Week 11: XRey 0-2 vs. Jason Voorhees 1-6 - Jason Voorhees WINS

[Meth]

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@Jason Voorhees @XRey

[Jason Voorhees]

Yuh

[XRey]

Check

[Jason Voorhees]

I was gone play on XRey name every line, but fuck it.

With these campaigns.. i get it u goin for the win. Got a select for dude
If i vote w.my tool. No waitin to get elected, cuz Biden bullets elected u
u no threat fool. Punches give splniters, but these shots will hit u quicker
wont take Xrey to see this kidney a body part after i knock out his liver
See you aint got money to lick her, and u lame, so its hard to get a dish
ya girl said lesbian a friendship, cuz she dont like no bones in her fish..
I'll split ya Applejack! After i flake out... I start to snap, crackle, n pop
u real stop! cuz once this gun start raisin.. we'll cereal niggaz in a box!
U a op.. n i wont need No Vaseline once this NWA sense the disrespect
point is... Eazy'ly u'll be the sickest rapper.. on RB.. once I Aid ya death

[XRey]

I flip ur disgusting face over faster than ur girl’s mood-on-a-date…
Cause when she saw behind ur mask, she left the food-on-her-plate.

Imma bring ‘pain-back’ put a beat on this bar N’ put the “track” far up ur but crack,
Next thing u know ur getting raped by an entire “train-wreck”.

Cock in hand u spray-ya-jizz, but a bitch checks ur tiny dick she’s like... u play-with-this?
So u can try n’ lay-a-diss but a damn rock band will forever be your fa-vorite-kiss…

Deliver the shiver N’ eat out ur liver, … got ur girl in… perhaps-schock?
Expression fucked up but the ducktape got her muted like a caps-lock.

U a killer?
Flip ya sweater so u can see-the-hood, hand me the strap imma beat-this-dude
Medusa style u may ice some bitches… Cuz they turn cold if they see-u-nude.

[Smog]

With these campaigns.. i get it u goin for the win. Got a select for dude
If i vote w.my tool. No waitin to get elected, cuz Biden bullets elected u

Played wp..

u no threat fool. Punches give splniters, but these shots will hit u quicker
wont take Xrey to see this kidney a body part after i knock out his liver

Another played wp.. but the play off his name helped

See you aint got money to lick her, and u lame, so its hard to get a dish
ya girl said lesbian a friendship, cuz she dont like no bones in her fish..

TBH I've never seen this play.. cool bar

I'll split ya Applejack! After i flake out... I start to snap, crackle, n pop
u real stop! cuz once this gun start raisin.. we'll cereal niggaz in a box!

Ehh.. cool scheme but some forced

U a op.. n i wont need No Vaseline once this NWA sense the disrespect
point is... Eazy'ly u'll be the sickest rapper.. on RB.. once I Aid ya death

Played

Vs..


I flip ur disgusting face over faster than ur girl’s mood-on-a-date…
Cause when she saw behind ur mask, she left the food-on-her-plate.

Lol. Ok


Imma bring ‘pain-back’ put a beat on this bar N’ put the “track” far up ur but crack,
Next thing u know ur getting raped by an entire “train-wreck”.

Doesn't even rhyme

Cock in hand u spray-ya-jizz, but a bitch checks ur tiny dick she’s like... u play-with-this?
So u can try n’ lay-a-diss but a damn rock band will forever be your fa-vorite-kiss…

Lmao... ooooook

Deliver the shiver N’ eat out ur liver, … got ur girl in… perhaps-schock?
Expression fucked up but the ducktape got her muted like a caps-lock.

Ehh


U a killer?
Flip ya sweater so u can see-the-hood, hand me the strap imma beat-this-dude
Medusa style u may ice some bitches… Cuz they turn cold if they see-u-nude.
Nah


Actually closer than I expected.. jv had mad played shit but I fucked wit a couple joints.. X-ray had two also but I felt JV two hits were harder so He edges this..


JV

[R!canTheoryz]

See you aint got money to lick her, and u lame, so its hard to get a dish
ya girl said lesbian a friendship, cuz she dont like no bones in her fish..


