Week 10: XRey 0-1 vs. High and Drunk 2-5 stupid faggot wins

[Meth]

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@XRey
@High And Drunk

[hello there]

Check.

[hello there]

Ext plz.

X razor hasn't checked in yet.

So I figure I'll give us both another day.

10 bars when you're ready, homie.

ext granted - meth

[hello there]

@XRey --- feel free to drop tomorrow homie. I gotta do bars tonight so @Meth doesn't falsely DQ me, again..







I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!

Get your teeth crushed like packing bubbles when I rip..
If X games, the whole stands clappin' till you flip..!!

Nina sing on this bitch. I'm the king of this shit, dummy..
Mask up the whole court till they shootin' for prize money..!!

I put X on paper? My boys dig holes, yard after yard..
They'll split your sister for a few bucks like a birthday card..!!

Got a crazy team, laser beams, flares -- the whole nine..
Three shots center mass. Have you fuckin' prayin' the whole time..!!









Good luck.

[XRey]

Checking in and dropping in time.

Ur “broke” ass can put all ur “weight” on this bar, u’ll still fail to give me a “pound”.
Put you to sleep as I slice u with ease, since u were “bred” to “loaf” around.

Got you carved up son, for every letter of my verse u’ll live-with-a-stitch.
Not killin’ this snitch, so u can see how ya girl “turns” to me when I Pivot-ya-Bitch.

Beat me?
You can watch Star Wars number 4 all day and still not see-hope…
High-N-Drunk, you can fail a piss test right now but u still won’t be-dope.

Flip you like a channel, since I make this “cunt-roll” like a fucking remote.
N the only way you can be close to the best is with your dick in a GOAT.

This clown ain’t lying when he says his punches are thriller since they really are ghost.
Hits are never seen in his post, I must be a “buster” the way I forcefeed him a roast.

[Greedy]

HaD:
Yup. U coulda done a lot more w this. I like the concept here. But i hate the way u executed it.
Xgames- same. This nameplay falls flat for me
Center mass- this was Ok

Vs

X-ray:
opener- miss. The bred to loaf angle was ok. But ur set up had nothing to do with it. This wasn't very cohesive
Pivot- again the "turn/pivot" play was decent but thr rest of the bar was weak. Good multis tho. Pts for that.


Vote high

Both had some ok concept ideas, its just the execution was not so good.
Also xrey u had a bit of played material which hurt ur overall drop.
High, u got good multis imo but u gotta sharpen up that wording

[plethora]

No real quotables in this battle, just alot of underdeveloped attempts that need to be polished. Both guys have potential with practice.


V/ high and drunk for better wording

[Ryno]

piss test vs center mass. thats what i liked from both. nothing really eye catching from either tbh. I was feeling HD's material alil bit more though. Somewhat better attempts.

v.High and Drunk

[King]

I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!
Get your teeth crushed like packing bubbles when I rip..
If X games, the whole stands clappin' till you flip..!!

dramatic improvement on your wording. these were the best of the verse i think, still not the hardest hitting but much better than past verses.


vs


Ur “broke” ass can put all ur “weight” on this bar, u’ll still fail to give me a “pound”.
Put you to sleep as I slice u with ease, since u were “bred” to “loaf” around.

this was the best attempt imo. i dont think anything really hit but it was a step up from ur last one. u dont need the quotations, and simplify ur set ups a little, just focus on a good rhyme keeping it relevant.



vote H&D

[hello there]

@King @BashEmUP @plethora if any of you guys feel like takin' some time to explain how you'd upgrade / improve the lines via PM or something, I'm happy to find a way to make it worth it.

... For anyone who reads this, I don't mean trading votes. I mean like buying a movie ticket or something.

[R!canTheoryz]

I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!

Vs


nothing.

V/ High n Drunk His Misses were less of a issue here
X had some cool set ups bad wording then good punch bad set ups
So I got High n drunk edgeing this

[YG]

I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!
I dig it
Get your teeth crushed like packing bubbles when I rip..
If X games, the whole stands clappin' till you flip..!!
Cool
Nina sing on this bitch. I'm the king of this shit, dummy..
Mask up the whole court till they shootin' for prize money..!!
Not as strong imo
I put X on paper? My boys dig holes, yard after yard..
They'll split your sister for a few bucks like a birthday card..!!
Funny but wording is a lil off imo
Got a crazy team, laser beams, flares -- the whole nine..
Three shots center mass. Have you fuckin' prayin' the whole time..!!
Ok

Checking in and dropping in time.

