Week 10: Smog 1-0 vs. R!canTheoryz 1-0 smog wins

[Meth]

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@R!canTheoryz @Smog

[Smog]

Check,,, 10

[R!canTheoryz]

10 is fine .

[R!canTheoryz]

Small ext. I’ll post when I get out work

[Smog]

Listen close

I got my diploma w/straight D's, instead of learnin I'd rather fuck a slut n get high
^Idiot, but battlin u reminds me of high school.. all I need is juuust enuff to get by
U Rey n Drunk had Plaz beating me, cool, cuz yall kept it close in the end, b
Ironically I barley won 4-3.. since only the ^^WACKEST FAGGOTS voted against me
U was raised in streets? Me too, but I made it n u followed the ways of ur peeps
S'why u Olive Garden ur penny jars..hopin 1 day to afford a DECENT place to go eat
^ Reason ya girls jockin me, a lil dick n no doe has the thot thinkin u a mess
So I showed her my hung area.. then fucked her at the hot springs in Budapest
Now this faggot is threatenin, Tellin The World ur suicidal w/a gat in possession
So when my dawgz kill u it ain't a conspiracy, Theory.. EVERY1 KNOWS u battle depression

[Meth]

@R!canTheoryz

[R!canTheoryz]

@Meth @Smog

Sorry on the Delay Was busy with Work if y’all let it rock cool
If Not I totally Understand Fellas.

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Time to clown this guy. Ur 1-0 cuz niggas voted for you I guess hes down to ride,
Ironic Last Week he struggled with Plaz ment So Bad u barely beat HIM to Qualify.
Im glad u slow. Everything I Puff exotic Don’t Dap Me U Hoe, I’m a clear Winner ur just Strategy Broke,
Cuz I’ll Have Smog Thrown In The Air Like it’s Factory Smoke .
Im Back Better than average never let the Time Plummit,
You’ve been struggling to throw a decent punch for 6 years .. & No Wonder ur Record is Barely Over .500
I’ll make it rain in Ya Hood Im there moving. This obviously ain’t a fair Shooting
Cuz I’ll come & leave Smog scattered Across the City Like Bad Air Pollution.
Dude is Bulk. Stop speaking ur bright ideas you’l get cut for the right cult.
Im just showing you ‘ watts it like to get ur throat sliced open’ with a broken light bulb.

[XRey]

Rican had some solid nameplays, prob. Not the most original once since yea... they r rly out there. Anyway they were solid. I liked ur .500 bar,

Smog I liked the first part better, tje wackest dudes bar was nice, thx for the mention. Last 2 bars were misses IMO, felt like they were reaching 2 much.

Vote Rican for the overall better quality, which he did take his time for...

[hello there]

Sorry for the shit voting this week, boys. Driving all day like my job is being @Barcotic 's dad.

Listen close

I got my diploma w/straight D's, instead of learnin I'd rather fuck a slut n get high
^Idiot, but battlin u reminds me of high school.. all I need is juuust enuff to get by
... I don't really get this. Or like it much. Like I GET it. I just don't get why you like it.

U Rey n Drunk had Plaz beating me, cool, cuz yall kept it close in the end, b
Ironically I barley won 4-3.. since only the ^^WACKEST FAGGOTS voted against me
I mean. I can't really be partial on this bar, can I? So I read it but swapped in someone else's name. And I still think the punch sucks.

U was raised in streets? Me too, but I made it n u followed the ways of ur peeps
S'why u Olive Garden ur penny jars..hopin 1 day to afford a DECENT place to go eat
No dude. Olive Garden is a super strong reach. And the punch just has bad wording.

^ Reason ya girls jockin me, a lil dick n no doe has the thot thinkin u a mess
So I showed her my hung area.. then fucked her at the hot springs in Budapest
I mean, no. This is like "places I've never been for 100, Alex." There's no punch here. DON'T YOU EVEN TRY TO TELL ME THAT WAS A HUNGARY WORDPLAY YOU SCRUB BITCH.

Now this faggot is threatenin, Tellin The World ur suicidal w/a gat in possession
So when my dawgz kill u it ain't a conspiracy, Theory.. EVERY1 KNOWS u battle depression
This is kind of a cool personal.

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@Meth @Smog

Sorry on the Delay Was busy with Work if y’all let it rock cool
If Not I totally Understand Fellas.

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Time to clown this guy. Ur 1-0 cuz niggas voted for you I guess hes down to ride,
Ironic Last Week he struggled with Plaz ment So Bad u barely beat HIM to Qualify.
This is pretty clean. It doesn't land really hard but it's a clean bar.

Im glad u slow. Everything I Puff exotic Don’t Dap Me U Hoe, I’m a clear Winner ur just Strategy Broke,
Cuz I’ll Have Smog Thrown In The Air Like it’s Factory Smoke .
I feel like the first line could have been any line.

Im Back Better than average never let the Time Plummit,
You’ve been struggling to throw a decent punch for 6 years .. & No Wonder ur Record is Barely Over .500
Eh

I’ll make it rain in Ya Hood Im there moving. This obviously ain’t a fair Shooting
Cuz I’ll come & leave Smog scattered Across the City Like Bad Air Pollution.
2nd of the same punch in one verse.

