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    For Battling vs. Phalanx (S&F) - Open For Votes

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    Swags N flow


    @Phalanx

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Check.

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Ext

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    No problem. I'm ready when you are.

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    @Phalanx @For Battling
    Y’all going to get this going or what?

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
    So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
    That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
    Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
    7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
    Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
    Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
    One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
    .....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
    took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
    You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong


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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    @Kill Spree this guys had more than enough time to drop. Give him till this evening or DQ

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Lmao @ You saying more than enough time when your the reason this was extended. My shits beeen done.

    @For Battling aka fern





    This rapid fire?
    Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
    Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
    Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
    This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
    Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
    If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
    Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
    You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
    This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
    I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Round 2, FIGHT.


    TWO FIFTHS!!!!! Fucknigga that’s an unequivalent fraction @Trvp Nvgga , he bout that action. Gang bang your bitch like “uhh did that just happen?”
    Huge army. I lead dimes who squeeze 9’s, them gats’ll bless you when it’s sneeze time
    Slutty hoes, sleaze grind. Muggsy Bouges, only 3’5. And yes I’m a cop so u know I bring the heat slime
    On my barcotic flow, got my blade in hand. You’re a shitty player, couldn’t even pass train n’ camp
    Good wordplay, Tic’ll MeElmo (Tickle me Elmo). There’s a knee for this, peoples elbow.

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Quote Originally Posted by For Battling View Post
    Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
    So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
    lol this was funny.. But the actual punch wasn't stinging enough. Good flow tho
    That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
    Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
    eh... Its effective but kinda dense.
    7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
    Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
    lol wtf small dick? Na not feeling this here
    Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
    One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
    .....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
    DIA's overly obese puns are old now.. So ok
    took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
    You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
    closure could have been effectively nice... But that donkey King concept was done before any microwave beeps..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phalanx View Post
    Lmao @ You saying more than enough time when your the reason this was extended. My shits beeen done.

    @For Battling aka fern





    This rapid fire?
    Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
    Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
    ok ok.. This was cool. Got some aggression in here

    Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
    This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
    I see the wordplay here. Just wasn't feeling the actual punch entirely
    Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
    If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
    eh this bar didn't rhyme hence left the Flow pouring in a sewer drain
    Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
    You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
    cool cool. This was definitely a better sting
    This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
    I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
    I'm kinda 50/50 herr because you already used an Axel reference that didn't really hit as much. Nice flow though

    Ok I'm judging the rest of this by the better flow, consistency and swag performance.

    Flow: tie... Because I felt both had their own unique approach that I enjoyed individually.

    Consistency: I have Phalanx with this category. Mostly because he kept swinging even if some were a few stumbles.

    Punches: Phalanx , once again came with some fire. Not enough to burn a building down. Just a few flames to kindle.

    Swag: this was another tough one to decide on... But I did like For battling style a bit. Don't get me wrong his delivery wasn't as top notch. But I felt some spark within. He barely edged this category.

    Overall: I have Phalanx as the winner. Nice battle guys. I enjoyed the flow from both a lot.
    The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (Swag N Flow)

    Quote Originally Posted by For Battling View Post

    Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
    So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
    Aight
    That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
    Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
    Meh
    7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
    Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
    Ok
    Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
    One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
    .....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
    Nah. Shoulda left it at cat tears
    took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
    You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
    Ok


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    Quote Originally Posted by Phalanx View Post
    Lmao @ You saying more than enough time when your the reason this was extended. My shits beeen done.

    @For Battling aka fern





    This rapid fire?
    Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
    Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
    Eh
    Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
    This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
    Okay
    Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
    If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
    What
    Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
    You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
    Ok
    This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
    I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
    What
    Tf kinda swag and flow battle was this

    I guess For Battling gets it

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (S&F) - Open For Votes

    Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
    So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
    ^ok, setup failed tho
    That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
    Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
    ^Cool multis, flat punch
    7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
    Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
    ^this was just ok, a bit wordy
    Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
    One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
    .....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
    ^hated the pussy cat line, found it hard to follow the rhyme toward the Dia bar, but I kno u dislike him so I guess this was a bit personal
    took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
    You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
    ^the punch evaded the setup and diminished in sting.

