointed.
    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    This is cute
    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    Ehhhhhhhhhhh.. this comes from out of nowhere.
    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    Oh shit, you're from Texas? Only fuckin way these two lines rhyme.
    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    This is ok i guess
    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    You coulda done so much more with this wordplay. It's actually really cool
    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    I don't feel this is a super punch on him. I don't think entirement is a word.
    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    Again with this fucking wording this week.
    Honestly man, I've seen basically everything of yours be better than this, IMO.

    Quote Originally Posted by Smog View Post
    In order











    And Week 4 no shows me


    Hmm where to start


    Ok so basically

    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    This is the longest bar I've seen in weeks. and I used to lose battles because I had long bars. So this is gonna go poorly
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    I don't like this at all. It's trying too hard to be clever.
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    You didn't set up spoiled brat. Or I would like this.
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    This was a slow burn bar. I do like the image a lot.
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    I don't really get this. It's a confusing idea.
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    This just seems like you're making shit up now
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    Ehhh
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    This is clever. I liked it.
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    Hah. I like this.
    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!
    lol
    VOTE Smog.Honestly I wasn't loving most of this battle, but fun dip was legit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    @Smog the truck driver..




    should you no show or post & get torched? it's your gamble now
    roll a Paradise & get burned, then found in ur truck like that california town
    Not digging too much tbh
    never be top tier, just mid level til i gut u & wipe the blade
    but u been Stuck In The Midsection so long, i'll just put my knife away
    Coulda been better
    think ur gangsta til my piru nigga race by with the K & a 5
    once u see a Blood Drive down the street, that'll be ur only hope of staying alive
    Tight imo
    tuesday was voting day, while this creeper in every young chicas face
    but they say pass on all Smog Propositions, hoping for some breathing space
    Tight
    hey how's ur daughter doing? cuz ima ruin her on sight, no hesitation
    give daddy's little Pumpkin Patches, when i carve the eyes out like a decoration
    Lol cool
    raise a hand to me & the mac'll leave 95% of ur body dead still
    paralyzed if u lift a finger, & that's how u'll signal for your next meal
    Cool
    lets be real, albuquerque a hick town. nothing rowdy about it
    if y'all niggas go around "kickin' up dust", its to cover the cow shit
    Eh nah
    smog 4-0 & confident til noggin split & they notify aunt marge
    thinkin cuz u hit midseason Inform Your Relative? nah thats just the sad part
    Nah
    hospital staff'll show ur results on a chart in its whole entirement
    so when Doc Points from Xrey, s'not that faggot missing voting requirements
    Weak but I can still dig
    ur known for meh punches. i'm renowned for rounds in mouths of folks
    so drop a Borderline Bar & Grill gonna get shot up like the one in thousand oaks
    Worded weirdly but I like the relevant punch
    Quote Originally Posted by Smog View Post

    Bar quittin gave u the UBC, n spree givin u his title shot means u recieve things well
    Actin blind to the fact cats give u a hand, but
    champed this n cant front like u aint seeKing help
    Cool
    But technically he spit? Nah PUSSY that definitely was shit
    So it shouldnt be too technical sayin.. U taken that belt means ur technically a BITCH
    Nahh
    U were born eatin from golden spoons, s'why ud never get here against bars, twerp
    They say have some pride n earn ur shit.. But spoiled brats NEVER experience hard work
    Alright, we get that he got the title from a no show verse lol
    Even cried when u got no show awards, when thats just the way shit goes
    But it seemed them ducks gave u a complex.. Like we were gon find out u still bathe w/those
    Ok
    Got all ur medals beatin JB n Knowp, yeah its not ur fault but does play a slight factor dude
    Cuz if ur pavin ur way in the hof.. Then them runners up r that close to bein right after U
    I aint feeling it
    Yall should quit praisin this faggot, cuz puttin this prick on a throne is sum bull
    U boot dogs hit women n smack children.. All u fuckin do is pick on the vulnerable
    Ok I guess
    Idk what this guy is sippin but boy ya mind is trippin duke
    TF u mean how u no show a 1-2? Uhhh same way u avoided MINE from hittin u
    Coool
    What i spit hits deep, what u spit gets u cheers n pounds from peeps
    What u drop brings tears of joy.. What eye drop really has tears coming down ur cheek
    Deecent flip but an I/eye bar... Man
    Actin like its cool to buck rifles, that fake G shit? u needa stop it now chump, quit
    Cuz the way u sugarcoat using a stick, actually sounds like ur talkin bout fun dip
    Fire
    But go head, tell us bout the amazin shit the gats u keep do
    How they raising like dads n waiving like flags.. Everything but ACTUALLY SHOOT!
    Ok

    Got plethora here, more consistent imo.

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    Re: WK12 CHAMP MATCH: Smog (4-0) vs [C] Plethora (3-2) - OPEN FOR VOTES

    v/Plethora.


    I actually thought Smog had a pretty good drop here. His last 4 bars were pretty dope, spotlight being the fun dip. HOWEVER... it just wasn't enough... I mean Plet was on it. The start was just fire... The knife away bar was perfectly done. I have Plet running away with it. Shame... I wish Smog would've dropped his matter of fact material laced w those dope bars. Could've took this one.

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    Plethora wins.

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