Vs


Cock in hand u spray-ya-jizz, but a bitch checks ur tiny dick she’s like... u play-with-this?
So u can try n’ lay-a-diss but a damn rock band will forever be your fa-vorite-kiss…


Overall vote - I got this equal here in quotes both has great concepts
Just bad execution I got JV with the lighter of a mess here decent battle guys.

[GrimmReaperZ]

this is a bad battle for several reasons....
Jason... those words flips don't work... cereal/ see real....biden/ by then....kidney/kid needs...lesbian/lets be in. u see the pattern? theyre lazy and don't sound the way u are tryin to make em

...Xrey, some folks are gonna clown the use of dashes but I wont think that should be a factor in rating your verse... the constant bad set ups, "pause" moments should...


bar for bar... Xrey wins this.... slightly....

keep elevating to both

[hello there]

I was gone play on XRey name every line, but fuck it.
This gets annoying fast. See Grimm's verses.
With these campaigns.. i get it u goin for the win. Got a select for dude
If i vote w.my tool. No waitin to get elected, cuz Biden bullets elected u
Stretch. Good attempt.
u no threat fool. Punches give splniters, but these shots will hit u quicker
wont take Xrey to see this kidney a body part after i knock out his liver
Kid kneed.
See you aint got money to lick her, and u lame, so its hard to get a dish
ya girl said lesbian a friendship, cuz she dont like no bones in her fish..
This is fucking cool. I like this a lot.
I'll split ya Applejack! After i flake out... I start to snap, crackle, n pop
u real stop! cuz once this gun start raisin.. we'll cereal niggaz in a box!
Cereal killers woulda been fucking fire here. See real is rough.
U a op.. n i wont need No Vaseline once this NWA sense the disrespect
point is... Eazy'ly u'll be the sickest rapper.. on RB.. once I Aid ya death
Nah

So far my favorite verse of the week. Had two hot bars here

I flip ur disgusting face over faster than ur girl’s mood-on-a-date…
Cause when she saw behind ur mask, she left the food-on-her-plate.
No thanks
Imma bring ‘pain-back’ put a beat on this bar N’ put the “track” far up ur but crack,
Next thing u know ur getting raped by an entire “train-wreck”.
No punch here
Cock in hand u spray-ya-jizz, but a bitch checks ur tiny dick she’s like... u play-with-this?
So u can try n’ lay-a-diss but a damn rock band will forever be your fa-vorite-kiss…
Nah. You gotta focus on the punches, here. The inners get you ZERO bonus points on this site -- go check out some past contenders matches where the end rhymes were 1 fucking syllable.
Deliver the shiver N’ eat out ur liver, … got ur girl in… perhaps-schock?
Expression fucked up but the ducktape got her muted like a caps-lock.
Not what caps lock does
U a killer?
Flip ya sweater so u can see-the-hood, hand me the strap imma beat-this-dude
Medusa style u may ice some bitches… Cuz they turn cold if they see-u-nude.
No thanks

VOTE Jason

[plethora]

Jason had better wording and concepts. If xrey simplifies wordplay he'll be alright.



V/jason

[XRey]

@High And Drunk , fucking lol at ur vote.

[hello there]

@High And Drunk , fucking lol at ur vote.

You man as opposed to your detailed, insightful votes?

[Plaz]

this was pretty even, props to both writers. had it equal in both quotables and concepts. i thought the biden line and lesbian line from JV were nice hits. i thought xreys opener and favorite kiss lines was good. it could go either way really, but i think im voting Xrey on this one.

JV definitly had slightly better execution overall no doub,t but i feel like a problem with doing nothing but wordplay is that you gotta make sure it's super clean every line, and i felt that everything except the 2 i quoted were just a little forced slightly. xrey i thought the train wreck line was pretty bad lol, and outside of that and your 2 quotables everything else was decent attempt-ish, but i think you just barely nicked this.

[XRey]

4-2 and in need of more votes.

[Amen]

JV wins.