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    Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
    Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
    ^this was a dope concept, but the setup was a bit too stretched to give it the full affect.
    Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
    This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
    ^This was sick.. nice from start to finish
    Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
    If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
    ^didn't get it, didn't bother googlin, shouldn't have to, this is a miss.
    Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
    You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
    ^good one!
    This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
    I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
    ^fail.. unh un



    So yea, this battle was supposed to be self glory or hype right? I really didn't catch too many lines in here like that. Still, an interesting read and actually I wasn't gonna vote because I much prefer battles to SnF matches, however this one was a battle forsure nothing much self glorifying about it.

    Both opponents approached with good concepts but the difference here was delivery and impact. FB led the charge with a verse that almost captured that Swag and Flow feel , but lost points in terms of punches that fell off the mark and wording that seemed too 'playful'> if thats the right word, with lines like the multi one which was cool but generic and unimpactful in battle terms. His opponent however, I dont know if it was from being insulted about not showing after he allowed the extension, or whatever, but Phalanx brought some heat in terms of connections, personalization, and flow. He outclassed his opponent in this one atleast 3 to 1, but I'd venture so far as to say this was practically a shut out

    V/Phalanx fairly easily
    Last edited by Networth; December 4th, 2018 at 11:12 AM


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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (S&F) - Open For Votes

    Camel toe

    Vs

    Mine scheme
    Fern gully
    Final 4

    This battle had dope flow but no swag lol
    I thought this was 1-sided and that side is...

    V- phal

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (S&F) - Open For Votes

    For Battling
    Fuck this fagit bro. I ride thru ur city like the Alamo
    So now ya know, if ur girl tries me then ima bump on her pussy like a camel toe
    ^^Not for me camel toes don't bump pussy

    That’s FACTS nigga. “Phalanx? Who tf is that nigga?” A wack nigga
    Get clapped nigga, or I’m steppin on crack to break her back nigga
    ^^No sir

    7 shots. I left one go, that means there’s one left. I’ve got guns, tecs.
    Small dick, but you’ll be the one who’s hung next. Then forget about it like drunk sex
    ^^A lot going on here. Not sure how it all comes together

    Let me guess. You life with your mom, 39 y/o and have a stubble for a beard
    One word, that’s weird. I’ll make this pussy cry - call it cat tears....
    .....OR PUT EM IN A DIA SHIRT - NOW HE’S A FAT QUEER
    ^^Weird & beard? Nah... that's machine gun kelly-ish. And his line was wack

    took ur mom to your daughters prom. Music teacher says she don’t belong
    You said nope she’s wrong...bitch I’m here to give her d’s nuts like donkey Kong
    ^^Hmmmmm

    Phalanx
    Have ya upolstery blood-ied! Lift em off his feet w/ the ottoman! Grab the toaster n buck heat!
    Homie just trust me, furniture funeral...Get buried w/ the sofa n' love seat..
    ^^Yeah. Did get the hyphen between blood-ied

    Dig "For material"? Nah I just think his is lame when I read it...
    This battles "mine ore"; I'll swing pick axes til all his veins are depleted!
    ^^Yes siiiir

    Gotta crazy demeanor, Did I mention that I carry knives?
    If they say Fern gully....they meant that your the fairy type!
    ^^I got it. Fern Gully is old school

    Ayo it's time for war! AR-15 hitting ya spinal cord..
    You won't make it passed this semi-- This'll be ya final, For!
    ^^Yes indeed

    This is red rum reversed, no Project Pat- You catch " a L flipped off top" like a Do
    I'm choppin' witta logger's axe, I'll just give you 10-4...Now go ahead and Roger that!
    ^^Roger that!


    VOTE -> Phalanx punches were cleaner. Execution better

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    Re: For Battling vs. Phalanx (S&F) - Open For Votes

    For Battling -

    Pretty dope verse in a way. Decent wording with good ideas sprinkled around making for a decent all-around verse. The last line was a personal favorite of mine. Overall - Decent verse.

    Phalanx -

    I don't know, I've read better from you in ways. This was a decent verse, but could be better in ways. I suppose this was a decent verse, nice one player. Was it enough? Maybe not here though..

    Overall - Decent battle, but for the better verse I'm going for For Battling..

    V/ For Battling

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