Dude is Bulk. Stop speaking ur bright ideas you’l get cut for the right cult.
Im just showing you ‘ watts it like to get ur throat sliced open’ with a broken light bulb.
Ehhh

1ish

VOTE Theory, simply because the rest of his stuff was better than Smogs.

[Ryno]

Hard to choose this week. Wasnt a fan of Smogs material this week. Rican had a lot of played personals and bad wording. Im leaning towards smog. I think his verse as a whole was put together better even though i wasnt diggin all his concepts.

v.smog

[YG]

Listen close

I got my diploma w/straight D's, instead of learnin I'd rather fuck a slut n get high
^Idiot, but battlin u reminds me of high school.. all I need is juuust enuff to get by
I laughed at this. Cool bar. I dig this
U Rey n Drunk had Plaz beating me, cool, cuz yall kept it close in the end, b
Ironically I barley won 4-3.. since only the ^^WACKEST FAGGOTS voted against me
More of a diss towards them imo. Bruh flexin lol
U was raised in streets? Me too, but I made it n u followed the ways of ur peeps
S'why u Olive Garden ur penny jars..hopin 1 day to afford a DECENT place to go eat
Lolol
^ Reason ya girls jockin me, a lil dick n no doe has the thot thinkin u a mess
So I showed her my hung area.. then fucked her at the hot springs in Budapest
Weaker but decent, creative
Now this faggot is threatenin, Tellin The World ur suicidal w/a gat in possession
So when my dawgz kill u it ain't a conspiracy, Theory.. EVERY1 KNOWS u battle depression
Eh kinda weak for a closer

Time to clown this guy. Ur 1-0 cuz niggas voted for you I guess hes down to ride,
Ironic Last Week he struggled with Plaz ment So Bad u barely beat HIM to Qualify.
Not feeling tbh
Im glad u slow. Everything I Puff exotic Don’t Dap Me U Hoe, I’m a clear Winner ur just Strategy Broke,
Cuz I’ll Have Smog Thrown In The Air Like it’s Factory Smoke .
Too simple
Im Back Better than average never let the Time Plummit,
You’ve been struggling to throw a decent punch for 6 years .. & No Wonder ur Record is Barely Over .500
Nahh
I’ll make it rain in Ya Hood Im there moving. This obviously ain’t a fair Shooting
Cuz I’ll come & leave Smog scattered Across the City Like Bad Air Pollution.
Too simple and u just used this concept 2 bars ago lol
Dude is Bulk. Stop speaking ur bright ideas you’l get cut for the right cult.
Im just showing you ‘ watts it like to get ur throat sliced open’ with a broken light bulb.
No
I swear this was used sometime recently too lol

Got Smog easily

[JEM.]

I got my diploma w/straight D's, instead of learnin I'd rather fuck a slut n get high
^Idiot, but battlin u reminds me of high school.. all I need is juuust enuff to get by
Lol. Dope.


U Rey n Drunk had Plaz beating me, cool, cuz yall kept it close in the end, b
Ironically I barley won 4-3.. since only the ^^WACKEST FAGGOTS voted against me
Nice personal.

U was raised in streets? Me too, but I made it n u followed the ways of ur peeps
S'why u Olive Garden ur penny jars..hopin 1 day to afford a DECENT place to go eat
lol. Ok.

^ Reason ya girls jockin me, a lil dick n no doe has the thot thinkin u a mess
So I showed her my hung area.. then fucked her at the hot springs in Budapest
Funny, stretch, kinda… but creative.

Now this faggot is threatenin, Tellin The World ur suicidal w/a gat in possession
So when my dawgz kill u it ain't a conspiracy, Theory.. EVERY1 KNOWS u battle depression
Good.



Time to clown this guy. Ur 1-0 cuz niggas voted for you I guess hes down to ride,
Ironic Last Week he struggled with Plaz ment So Bad u barely beat HIM to Qualify.
No. Stretch to me.

Im glad u slow. Everything I Puff exotic Don’t Dap Me U Hoe, I’m a clear Winner ur just Strategy Broke,
Cuz I’ll Have Smog Thrown In The Air Like it’s Factory Smoke .
No, I mean this has to be the single most overdone concept on him.

Im Back Better than average never let the Time Plummit,
You’ve been struggling to throw a decent punch for 6 years .. & No Wonder ur Record is Barely Over .500
Okay Personal.


I’ll make it rain in Ya Hood Im there moving. This obviously ain’t a fair Shooting
Cuz I’ll come & leave Smog scattered Across the City Like Bad Air Pollution.
I mean, this is so similar to your above bar… So same feedback.

Dude is Bulk. Stop speaking ur bright ideas you’l get cut for the right cult.
Im just showing you ‘ watts it like to get ur throat sliced open’ with a broken light bulb.
Ok.


I actually thought smog came right this week… Funny, clever, and impact. I thought Rican had wording issues, and the concepts were dated (and quite frankly obviously dated…. Doing a SMOG + AIR etc type bar… I mean, you gotta know that’s been done)

v/ Smog … quite handedly.