Ur “broke” ass can put all ur “weight” on this bar, u’ll still fail to give me a “pound”.
Put you to sleep as I slice u with ease, since u were “bred” to “loaf” around.
Not bad
Got you carved up son, for every letter of my verse u’ll live-with-a-stitch.
Not killin’ this snitch, so u can see how ya girl “turns” to me when I Pivot-ya-Bitch.
Cool
Beat me?
You can watch Star Wars number 4 all day and still not see-hope…
High-N-Drunk, you can fail a piss test right now but u still won’t be-dope.
Tight
Flip you like a channel, since I make this “cunt-roll” like a fucking remote.
N the only way you can be close to the best is with your dick in a GOAT.
Ok
This clown ain’t lying when he says his punches are thriller since they really are ghost.
Hits are never seen in his post, I must be a “buster” the way I forcefeed him a roast.

Ok

Got Rey

- - - Updated - - -

I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!
I dig it
Get your teeth crushed like packing bubbles when I rip..
If X games, the whole stands clappin' till you flip..!!
Cool
Nina sing on this bitch. I'm the king of this shit, dummy..
Mask up the whole court till they shootin' for prize money..!!
Not as strong imo
I put X on paper? My boys dig holes, yard after yard..
They'll split your sister for a few bucks like a birthday card..!!
Funny but wording is a lil off imo
Got a crazy team, laser beams, flares -- the whole nine..
Three shots center mass. Have you fuckin' prayin' the whole time..!!
Ok

Checking in and dropping in time.

Ur “broke” ass can put all ur “weight” on this bar, u’ll still fail to give me a “pound”.
Put you to sleep as I slice u with ease, since u were “bred” to “loaf” around.
Cool
Got you carved up son, for every letter of my verse u’ll live-with-a-stitch.
Not killin’ this snitch, so u can see how ya girl “turns” to me when I Pivot-ya-Bitch.
Cool
Beat me?
You can watch Star Wars number 4 all day and still not see-hope…
High-N-Drunk, you can fail a piss test right now but u still won’t be-dope.
Cool
Flip you like a channel, since I make this “cunt-roll” like a fucking remote.
N the only way you can be close to the best is with your dick in a GOAT.
Weaker than the other ones
This clown ain’t lying when he says his punches are thriller since they really are ghost.
Hits are never seen in his post, I must be a “buster” the way I forcefeed him a roast.
Ok

Got Rey here

[JEM.]

I put lines on X-Rey, steel & scalpels gon' hit 'em..
We cross lines? Fire rains like airplane collisions..!!
Not bad.

Get your teeth crushed like packing bubbles when I rip..
If X games, the whole stands clappin' till you flip..!!
I fuck with this.

Nina sing on this bitch. I'm the king of this shit, dummy..
Mask up the whole court till they shootin' for prize money..!!
Eh.


I put X on paper? My boys dig holes, yard after yard..
They'll split your sister for a few bucks like a birthday card..!!
Ok.

Got a crazy team, laser beams, flares -- the whole nine..
Three shots center mass. Have you fuckin' prayin' the whole time..!!
Not feeling… I feel like this is the 2/3 center mass bar I’ve read in the last couple of weeks?

Overall - feeling the adjusted style. I’m into concise lines. Felt smother than your other drops.

Ur “broke” ass can put all ur “weight” on this bar, u’ll still fail to give me a “pound”.
Put you to sleep as I slice u with ease, since u were “bred” to “loaf” around.
no.

Got you carved up son, for every letter of my verse u’ll live-with-a-stitch.
Not killin’ this snitch, so u can see how ya girl “turns” to me when I Pivot-ya-Bitch.
eh.

Beat me?
You can watch Star Wars number 4 all day and still not see-hope…
High-N-Drunk, you can fail a piss test right now but u still won’t be-dope.
No.

Flip you like a channel, since I make this “cunt-roll” like a fucking remote.
N the only way you can be close to the best is with your dick in a GOAT.
No.

This clown ain’t lying when he says his punches are thriller since they really are ghost.
Hits are never seen in his post, I must be a “buster” the way I forcefeed him a roast.
No.


HD easy here.