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    Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - Smog WINS

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    Check, 12... I'll either drop Wednesday or Friday,

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    Ext? Kinda having a rough night rn

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    No prob duke.. I'm ready whenever just hit me uo

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    I bet..
    ... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
    Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
    3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
    I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
    I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
    I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
    U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
    Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
    So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
    Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
    N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
    Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
    Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
    Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
    .9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
    U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
    That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
    Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
    I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
    U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
    Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
    Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
    Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
    Last edited by YG; November 3rd, 2018 at 11:20 PM

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - VOTE NOW

    . U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
    Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
    ^dope
    3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
    I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
    ^nah
    I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
    I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
    ^lol
    U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
    Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
    ^ok
    So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
    Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
    ^ok
    N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
    Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
    ^damn lol

    Vs.

    Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
    Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
    ^lol nice tie-ins
    Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
    .9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
    ^nice
    U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
    That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
    ^nah. Maybe if u said Bloka instead
    Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
    I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
    ^Lol but played
    U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
    Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
    ^might of seen that wp b4 but cool bar
    Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
    Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
    ^lol ok bar



    Best verse I've seen from jit, but I liked smogs personal angles


    V/smog

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    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    . U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
    Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
    ^dope
    3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
    I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
    ^nah
    I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
    I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
    ^lol
    U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
    Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
    ^ok
    So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
    Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
    ^ok
    N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
    Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
    ^damn lol

    Vs.

    Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
    Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
    ^lol nice tie-ins
    Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
    .9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
    ^nice
    U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
    That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
    ^cool bar.
    Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
    I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
    ^Lol but played
    U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
    Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
    ^might of seen that wp b4 but cool bar
    Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
    Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
    ^lol ok bar



    Best verse I've seen from jit, but I liked smogs personal angles


    V/smog



    Had to edit my vote. I reread the mega blok line and it was good. Vote still stands tho..

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - VOTE NOW

    Good battle some solid punches from both sided. Believe smog came with the harder hits today, had the better flow in his verse too. Overall not alot between the two imo but my vote goes to smog.

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - VOTE NOW

    I dont think smog had any misses. pretty dope verse tbh. the lethargic bar would be your lightest but other than that nice verse. This was one of Dills better verses. very entertaining. i think loose screw and mega blok were a miss thoiugh. everything else was pretty decent.

    v. smog...more personal and consistent

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3

    Quote Originally Posted by Smog View Post
    I bet..
    ... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
    Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
    I really don't like this. I don't feel like it's clever.

    3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
    I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
    Eh. This is kind of clever but doesn't really feel like anything.

    I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
    I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
    I don't love this. I don't know if I get it -- feel free to PM me. Jit I get. Ters. Ers. ? I get Jitters and creeps. PM me.

    U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
    Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
    Idk man.. The whole setup is a throw away. And it's such a low impact gun bar. Like, it doesn't say anything new or say an old thing in an interesting new way.

    So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
    Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
    Eh. I like the concept but I feel the execution is lazy. instead of setting up construction site you just said it. This is my fave bar so far though.

    N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
    Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
    I mean... people read all his shit. This is a contenders battle
    Honestly? I know before I even look at the votes that people are gonna love his verse. Smog, I don't hate you. I obviously respect what you do. But I literally feel like this verse is the quintessential RB verse --- says nothing new, nothing creative. But because people "get" every punch immediately, they love it. I don't think it was super personal. I don't think it was super creative. But I do think this verse is gonna win the battle, even without seeing JD's. It is just the RB verse of all RB verses.

    Quote Originally Posted by Jit View Post
    Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
    Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
    I don't love this.

    Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
    .9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
    Don't love this. The concept is better than this execution. Two x's. Crossed lines. Etc.

    U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
    That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
    This was weak. There really isn't a punchline here. It's not concise and the image isn't strong.

    Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
    I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
    I don't like punches like this. It's not that interesting. It's not personal. It's just kinda generic.

    U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
    Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
    Lazy punches the whole time man.

    Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
    Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
    No thanks

    VOTE Smog. Honestly this was a disappointing battle, but I bet the peepers here are gonna love it. Everything was played. None of the concepts were creatively executed. All of the images and most punches were generic. And I didn't get a feeling like "oh that's clever" on any of the bars.

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - VOTE NOW

    I bet..
    ... U don't care to fly, prolly rock timbs but wouldn't dare to hike
    Cuz every time u reach the top... u panic n choke like ur FUCKIN scared of heights
    good
    3 contenders w/4 wins??? 2 no shows, n the other 2 made me think less of u
    I mean c'mon dawg u bodied Lethargic.. n obviously Jem was too Lazy to execute
    cmon bro i aint researching this
    I'd do UR style n fuck ya bitch, but yo that pussys taken 60 + D's
    I mean damn Jitters is so fuckin scary it literally gives me the creeps
    ha, ok
    U in the gym hittin the bag? In this day n age life's what that'll cost this faggot
    Cuz I'll use the Stick n Move on.. u won't live to see another boxin practice
    not bad
    So get outta line n I'll set u straight, w/ crazy fucks who'll dump n air tools
    Construction zone, if u don't stay in ur lane then u'll run into a bunch of barrels
    nice!
    N Btw props on the 1-2 mag, u went in duke, it was hype
    Cool read.... n u should feel good peeps r FINALLY tunin into shit u write
    not bad



    Ur taste in women is awful, the dyke u w/ controls u and it’s whack G
    Dunno why u Let ‘er man... the bitch looks more like a Duck than my opponent last week
    good
    Chrome on ya in the early morning, u’ll fall asleep tremblin bad fag
    .9’s out while u Rising, Son... the blood on ur white tee will resemble that flag
    ok
    U failed to scoop a shorty at the bar, w/ the hoes u make no noise
    That 10 hit u with such a Mega Blok it reminded me of kids throwing those toys
    alright not bad
    Been goin thru it lately, ya girl felt bad & got the pipe mad quick
    I thought I was a ‘Loose Screw’ til I spent the night with that bitch
    funny!
    U travel in style? Nah, I’ll come thru swingin blades that leave u toe tagged
    Cuz u better watch what u say Tumi before I put ur severed head in one of those bags
    not bad
    Like I said dawg ya pickup game strugglin, this lame flossin on hoes?
    Sleep, got hit w/ sucha cold shoulder I thought the bitch was Dwayne Johnson in snow
    ha, ok

    smog, i thought construction zone line was dope, i think it might be the line of the battle, everything else i felt you both were neck and neck. jit, this probably wasn't your best week but you still put up a good fight. another close one so props to both, giving it to smog.

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    Re: Week 11 Contenders: Smog 2-0 vs. J. Dill 4-3 - VOTE NOW

    Smog wins

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